jaggy [2002-11-07 16:49:50 +0000 UTC]

Hey! Thank you for the comments, I appreciate your honesty. Yeah, I am guilty of anally rhyming just for the hell of it, I can't help it I just love rhyming things. (even at expense of meaning)
Hehe, artists can be self-indulgement? I guess so, I just don't see myself as an artist yet
Thanks again for comments

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chobman [2002-11-07 09:49:27 +0000 UTC]

thanx for the coments im going to have to go through ur stuff now

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kindred [2002-11-05 21:01:15 +0000 UTC]

Actually, it's a double humbucker near the bridge, and the pearly-gate specials are single coil pick-ups set the normal fender style...but they have an awesome sound, and allow for 5 different variations of tone.

All in all, it's a really nice guitar, but I would rather have a Gibson Les Paul. Although, who wouldn't

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pacman23 [2002-11-05 17:13:15 +0000 UTC]

hey thank you for that awesome comment..
btw, i like the tattooes

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kindred [2002-11-05 03:22:51 +0000 UTC]

The main difference in the loan star besides the colors, is that it uses dual humbucker pickups and two pearly-gate specials.

It makes for a much richer sound then what you normally get out of the regular strat.

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peeter [2002-10-21 18:45:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for criticism, there isn't a lot of it around. I have noticed that my rhymes get awkward sometimes, but I'm not changing anything. They come out as one thought-pattern, and that's the way they'll remain. But still thanks, I'm going to try to take it into account on newer poems...

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diluted-e [2002-10-19 15:35:31 +0000 UTC]

It was me having sex with my girlfriend.... (Thanks for the comment)

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kindred [2002-10-19 00:43:31 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha!

Jackass

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jaggy [2002-10-18 21:29:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your comments. Criticism is good, even then you picked out my favourate line as forced
I like your honesty, most people just say sugary things so they will get comments on their own site. Wheras truthful comments will help me to develop as a writer. I've read the feedback here, it seems you do this a lot. Thanks again.

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incandescence [2002-10-18 11:13:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your comment, but - I don't just randomly place line breaks anywhere. If there's a break, there's a reason.

Also, when reading, you're not supposed to pause after each line unless there is a comma or full stop at the end. Now what was that again...?

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kellymckernan [2002-10-18 00:44:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment! Me? Nope, I wasn't the giddy one, however, Kathie was-- well that's another story. Anyways, thanks again, I appreciate the kind words.

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Hameed [2002-10-17 21:50:15 +0000 UTC]

Cheerz for the comment.

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tracer-bullet [2002-10-17 18:09:46 +0000 UTC]

Heh, I see you've been quite the comment whore of late. It's good to see more interest taken in Prose around DeviantART. Thanks for the vote of confidence as well.

I guess I'll be off to spam your work in return now.

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hoogen [2002-10-16 21:41:33 +0000 UTC]

hey,
thanks for your comment!

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noup [2002-10-16 14:39:41 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the comment on imagining . about it, it was my intention to break up the flow a little, so the reading could be a little more paused and thoughtful
see ya...

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shefb0yrd [2002-10-12 03:34:51 +0000 UTC]

I wanted to say that your little "story" about the "husband mall" was quite amusing. Whether you made it up or not, it kept me smiling the rest of the day. Thank you for sharing.

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ispossible [2002-10-10 16:44:33 +0000 UTC]

hey! thanx 4 ur comment :0
with fractals i can create the entire Universe

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euphoria [2002-10-10 16:31:35 +0000 UTC]

Awww Loren!

Thank you sooo much for the jokes. I laughed my butt off. And please don't ever think you're unnoticed or unconnected here. There are lots of people who know and love ya.

KL

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asht535 [2002-10-09 19:58:47 +0000 UTC]

thanx for the comments on version2 of The Lovers... i'm very glad you liked it

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five [2002-10-07 20:37:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment.

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flexoutlaw [2002-10-05 10:10:35 +0000 UTC]

You have a lot of honesty. That is a rarity around this place. Those not concerned with kissing up or looking good are those who actually end up being the cream of the crop in a place filled with a lot of fluff. Just wanted to say you're a model deviant my friend. Thank you for not being another nameless face in the sea of ignorance.

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dezzyz [2002-10-02 21:39:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you much for your comment on -locked in your box-, you have great work too, love the featured dev. powerful read.

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Hameed [2002-09-23 18:27:05 +0000 UTC]

Cheers for the comments mate, once again you mentioned something in your comments that i was working on already.

Thanks for all your support.

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saintartaud [2002-09-19 23:50:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you for comments on "abernathy." they were much appreciated.

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listener002 [2002-09-19 22:40:00 +0000 UTC]

hey many thx for the comment, greatly appreciated, esp seeing how few do

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primus [2002-09-19 18:32:15 +0000 UTC]

I'll have to get you a * again And everybody has talent, 'cept meh I'm just here to peruse the forums...

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meic2 [2002-09-19 17:20:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for your kind and compassionate comments on WEBMAKER and MIRACLES. Very much appreciated. Incidentally re your journal - don't put yourself down ... ever. There are far too many other people far too ready to do this to far too many other people. Keep faith with yourself and keep working.

Diolch yn fawr [thanks very much - Welsh]

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lower [2002-09-17 21:48:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment. The subject is the mannequin, I added the dog as sort of a side kick. See you around.

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mithrander [2002-09-17 18:27:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your comments on "butterfly", its my first poetry submission, so I really appreciate the possitive comments...

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twilight-ashes [2002-09-17 17:52:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you for your comment! much appreciated!

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primus [2002-09-17 15:35:36 +0000 UTC]

Your face peering out from behind that stuff. All stern. I keep thinking you're going to punch meh...

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apps [2002-09-16 13:59:52 +0000 UTC]

Thx man 4 the comment on "Electric"

I appreciate it a lot!

I 2 think the beveling must go..

But my personal idea is just plain white! No colours!

Thx anyway!!!

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inph3kt1ouz [2002-09-15 04:35:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment!

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primus [2002-09-14 13:10:23 +0000 UTC]

Your icon scares meh

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brude [2002-09-13 02:29:17 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHAHA!! I pity you so much.

Hope your nieve views change sometime soon (maybe read a book or two)

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Hameed [2002-09-11 15:09:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the first comment on [link] mate.

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mountainhawk [2002-09-11 02:44:29 +0000 UTC]

Chill out Loren and holster the gun! You got people behind ya man. Don't sweat the small stuff.Better effect from a coooool head m'man. Love ya guy........catch ya on the flip side!

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stylez [2002-09-11 02:08:20 +0000 UTC]

yo that is a sick tattoo
i wanna be you

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evilfaeries [2002-09-06 13:46:58 +0000 UTC]

hehe im sorry my gallery is almost as big.. and im not even done,. the server is down on the site that holds most of my poetry.. and im too lazy to re type it all back up.. hehe

take care hun.
Kandice

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five [2002-09-05 11:58:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm in your signature....I feel sexy.

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shoobydoowap [2002-09-04 19:35:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment on "An Experience - A Perspective". You've got some great work on here. Keep on posting!

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euphoria [2002-09-04 13:03:57 +0000 UTC]

I got yer busty babe right here.

*looks down shirt* uh...never mind.

bahahahaha

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summerheart [2002-09-03 14:18:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your comment!

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truazn637 [2002-09-03 05:12:46 +0000 UTC]

oops forgot i already thanked ya...haha well DOUBLE THX!

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truazn637 [2002-09-03 05:10:11 +0000 UTC]

thank you for your comment......its greatly appreciated!

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primus [2002-08-31 20:48:21 +0000 UTC]

Have merely come to say hello.

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