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Published: 2010-03-13 08:28:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 2080; Favourites: 112; Downloads: 28
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From the walls of our minds flow the remnants of our sanity.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Also from the Insanity Series:
Insanity --> [link]
Inanity I: Basic --> [link]
Insanity II --> [link]
Insanity II: Basic --> [link]
The Repulse of Sanity --> [link]
The Reulse of Sanity: Basic --> [link]
Insanity III --> [link]
Insanity III "Alt" --> [link]
Insanity IV: --> You are here!
Insanity V: --> [link]
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Comments: 8
Overall, this is amazing. I'm sure when you did this, you wanted a bit of an odd feeling, but since you requested a critique on this, I figured I might as well write one.
First off- The window is a bit off. it's tilting in a way that the wall isn't, and if you were going for a tilt to make it seem off, I would suggest maybe a less dramatic one, as this makes it seem like it's falling off the wall.
Next- The lines in the floor aren't symmetrical, some are a bit too close together while others are spaced apart. If you were doing a sort of foreshortening type of thing, I would suggest making the spaces thinner near the wall with the window, and thicker as they got closer in view.
Also- Where is your light source? I can see the light streaming from the window, but there seems to me no shadow on the floor. If the room was completely dark save for that one lonely window, everything would be in shadow that the light wasn't casting on.
Other than that, I can see no more problems. I love this, and I think it's one of your best works. Perspective is always tricky and it takes a while to get it just right, but if you practice, you'll be able to master it in no time!
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Nicely illustrated. I really like the style and mood. Very good use of shadows in the imagery. The writing is well done too.
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