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AlecBell — Declining
Published: 2010-01-18 22:43:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 877; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 6
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Her years are ebbing,her face exposed, a stony beach,
winter deserted.
Memories remain,
keeping secrets from themselves.
The past has faded.
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Comments: 71
"collage of identity".
I like that.
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and as it fades, the secrets grow bigger.
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It somw times helps if you write it down.
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my memory is fine.
in fact, i remember things
that didn't even happen.
[pretend that's a haiku, please]
that's my reply to your excellence in haikuism.
[it'll have to do, because i'm hungry...]
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Aa ever Pip, your comment is apt and accurate, if a little lacking in poetic graces!!
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thanks, Shane [another Shane???]
oh, well - i'll watch you anyway.
[what is it about Shanes and poetry, i wonder...]
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i'm sure it's the Alan Ladd effect on the baby boom generation. haha!
thanks.
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I doesn't get any better as you get older.
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