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Blattfall — Stormclouds Destiny - Cover
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Published: 2015-06-04 12:18:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 245; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Hey I'm back
Probably Nobody is reading this
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Okay I had a looooooong break but I've worked on the comic anyway the whole time.
The Story is longer now, better and more interesting. More characters, more secrets.
Some changed names, genders and designs
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I hope that (many^^) people will be reading my Comic, I working on it really hard.
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I want to improve so please tell me how to do better. But please metion the things I drew good. I'm not happy with the first page and some things on the cover bother me. I've changed some things already and would be happy if you wouldn't criticize these two pages too much.
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Comments: 2
I hope you don't mind me giving you a little tip, but try to make the eyes smaller and further apart. It might help with the style.
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This cover looks amazing! You really know how to colour things!
You MUST continue this... I need more comics to read, I only have four and two of them updates either once a week or every second week... So I need more!
And this does not look like the other comics I have been looking at, this seems better.
Just one tip about storytelling (My strongest side of art is writing) - please don't make the first pages full of prophesies, thousands of characters and stuff like that. I highly reccommend introducing the characters one by one or two, not too many at a time. And not too many prophesies, dreams, destinies and that kind of stuff xD It just becomes .... Cliche, isn't that what they say?
(I just say hvis because so many fail on this, but I think you can do better. Just put your soul in the art ^^)
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