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CelestialGreen — Anime Academy First Homework
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Published: 2011-03-31 19:24:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 151; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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FINALLY completed my first anime academy homework...*sigh* I feel so guilty....It took like a month to get around to =_= The start of college this year really took away most of my time...Ah well, at least its finally done.
I'm not happy about how it turned out, though I did learn some things about anatomy, which really, was the main focus. :3
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STRONG POINTS
= clean and neat lineart. i look forward to seeing this type of linework from you
= generally correct lengths
POINTS to IMPROVE
= widen the hips a bit to cope with the shoulder width
= the elbows are too low, try adjusting them to just above the belly button
= the hands are a little big as well, the hands go from the crotch to the 4 1/4 lines.
i'm also glad that you were sensitive to the errors you made before
now i hope you can edit this after one week. due april 8th. if you need extensions, tell me. and just edit this deviation...and notify after doing so
thanks and good luck!^^
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