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bigcat96 — Patrick's Story Chapter 10: Bear (PREVIEW!) [NSFW]

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Description Hey everyone!! Just a peek at what’s to come when this chapter gets finished…sometime in September… YEAH!! PROGRESS!!!

“UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!”

The cold night winds blew over the burnt remains of once tall trees and bushes, the mighty oaks and spruces now nothing more than minor plies of blackened cinders already beginning to scatter in the breeze.

The brilliant moonlight cast down from the sky and bathed the entire forest in shining silver-tinted light, giving some dimension to the horrors that were currently transpiring within the once calm woods.

The Leaf ninja were just barely able to defeat Hōkkami, thanks in no small part to Naruto and the Nine-Tails overloading him with insane amounts of hatred and making him explode in fireball of hate, pride, and greed.

And just when they thought that they had finished the exorcism…

“GUUUUUUUUUUAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!! KITAGUMA KILL YOU ALL!!!”

The second and much stronger demon, The Northern Bear Kitaguma, had been awakened.

“Shit, EVERYONE! RETREAT INTO THE FOREST, I’LL HOLD HIM OFF!!!!” Tsunade shouted at the top of her lungs, just barely dodging another giant hunk of bedrock that Patrick’s frail body literally tore out from the ground. His tiny clawed fingers piecing the super-heated and hardened flagstone, then he ripped up huge amounts of rocks and earth around the size of small houses over his head and chucked them at the Leaf ninja.

The only good thing about the whole situation was that the boulders hurdling at them were easy to dodge because, even though it was night, they were so big and easy to see that almost anyone could dodge them. It was almost too easy…

That would have to wait. Until he was fully taken over nobody was allowed to attack because even if Patrick had a weird ability to avoid death under tremendous circumstances, that luck wouldn’t be enough if his body took another hit like the one it did earlier.

While she was dodging the volley of earthen projectiles, the Hokage made a false charge at the white haired boy in attempt to lure the demon to fully emerge.

“You shitty bastard! TAKE THIS!!” The slug sannin raised a balled up fist behind her and ran up at lightning speed toward the glowering demon child, whose body was currently producing a thick, frigid mist due to how cold it was becoming in preparation for some form of attack. Well, she would NOT be having any of that, at least not until she could safely smash the devil’s face in until he had eyes in the back of his head!

The slug princess was about thirty feet away and closing, the punch picking up velocity as she ran until she was right on top of him.

*SHING!SHING!SHING!SHING!SHING!SHING!SHING!SHING!SHING!*

Several of the indigo ice spikes shot out of the tiny fanged ninja’s body right before Tsunade’s punch would have connected if she had meant to hit him, which she didn’t. She only meant to graze him and scare out the demon.

Strangely, the idea came to her when she was researching ways people used to exorcise demons. Some more ancient cultures used to think that the hiccups were demons tormenting a person and that scaring the host would scare out the demon as well, thereby freeing the person from its evil grasp. A ridiculous superstition of course, but the logic seemed sound in this situation.

When the icicles emerged from Patrick’s small body, they nearly took out Tsunade’s left eye, only a millimeter or two away from partially blinding her.
Luckily for her, she was able to stop just before she would have been impaled by the freshly spouted spikes.

And just as quickly as they appeared, they softened and constricted around Patrick’s body. They writhed and slithered in and out over his entire body and began to multiply. The mass of wriggling ether cables surrounding the boy’s body began to swell, out and up, until it resembled a giant orgy of cold azure pythons clumped into a ten foot tall pile.

When the heap finally reached a height of thirteen feet, they began to liquefy and remold into the demon’s true physical form. First a large, stout belly slightly protruded from its mid-section and continued to create a more detailed outline to his finer features.

Several tentacles coiled around each other to form two stout, thick legs with a pair of wide spread paws with four stubby claws on each foot. Even more weaved together dozens of times over to make two gigantic arms thicker than tree trunks with rounded hand-paws that made man-hole covers look like beer coasters, each nubby finger equipped with short claws longer than the ones on his feet, but shorter than a human hand.

After the large, muscular chest, broad shoulders, and wide pelvis were built to support the immense appendages, the final piece began to take shape. The head.

Much too small for its body, only a bit bigger than a large watermelon, the tendrils wrapped, looped, and twisted around until a medium-sized oblong sphere rested atop the mountainous abomination. Then the egg-shaped ball began to develop. Two rounded ears appeared on the upper sides of his head along with a rectangular snout and two empty eye sockets.

His snout cracked across the middle creating a jagged mouth opening with sharp, pointed teeth popping out of the makeshift gums.

And as a final touch, a thick, shaggy coating of light grey fur sprouted and lengthened until it looked exactly like a regular massive, seventeen-foot, grey-furred, bipedal, demonic polar bear…

When the colossal monster’s ashen fur coat finally grew to its desired length, the empty eye sockets started to flow with a dark inky energy radiated and condensed from the empty optical voids.

The more black smoke-like substance flowed out, the more it swirled and condensed into the eye holes, until two perfectly formed spheres of shadowy energy darker than a starless night occupied the once vacant sockets.

With no pupils and it’s eyes being one solid color it was difficult to tell, but the creature was looking in various directions to access its surroundings.

It looked down while raising its left paw to look at it, then the right paw, then its large stomach and short legs.

All the while, the Leaf ninja were to stupefied to move. The monstrous behemoth towered directly over Tsunade while she looked up at the creature in both defiance and fear. The bigger they are, the harder they fall!! Right…?

BYE BYE!!! I’LL MISS YOU ALL WHO READ THIS, AND STILL A FEW WHO WON’T!!!!

P.S: sorry for the false start, tried something and failed...
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