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Published: 2008-06-27 19:23:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 6501; Favourites: 106; Downloads: 153
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Nice one 
I like Plum in the background too. It's only a matter of time till we get a Mario Golf Wii huh?
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i remember i played that game when a tornado hit my house. what a cah-RAZY fiasco that was!
this pic makes me feel like playing again...but what if it conjures up another tornado?
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i'm feeling different today, so i'm going to give you some balls to the walls critiqueing.
--i told you before, but grass just shouldn't look like that. i don't think you should have attempted to draw (or make it look like you drew) all the grass. you should have left it more open and given it more of an illusion of grass.
--wario's arms look to be of different lengths, and his right hand is a lot smaller than his left.
--also, i seem to remember you drawing wario's mouth much better-it just kind of looks pasted onto his face. it lacks depth. wario's mouth is supposed to be set somewhat in his face further.
--the linework is inconsistent. luigi looks great, but some parts (particularly the background) are just too scribbly. more consistency would be nice.
--your shading/highlighting still needs work. more or less an overall picture problem, nothing specific. your light source seems a little finicky over how it will effect some things over how it will effect others. you picked a direction--that's great--but you need more practice on how objects shade themselves. for instance, donkey kong's right ear should not be highlighted at all, it should be completely shaded. i think you just need to do some more life studies and see how things are in shadows and light effects objects. you're getting better, though.
--related to above, your shading/highlighting makes some of the areas of the picture look flat, most glaringly wario's stomach and luigi's right leg.
--your coloring needs to be more careful. i can point out a few areas where i can see color bleeding out of the lines (wario's golf club...), though you're more careful than you used to be, that much is certain.
--it doesn't really pertain to this picture, but you really should start trying more realistic female anatomy. i know everyone has their things, but plum is a b cup at best and you know that. waists too thin, chests too big. tl;dr version: i wish you'd start trying for more realistic female anatomy
--the golf ball doesn't really look like it's flying through the air. maybe you should have tried a motion blur effect, or something? i'm not sure on a solution, but it kinda just looks like it's sitting in the grass.
you said advanced critique encouraged, and holy shit i delivered.
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Noooyce!
Good job on the background, too. Not much else I can say, really. It's good work.
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GOO Weegee GOO!!
i like the way you draw Nintendo characters BTW.
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Nice touch with Plum and the other female character from the GBC Mario Golf in the background.
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Nice Mario Golf pic! Yoshi and DK are enjoying the game, but Wario looks very impatient.
Wario: 
I like the taunt you put in the comments section. *is reminded of Mario Kart 64*
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I'm also a Mario Golf lover^^. I just want Mario Golf 64 for the Virtual Console.
Great pic. FAV
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"birdie!" *hand pose the left* *hand pose to the right* *spin around and does an L finger shape to the shin*
(what Luigi does when he scores a birdie on MGTT) (GC game)
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Guess we'll be seeing a Mario Golf Wii soon enough.
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Heyhey, I like it.
I like the backgrounds and everything. If you want critique, the trees don't really seem to be standing out beyond the grass, to me they look kinda flat. But regardless, fantastic drawing.
"More like Wario Golf... but you gotta love it."
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I haven't played this game in forever! Gotta play it again.
Very awesome! I like how the BG is kinda "sketchy"
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