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You think I would have learned my lesson about making too many of these things. But I can't help it. I'm addicted to these things!So here's the deal, this jungle island could be inhabited by a number of things. They could be inhabited by giants that could be completely human, anthro, or tauric and mythical creatures maybe even prehistoric, if this is the case, animals will be giant as well. The island could be inhabited by miniture begins that could be human, anthro, or mythical. It can even have normal sized people that give human offerings to giants or trying to survive an island with giants. Whatever you want to try out. I'll give you the option when it comes to making that descision.
Try out multiple different possibilities if you want.
Also, if any of these RP's even from the other error messages that inspires you to draw something, go ahead and do it. Just ask me first.
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She backed away from him quickly,"O-Okay! Y-you can help me, b-but we've gotta communication ok? Y-You can't just pick me up! You have to ask first!"
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"Of course. Know may I help you out and pick you up?"
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The 9 year old's eyes slowly opened as she groaned in pain.Her vision was seriously blurred and she could feel her eyes stinging from the seawater.As she sat up she scanned the area slowly, the sound of the waves splashing against the shore.Her vision eventually went back to normal and she saw the jungle's edge a few feet away from her.As she stood up, she wiped the sand of her skin and her tail swished back and forth.The neko had skin the color of coffee, wavy black hair to her waist, calico cat ears and tail along with blue and hazel eyes.She started to walk the length of the shore when she saw something that nearly made her cry out.There under more wreckage of the ship, an arm hanged out.The hand had a blue bracelet which only confirmed her fears, that it was her mom, her father had given her the bracelet only a few days ago.She took a few more steps backward before sprinting into the trees.She didn't know where she was going, but she just had to get away from the beach.
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(human male with black hair bangs sloped to cover his left eye and silver black eyes. wearing a dark grey jacket, sleeveless black shirt and black slacks.)
Gabe pulled himself onto the island and collapsed, his black hair dripping with water. "Ugh," he muttered, "I'm exhausted." his eyelids felt like lead and he quickly lost conciousness.
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(Choice 1: You wake up to the sound of something big coming, but judging on what giant creature you decide on, you could be awakened by the vibrations in the ground and the booms of the footsteps, or by the rustling of trees if it is a creature with no feet. The giant can be anything from being a normal human giant, a giant anthro version of any animal including existing, prehistoric, or mythical creature. It could be a giant mythical creature such as elves, fairies, etc., or it could be tauric in nature such as a naga, pantaur, etc. Or it could be just a giant animal.
Choice 2: You could wake up, tied down to the ground or being crawled all over by tiny people. Those tiny people could be of any variation just like the giant choices above...
Choice 3: You wake up with spears pointed at you by human sized beings of any variation who which to sacrifice you to their giant god/goddess.)
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(option 2, tiny nagas?)
Gabe qoke up to find himself tied to the ground with small ropes. he stared at the bonds in confusion.
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(Sure. How small do you want the nagas?"
There is just enough slack on the ropes around his head for him to be able to lift it to see his chest. On his chest is a tiny male naga with a tan human upper half and a black scaled tail. Judging from his spear and him only wearing a loincloth, he appears to be some sort of primitive. The naga points his spear at Gabe's throat.
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(about half a foot?)
Gabe stared at the naga in surprise. he suddenly wished he knew where his curved dagger had washed up.
"Why am i tied down?" he risked asking, bracing himself for a nasty reaction.
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(six inches tall? Usually that's a little "big" too me, but I can work with it.)
"Why? Why you ask? You're a monster! We can't have monsters near our village! Now why have you come here, monster?" The naga with the spear asks.
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(sorry! 
"I was shipwrecked," Gabe said, "I don't even know where i am." he swallowed but kept his mask of solid stone firm.
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"Shipwrecked? You're lying! Monsters don't build ships. Tell the truth. You came here to find and pillage out village! You came to eat out people, make us into slaves, or even fulfill your sick sexual fantasies pleasures! You monsters are all the same!"
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"What?" Gabe shook his head and chuckled. "Of course not. true i'm an assassin, but i'm being honest. i was on a ship headed for my gradfather's home country of Italy for a job and got shipwrecked. i wouldn't harm you guys unless you harmed me. it's called self-defense, by the way." he tugged at the bonds again.
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"I still think you're lying. Creatures of your size can only be one thing: monsters! Monsters can't make ships and I've never heard of any placed named Italy. It sounds made up to me." He pushes the tip of the spear just enough to penetrate the skin of Gabe's neck. A small trickle of blood emerges. The naga lifts his spear away and musters himself to plunge the spear into his throat.
"Koga, stop!" A female voice calls from the beach. In the corner of Gabe's right eye, he sees one female naga among a mass of male warriors. She manages to push to push herself to the front of the group. Only one naga towards the front tries to stop her by grabbing her wrist, but she pulls it away.
"Rorric, get your sister under control," the naga on Gabe's chest, Koga, says. "This is no place for females.
The naga who had grabbed the female naga's wrist, Rorric, places his hand on her shoulder. "Kindra, you really should-"
Kindra rolls her shoulder out from under his hand and continues reasoning with Koga. "Can't you tell this creature is different? It's true that he's as big as the monsters, but have we seen one like him?"
"Just because we haven't seen one like it, doesn't mean it's not a monster."
"But he can speak our tongue. Koga, what if this creature is the answer to my prayers?"
"I don't want to hear about your silly dreams."
"But he could have been sent here from the heavens beyond the sea. He could be the Gods' champion, or a god himself?" She directs her next question to Gabe, "Are you from beyond the sea?"
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"i've never been here, so maybe i am," Gabe said, shrugging the best he could.
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"NO!" Koga buries the tip of his spear a little deeper into the skin of Gabe's neck. "No maybes. Give us a definite answer and tell us the truth; otherwise, it seems like you're either lying to us or giving us have truths. Either you came from the sea or you didn't. There are no maybe I did or maybe I didn't. If you continue like that, I swear, god, gods' champion, or none, I will drive this spear in you like all the other monsters I've faced. Now are you from beyond the Seas? The truth. NOW!"
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"Okay fine!" Gabe sighed. "Yes, i'm from beyond the sea." he rolled his eyes.
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(Wow, he really shouldn't have kept pushing Koga's buttons...)
Koga is angered by the eye rolling so he takes out his spear and stabs it in Gabe's right eye, blinding it.
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A scream left Gabe's mouth. "Damn it! now i'm blind in both eyes!"
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(He's already blind in one eye? If I would have knows, I would have probably have Koga stab his left eye instead. But it might not matter, if Gabe really keeps pushing Koga's buttons and keeps going on like this, he might be the first in all the RP's I've done to actually die in the RP...)
"You rolled your eyes. I caught you lying, Monster!"
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(it's okay. Gabe's a smartass. he had it coming. but i don't want him to die...)
"I wasn't lying," he hissed, "i was annoyed that i had to repeat myself."
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(neither do I... which is why he needs to get his act together.)
"It wasn't a repeat. The second was an answer. Your first wasn't. 'Maybe' doesn't mean 'yes', it means, 'it could be yes or it could be no'."
"Koga, stop!" Kindra begs. "This one is different."
"It's a monster and deserves death!"
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(i'll see what i can do.)
"Please don't kill me!" Gabe cried. he was trembling, but not of fear of Koga. he was scared because with both eyes blind, he'd never get to see again. tears gather at the unseeing orbs, but he refused to let them fall. "I'd never hurt your people," he said in all honesty, "i'll find a way off of this island, just PLEASE don't kill me." he wished Kira was here. although mute, the white haired man would know what to do.
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"Monsters aren't worthy for the Heavens Beyond the Seas," Koga says through grinding teeth.
"Please, Koga stop!" Kindra pleads. She can sense the quivering sadness in Gabe's voice and believes him. But Koga won't listen. She has no other choice. She takes away Rorric's spear while he's stunned and she cuts free some of the ropes binding Gabe before Rorric realizes what's happening and tries to stop her, but by then, one of Gabe's arm is freed.
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Gabe's unseeing orbs stared at her in surprise. "Thank you." he takes advantage of his freed arm and gently takes Koga off his chest, placing him in the sand. he did so with any other nagas crawling on his body before freeing himself. once free, Gabe stands up without stepping on any Nagas and walks away, headed towards the sounds of the ocean.
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"What have you done!" Koga screams. "That monster is getting away!" Then to his warriors, he yells, "After that beast!" The warriors slither after Gabe with spears, but Koga keeps some behind, one of them being Rorric. "Hold her!" The order is directed at Rorric and another naga who hold Kindra. "I had that monster and you released it!"
"He wasn't a monster. He's different. Why can't you see that he..."
"I don't want to hear another word!"
"But he could be the answer to my..."
"And I don't want to hear of your dreams. Dreams are dreams and just that." Koga looks to Rorric. "Kill her."
"Wha-what?" Rorric questions in shock, hoping Koga didn't say what he thinks he said.
"Kill her."
"But, she's my sister."
"I don't care. She's a traitor. If you're a true warrior, you will do as you're commanded by your superior, no matter the cost. Now, kill your treacherous sister!"
Rorric looks down at his sister who looks up at him with pleading eyes. "Rorric, you know I had to do it. I had to."
"I... Rorric looks away. "I can't do it."
Koga sighs. "I'm sorry to hear that. You showed such promise. Kill them both!"
"What?!" Rorric exclaims as he's held down by two other nagas.
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Gabe had heard the conversation and walked back but kept at least 5 feet away. "Leave her alone!" he shouted. he crouched and dug in the sand, searching for his dagger. "Don't touch either of them."
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Because Gabe ran back, the naga warriors catch up with him. Some are swiped away by his hands as he searches through the sand while others stab his hands with spears when they get close.
Koga doesn't listen to Gabe. He slithers over to Kindra with his spear. "The bitch dies first."
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Gabe stood up, unknowingly avoiding the spear and shouted at the top of his lungs, so hard his throat becomes hoarse, "ALL OF YOU STOP!!!"
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(I'm guessing you don't want Kindra and Rorric dead. So, I paused the RP to warn you that Gabe's going to have to do something else. Just yelling 'Stop' isn't going to work.)
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('kay!)
Gabe reached down and his hands landed gently on Rorric and Kendra he picked them up and held them gently. at the same time, he backed away slowly from the other nagas, face blank.
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Because he is originally a few feet away from the nagas Gabe wishes to save, he has to step forward. Those warrior nagas trying to attack him that are too slow, fall victim to being crushed by his feet. The sand does nothing to cushion the weight and some lie half dead and half buried in the sand of his footprints. With only his sense of sound to rely on, and only Koga's yelling on top of that, due to Gabe's blindness, it's a miracle that he stops walking just before they should fall victim to his feet as well. It's also a miracle that when he reaches one cupped hand falls on Kendra and Rorric and no one else! Those nagas who had been holding Rorric and Kendra down, quickly dispersed when they saw Gabe's approach, and Rorric and Kendra stoop lower so that his giant cupped hand forms a tent over them. Koga, who had his back turned to Gabe and hadn't paid heed to the shadow across the sand, continued jabbing his spear, but Gabe;s hand comes down in time to block it. The spear only manages to prick the back of his hand. Gabe scoops his other hand under the sand and under the two nagas. When Gabe lifts them up and backs away, Koga screams, "Kill the beast and kill those traitors!"
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Turning in the direction he hoped led to the forest, Gabe made absolute sure Rorric and Kendra were cupped securely in his hands and bolted, heading for the treeline. Oddly enough, he managed to successfully avoid the trees in his path.
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Being completely encased in his cupped hands, Rorric and Kendra are in the dark and have no idea where they're heading. With every step Gabe takes, they're bounced. Eventually, the army of nagas can no longer be heard. They were no match for Gabe's long strides which put a great enough distance between him and them to a point where they lost him. But around this time, Gabe's foot catches on a root struck out in his path!
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Gabe let out a startled cry and crashed to the ground. his hands flung open and Kendra and Rorric were tossed a fair distance away.
"Damn it!" Gabe cursed, sitting up, "Sorry, guys."
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They had been flung hard and far when his hands had opened. Gabe can hear Rorric groaning and a sudden gasp from Kendra. Then a scream from Rorric. "Rorric, I... your arm is broken!" Kendra cries out.
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"It is?!" Gabe sounded panicked and he buried his head into his hands muttering "i'm sorry, i'm sorry, i'm sorry, i'm sorry, i'm sorry!"
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"Both of you calm down. I'm going to get something to set the bone. Just both of you stay put," Kendra orders before slithering off.
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Gabe kept his head buried in his hands, the guilt overwhelming him. "I'm so sorry," he whispered.
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"Calm down! It's just a broken arm. For a giant beast, you sure act strange," Rorric says. He thinks, 'Actually, he sounds pathetic and weak with all his crying and worrying.'
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Gabe wiped his eyes. "I'm sorry. it's just...first i'm blinded in both eyes, then was nearly killed, and now i caused someone smaller than me harm without a reason and i just feel guilty." he leaned back against a tree. "If i'd never been shipwrecked, i'd never have been here. that settles it. if i ever get off of this island, i'm taking planes instead of boats."
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Charlotte struggled to pull herself onto the shore, both her arms and legs sore from the longs swim from the wrecked ship to the island. She managed to get herself about half-way up to the tree-line before she collapsed with exhaustion and fell uncocsious.
(300 ft. Male Demi-Chimera plz. Village sacrifice.)
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(How would you like the Demi-Chimera to look like? I've never used one in an RP.)
When she wakes up, she's in the mud in the center of a primitive village with huts made of sticks and mud. All the villagers surround her with tan skin and only wearing loin clothes. Some spears are pointed at her.
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(Basically like this [link] except with orange hair, golden wings, male, and completely naked.)
Charlotte groaned as her eyes adjusted to the light and she saw the spears, "Oh fuck no."
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(All do that then.)
A haggered old woman approaches you. She's wearing only loincloth as well, despite the sag. She's hunched over and walks with as shuffle. She speaks in a language that Charlotte can't understand and seems to be chanting the words like she's casting a spell or something.
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Charlotte stared disbelievingly at the woman, "What the fuck are you saying?"
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The woman continues her chanting just before she places her hand on Charlotte's shoulder. The one crone's hand travels to Charlotte's neck, cheek, forehead, down her face, on her breasts which the old crone squeezes as if checking their firmness, down her stomach, and then down to the crotch.
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"Get your filthy hands off me you pervert!"Charlotte tried to struggle away from the woman but found it to be useless.
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When her eyes are no longer rolled up onto her skull, she stops touching Charlotte's crotch and turns to the crowd with that hand raised to the sky. The old woman yells some foreign word that Charlotte can't comprehend. Some word that sounds Kaka, Chaka, Choko, or something along those lines. The crowd cheers upon hearing that word and starts chanting it. The crowd parts as Charlotte is pushed forward from the stick of the spear hitting her back. Two men lead her, sometimes by poking her back with the tip of their spear, outside the village where there is a large open field.
The field would be barren only being inhabited by grass if it weren't for the huge stone pillar jutting out from the ground with two enormous horns on either side of the pillar. As she gets closer, she notices that the horns aren't made of wood or any other material she'd expect from primitives. They're white, made of bone! She realizes that the enormous horns mounted in the grass are hollowed out horns from some very big creature, really big creature! She wonders what sort of creature could have such horns, when the men take the ropes tied onto the stone and tie the other ends around each wrist so that her arms are raised and angled as if she were forming the Y in YMCA.
The men approach the horns and blow on them. The horms unleash a horribly loud and deep cry that rattles the trees at the edge of the jungle that are still a great distance away. The sound is deeper than any tuba she had ever heard. She is unable to cover his ears. The two men stop, take a deep breath, and blow again!
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Charlotte struggled against the ropes, "Let me go right now! What the fuck do you ass holes think you're doing?!"
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Suddenly, the trees beyond the clearing shake and bend before snapping back into place as if something big is going through them, something so big that it would have to push on the trees to get through the jungle! The men at the horns turn and run away, leaving Charlotte all alone with whatever creature is coming for her!
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