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"Lady Lazarus's Lover"
# Statistics
Favourites: 384; Deviations: 102; Watchers: 70
Watching: 266; Pageviews: 19176; Comments Made: 1433; Friends: 266
# Comments
Comments: 130
Thankyou so much for the 
Have a great day!
- Jamie
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hey man, thanks for the favorite on "ancient bums".
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easy, killer... what's with the hostility?
i was trying to return the favor of your comment.
i gave friendly suggestions. i wasn't raining on your individuality parade.
i'm lightyears past the point of being vindictive,
so i'll just say that you should consider being more receptive to critique.
otherwise, you should discourage critique on your pieces
instead of choosing the option for "advanced critique couraged."
it seems rather silly to treat a helping hand as a fist.
your rage and excessive use of exclamation marks are pointless.
so lighten up, and make a friend instead of being a jerk.
goddammit.
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Hidden by Owner
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You never know, we might just be in a war with.......... The chicken wing! Our food is going against us.
Yea this puzzle is big, but..... we'll be cool and don't worry about the anger thing. I'm losing it so easily this year. Damn the anger and feelings.
Thanks for being the helping hand, but knowing me, if you wish to give advise to anything of mine in the future please, don't go on about all my errors. It's ok to point out some of them. Like I said I'm still young, that and I don't expect to be perfect with it or anything.
Didn't mean to go all Hilter with you. Sorry.
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thank you for your longtime support, HAHA.
AND NO, to answer your question, i am very underserving in my opinion. but i strive to get better at every stroke. it is an abstract, and people have their opinions, and they will change as well. it will all change. that is all i look forward to.
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still deserving enough to consider it publishable though
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i've come to a conclusion. see, all these books my father has loved for as long as i can remember are now being made into well produced, very cool movies. some of them also happen to be made after the authors have died. so, you have two options. you can write a book that's well appreciated in its time though any movie version will be halfassed or you can wait until you're middleaged and make the movie versions of your favorite books once you have the money and experience to make it well. my point...i think something about how all this inbetween now and middle age does really mean much. but then again, that's my conclusion to pretty much everything.
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and a control tower fly-by to you sir
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Thank you for the watch/fav/words- quite kind of you. I will dive into your gallery as soon as I can.
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Your poetry is something of the freshest I've seen around here. The way you play with style and setup is neat. you deserve a watch for that.
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Do you bitches know this is the most amazing kid ever?
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you know, i get many views and dowloads on my latest pieces, especially [link] , but i get no feedback which is frustrating. i'm on your watchlist so i'll assume you've read it. how about a comment? any kind of feedback would be appreciated. that is why i post my stuff.
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i shall tend to the flock with wolf-hands
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the flock will make you some tea.
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exactly this . its like . choking in the first moment
that you realize you cannot really write poems like you did before . you do not have this. free spirit love and it comes and overwhelms you and shakes you . change of velocity.
then.. you just. learn to breathe differently. and poetry continues. probably .very likely not on paper. but in different . costumes.
but its still poetry. it just gets harder to see it.
I .. dont know. I am glad to know you somehow.
know limitates itself to what I have
collected from those few lines but hey
thanks for caring
nova
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I hate devwatching someone and not (at least) commenting on their work so here's a list of excuses, pick one
:: I was in a rush
:: The dog ate my critique
:: My internet connection went all fucky
:: My bed needed me to sleep in it
:: I am not real
[i'll be back]
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i can make mine sing
all on my own
well, squeak, anyways.
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oh.. I was about to type down the line "hey .. I remember you"
but you dont really .. remember people you
remember certain type of scents or
somekind of
number but..
not people and mostly not those who..
draw with words
you just meet them
slowly slowly rebuilding on here
thank you for the favourites
more.. for letting .. my lines stream over your eyeballs that is.. quite something
nova
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Thanks for the comment and fav. I'm rather fond of Roald Dahl, myself.
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am glad you enjoyed sir. thank you for your continued support.
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you are most welcome sir. thank you for your continued writing.
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hey. thanks so much for adding me, that's awesome. i remember making those comments on your poems a while back. anyway now that you're back, you've been watched back. and i meant to ask you a while ago- what is your user name from?
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i'm getting hungry for some more poetry here, man....
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so glad you liked bookwarm, the favorite is greatly appreciated.
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