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This is the old version, for reference....  Shardeh Testing 2

So...I think I've finally zoned in a final. ;A; Not much has changed from the last image, except for a couple new details (and the removal of some) and a slightly different color palette.  I know I kept going on and on about how much I disliked how simple the design was, but I was very careful about not making it too complicated.  Shard in the future will be someone I'll be drawing quite a lot, and not just for simple digital work. That's why I didn't take in consideration everything that was supplied in the comments (but I did use some of it, they were very helpful indeed! ;A; I can't thank you enough of the support! >W< ).  It was..quite the balancing act between simple and complex.  I'm a bit ashamed to say this took me at least half the day today to get it to where it is now.   I don't know why I was having so much trouble with it, it's just...I didn't seem to be happy with anything.  But I do believe I'm happy with this. ^w^ 

Right now, this is a temporary ref.  I'll try to get a clearer ref out soon.  This is good enough for the time, but definitely can do better than a sketch! XD If your using this in the time between now and when the new ref is created, select colors from the palette provided.  There is some opacity issues in the drawings themselves.

Also, bonus headshots!    (same as above, don't select these colors, these are actually incorrect! XD was too lazy to correct)

Like I said, thank you for all the support! ;A; I will reply to your comments tomorrow.  I've been pulling some long nights recently, and it's getting close to midnight!

So talk to you soon! Have a great day/night!  


Well...hrm. 

First of all, I must give a huge, HUGE thanks to everyone who commented on my last journal! (and the one person in sta.sh! ^w^ ) Some of your comments really helped me push past my mental block and actually get something productive done!  I will try to respond to some of them, but if I can't...just a heart-felt thank you to everyone! I'm sorry you have to deal with me in cases like this sometimes, I really should just start taking confidence in my work!

Ughh....someday I'll get there...

BUUUT, either way....this might be Shard. ;w; I hope! I still might make a few changes, but I like what has happened so far. ^^ Primarily those wings.  Not bragging, but that is likely my favorite thing that came about from my brainstorming! ;A; The love that new lighter swirl! >W< Since it was so...well, different for me, I tested it from a top view (because sometimes the addition of the second wing makes things look weird). That is here.    

...it made me love them even more, so yeah, those are staying! XD


I know the main reason I was concerned with her design was in regard to her simple head details.  And clearly...that hasn't changed much.  Just the addition of new markings.  Which...I think I'm fine with that now.  I wasn't happy with it before because honestly...I see all these other wonderful dragon head designs from other artists, with so much more detail and creativity...and there is my main OC with nothing but a simple set of horns. It actually prevented me from buying a couple of commissions, I was...a little embarrassed giving her to others to draw. But I didn't add anything new (other than the markings) because she simply does not work with anything else.  She doesn't work with spikes, she doesn't work with fins, she doesn't work with hair...  I would have given her a second horn MAYBE on her cheek/jawbone, but one of my other OC's already has that, so I wasn't going to do that! XD  So if nothing else works...then this must be what she will look like. And I think I'm good with that now. ^w^ (ask me in about a year, we'll see if that changes! XD )

But....opinions? I think at most I will do some last final tweaking, if anything.  I'll let you know if I will, or if I'll leave this as the final design. But I appreciate any new comments!

I will still be doing some last redesigning to my other OC's, but it will be nothing like what I'm doing to Shard.  You can already see what I did to Feather in sta.sh (linked in previously said journal), and Nyrei, Blade, and Eos are simple edits, if anything. ^w^ Hopefully I can get back to drawing these guys again soon, I haven't done true digital work for them in SO LONG! ;A; So thank you everyone for your patience!


Shard and Art (c) me

YOU MAY NOT USE THIS WITHOUT MY PERMISSION! YOU MAY NOT TAKE THIS CHARACTER AS YOUR OWN!
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Comments: 71

16Shards In reply to ??? [2015-04-02 21:15:24 +0000 UTC]

Then if you don't want to draw her, you don't have to.  ^^ If you're more interested in drawing other things, have at it! You're not forced to draw the same things over and over again.  And if people do that, then...they're not really worth your time.  Besides, variety is the spice of life, right? :3

Just...try not to give up on her entirely.  It's might be hard now, and you might absolutely hate the design, but it will get better with time and practice.  If anything, my characters have made that clear to myself.  

It all depends on personal preference. I'm just used to shorter keys because those are the only types of keyboards we at home.   But yeah, I understand trying to use a different keyboard is hard. ;w;

I understand that as well. ;w; Anxiety bros, unite! XP That's why I'm absolutely terrified of my English class, because the teacher likes to randomly call on people, especially those deemed "quiet". T-T Look, if we had a choice, we would take it...but it isn't always that simple.  Forcing us to participate isn't necessarily going to help with our..."quietness".

Ahhhhh, don't worry, I'm not online 24/7 anyways! XD

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ObludaNat In reply to 16Shards [2015-04-03 11:33:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, i'll lock her into a box "for later usage", with my other OC's that i don't even have personalities or references Maybe i will get better ONE DAYYYYYY
Thanks

I have a laptop with thin keys, but i like that the tall ones, idk why

My english teacher knows i'm good, so he doesn't call on me, unless i disturb the class  

Yes, our geography teacher makes us talk to the class all the time, asks us personal guestions and makes us present our presentations and news in english. She's so fake, we all hate her

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16Shards In reply to ObludaNat [2015-04-03 14:36:10 +0000 UTC]

Alright! ^^ Don't worry, you will!

No problem! ^w^

Again, personal preference! XD

Haha!

Eww, gross.  >W< It's not really okay for a teacher to ask personal questions.  Maybe at the beginning of the year to get to know you, but that should be it! XD And that's kind of weird that you have to do presentations in English (I'm assuming English isn't your first language), it's not like geography is your English class! /:'D It would be like...for me, doing a presentation for my history class in Spanish!

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ObludaNat In reply to 16Shards [2015-04-04 12:12:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, she pretends she cares about us, and tries to keep the lessons friendly, but she's really really fake She even picked on me for being so "negative and unhappy" (not everyone can shine as bright as her lol). Ever since then, she never asks me anything (i was very honest with her), so i don't have to worry anymore

We have subjects in english European integration in english (eurozone, schengen area, history of the EU, it's organisations and what they do, etc), and economic geography in english (economy, agriculture, culture, history of other states, such as canada, austalia, and asian countries... it's not a complex subject tho, we only learn basic information, so if you're good at english, you're safe)

You have spanish We have french, but everyone hates it, because we have a really old, almost deaf, and rude teacher. She often doesn't know what she's talking about, and her way of teaching is just impossible. Basically, we learn everything by ourself from the book, or from the internet >.>

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16Shards In reply to ObludaNat [2015-04-05 18:44:56 +0000 UTC]

Well that's rude! >W< At least she doesn't call on you in class anymore!

Ohh, alright, I see now! ^w^

Yep, we do! Taking a foreign language class is a requirement in our school system.   Generally, all schools offer both Spanish and French, but on occasion schools will offer other languages as well, like German and Latin.  I used to take Spanish, so I know a little, but I lost my patience for it after several years of not so great teachers. I kind of snapped after my last year's Spanish teacher, and I wasn't really impressed with the rest of the Spanish teachers in our school, so I kind of just fled from the subject as a whole! XD We're fortunate enough to have a teacher who teaches Latin so I started taking that this year, and it is so much more interesting than Spanish! ^^

I can imagine why that's not enjoyable! XD Unless you already like the subject, the teacher and who is the class really seems to determine whether the class will be enjoyable or not.

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ObludaNat In reply to 16Shards [2015-04-06 12:54:15 +0000 UTC]

That's awsome Maybe you'll be able to translate TLOS OST, i think some of the lyrics are in latin

In our school, we have english, which is mandatory for everybody, than we have french, which is mandatory only for my field of study, and then we have german and russian I've been studying german at my primary school, so i'm planning to master it later

Bad teachers can spoil even the most enjoyable subject ;w;

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16Shards In reply to ObludaNat [2015-04-11 14:35:21 +0000 UTC]

Talking about the Legend of Spyro, right? Well...if there are, I'm not able to figure them out! I couldn't find any written lyrics for any of the songs besides the main ones that are in English (probably because the vocals are considered background music), nor could I figure out any of the words when listening to them. They just sounded like random syllables strung together! XD And it's not like I'm all that great at Latin now, either way!

...It was really nice listening to those songs again, so much nostalgia... XD

Oh, wow, that's a lot of languages! Good luck with all of them! It's probably easier to learn foreign languages when you start early.  In my school system, it only becomes mandatory to start learning a foreign language by 7th grade (around the end of secondary school).  So, for me at least, I'm not exactly the greatest at using foreign languages in general! XD I can retain some information for a while, but eventually it just disappears since I don't use it outside of school.  

Indeed! ;W;

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ObludaNat In reply to 16Shards [2015-04-11 22:23:13 +0000 UTC]

Ow, that's a shame :<
Yeh, the OST is pretty great

I only have to study english and french for now

I started to study english in third grade of elementary school, and german in eighth grade And same here, i've stopped using german, and now i don't remember a word

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16Shards In reply to ObludaNat [2015-04-12 14:29:45 +0000 UTC]

It is! T3T

Oh, alright! XD That sounds a bit more manageable!

Haha! XD Yeah, once you stop using it everything just seems to disappear! I stopped taking Spanish last year and all I can remember is very, very basic phrases and present tense verb endings! X3

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ObludaNat In reply to 16Shards [2015-04-13 16:19:55 +0000 UTC]

I remember like..... 5 words and 2 phrases in german :'DDDDD

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16Shards In reply to ObludaNat [2015-04-15 22:46:38 +0000 UTC]

Hey, that's not bad! XD At least you remember some things from that long ago! ^w^

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ObludaNat In reply to 16Shards [2015-04-20 18:12:57 +0000 UTC]

XDDDDD

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Constanzia1295 In reply to ??? [2015-02-19 07:05:15 +0000 UTC]

so beautiful drawing , I like much this traditional drawing

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16Shards In reply to Constanzia1295 [2015-02-20 16:01:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^w^

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dragonfreak1112 In reply to ??? [2015-02-19 06:36:49 +0000 UTC]

oooo sooo awesome looking so far!!

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16Shards In reply to dragonfreak1112 [2015-02-20 16:01:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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dragonfreak1112 In reply to 16Shards [2015-02-20 16:35:08 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome.

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victordragon747 In reply to ??? [2015-02-19 06:27:40 +0000 UTC]

It's looking great so far, these little changes are great.

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16Shards In reply to victordragon747 [2015-02-20 16:01:01 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, thank you!

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victordragon747 In reply to 16Shards [2015-02-20 19:03:25 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!^v^

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