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Description The Legend of Maria Makiling

The blue mountain ranges between the Laguna and Quezon provinces look lonely and quiet from far away. And if you come closer, you will find misty shadows in the lush trees and feel a touch of mystery as they sway and murmur in the cool mountain breeze.

What secrets do these mountain hold?

It was in these cool and hazy mountains where once lived a wonderful enchantress. She was often seen under the lovely glow of moonlight, swaying gracefully to the delicate music of the midnight breeze by a rippling brook, her glossy hair flowing dark and long under the twinkle of the stars. Her voice, warm and vibrant, floating in the quiet night as she sang songs of love and tenderness.

The loveliest of creatures was named Maria Makiling.
The people of the villages in Laguna and Quezon all believed her an enchantress, or mutya. She was not a creature of flesh and blood but a nymph from the fog and mists of these dusky mountains. She helped the needy people and showered them with love and kindness.
All the people loved Maria Makiling. Often they would leave what they believed to be her favorite fruits, some fowls and eggs by the brook where she sang.

But even mutyas fell in love. Maria Makiling did, with a young and handsome farmer. This beloved by Maria Makiling tilled fields that always bloomed abundantly even when the fields of his neighbors lay dry and barren. His animals and fowls remain strong and robust even when famine and pests killed his neighbor's flock. Indeed this young man was blessed and protected by a beautiful and unseen spirit!
Alas! And even mutyas suffered from broken hearts. Time came when the Spaniards wanted to gather all the strong and able men to serve in the army and fight the many wars going on.

The married men in the villages were not forced to join the army. Because of this, the other men fled to the mountains. But Maria Makiling's beloved young man chose to marry a village girl.

Poor Maria Makiling, a lovely enchantress, but not a mortal one!

It was the eve of his wedding. He was walking along the grassy paths of the forests. Suddenly, in the mists and shadows of the evening, Maria Makiling floated before him!
Her image blew silky and warm about him. Her face hauntingly beautiful under the twinkling stars and gleaning moonlights.

"I have loved you with all the love I am capable of in this world of mortals. And know you will marry someone else. I had hoped that you would have faith in me. I had hoped that you would love me in return. I shall go my way from hereon. And you go your way. I leave you to your fate!"
Now Maria Makiling is the thing of the past. Her beautiful shadows had vanished forever from the lovely moonlight in the midnight trees. Her golden voice is no longer heard in the silent evenings.

Once she was a secret held by the mists and shadows of the blue and lonely mountains.

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Lol...Too lazy to summarize so I just copy pasted it.

Anyway here's:
Philippines as Maria Makiling and Mexico as the due...who..uhh..you know~.

This is a SAMPLE entry for #Dinosaurusgede-FC 's first Maaf Fan Art Contest~.

Contest details can be found here: [link]
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Comments: 90

choco-java In reply to ??? [2012-08-21 16:08:15 +0000 UTC]

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She became a mountain range.

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KagayakiMizu In reply to choco-java [2012-08-22 12:27:34 +0000 UTC]

Right... I see where you're going.

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machines13 In reply to ??? [2012-08-20 23:38:31 +0000 UTC]

oh i so love the story...my childhood stories.....

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choco-java In reply to machines13 [2012-08-21 16:07:02 +0000 UTC]

IKR?

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machines13 In reply to choco-java [2012-08-22 05:49:19 +0000 UTC]

yah.... because of you i quite back at my childhood..

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Kaigaazuko [2012-08-20 22:24:56 +0000 UTC]

So~ she never appear again because of a man.

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choco-java In reply to Kaigaazuko [2012-08-21 16:03:53 +0000 UTC]

yes...

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Kaigaazuko In reply to choco-java [2012-08-22 02:32:17 +0000 UTC]

She should have confessed to him. How could he know if it's her but then again it's such a tragic story.

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choco-java In reply to Kaigaazuko [2012-08-22 08:13:51 +0000 UTC]

Well...she was an enchantress so I don't think she could. She just gathered up all her courage before she disappeare so that she could confess.

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Kaigaazuko In reply to choco-java [2012-08-22 09:41:00 +0000 UTC]

I've read the story in McMillan illustrated book. She was portrayed with long hair covering her forebody and holding a harp.

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choco-java In reply to Kaigaazuko [2012-08-22 09:44:07 +0000 UTC]

....

Well, I knew she had LONG hair but I didn't know about the harp.

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Kaigaazuko In reply to choco-java [2012-08-22 09:49:22 +0000 UTC]

Wonder where they think about the harp come from?

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choco-java In reply to Kaigaazuko [2012-08-22 09:51:15 +0000 UTC]

haha..I know right? I mean, I'm sure Maria is sorta pre-colonial right?

hmmm....well, actually I don't know when te story of Makiling came out~.

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heartcandy101 [2012-08-20 20:50:30 +0000 UTC]

yayy!! MexPiri!
bagay tlga sila no??

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choco-java In reply to heartcandy101 [2012-08-21 16:03:38 +0000 UTC]

Ya ya!! I know right?

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heartcandy101 In reply to choco-java [2012-08-22 23:20:52 +0000 UTC]

yieeeee made for each other talaga!!~

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melondramatics In reply to ??? [2012-08-20 19:11:40 +0000 UTC]

lsjfhsf HOW DID YOU KNOW I NEEDED MORE MEXPIRI oh wait my tumblr feels

love thiiiis<3

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choco-java In reply to melondramatics [2012-08-21 16:03:15 +0000 UTC]

lol..MexiPiri needs LAV.

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melondramatics In reply to choco-java [2012-08-21 19:34:57 +0000 UTC]

IT DOES

OTL

I need to draw myself this couple more, gdi

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FallenAngelKokoro In reply to ??? [2012-08-20 18:44:26 +0000 UTC]

awwwww ;w; so pretty >w< an-and so sad ;A;

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choco-java In reply to FallenAngelKokoro [2012-08-21 16:02:47 +0000 UTC]

I totally teared up when I was reading the story..I intended to make it BruPili but Mexico seemed to fit better.

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FallenAngelKokoro In reply to choco-java [2012-08-22 05:16:17 +0000 UTC]

awww :<

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Tomato-AL In reply to ??? [2012-08-20 18:01:04 +0000 UTC]

It's Piri and Mexico QuQ??

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choco-java In reply to Tomato-AL [2012-08-21 16:01:08 +0000 UTC]

yes...yes it is.

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raniellkraken In reply to ??? [2012-08-20 17:38:43 +0000 UTC]

Locals in Laguna often pointed out that the mountain range is shaped like a body of a sleeping woman..It's was believed to be Maria Makiling resting peacefully under the skies

The first time I looked at the mountain as a kid, I actually felt a chill running up on my arms..

[link]

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choco-java In reply to raniellkraken [2012-08-21 16:00:46 +0000 UTC]

ahe~! yep yep! I read somewhere that the mountains resemble a face of a woman in profile. Though...it's probably eroded now

Thanks so much for the link~!!

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raniellkraken In reply to choco-java [2012-08-22 14:23:30 +0000 UTC]

yeah, not to mention that the major portion's already denuded yes,I'm looking at you illegal loggers and kaingin farmers T____T

But i still love the mysticism of Mt. Makiling. if only we can preserve its beauty.... sigh

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xxEuchan In reply to ??? [2012-08-20 17:26:59 +0000 UTC]

THE FEELS.

Ah... why must love be so... so beautiful... yet painful... like a lovely red rose on bloom~

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choco-java In reply to xxEuchan [2012-08-21 15:58:46 +0000 UTC]



I'm with ya.

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Jax102 [2012-08-20 16:10:27 +0000 UTC]

That's such a beautiful tale

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choco-java In reply to Jax102 [2012-08-21 15:53:36 +0000 UTC]

I know right~!!

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Jax102 In reply to choco-java [2012-08-22 01:56:27 +0000 UTC]

I'm curious how did you hear of this tale ?_?

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choco-java In reply to Jax102 [2012-08-22 08:10:35 +0000 UTC]

uhh...internet research.

But this legend is actually very popular. I mean, Maria Makiling is but I never knew this story I added on the description.

I'm pretty sure there's a Visayan version of Maria Makiling too~.

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Jax102 In reply to choco-java [2012-08-30 01:44:26 +0000 UTC]

Huh, I never knew that ^w^ Maybe I should look up legends now ^_^

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dinosaurusgede [2012-08-20 15:50:48 +0000 UTC]

That's one beautiful ghost

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choco-java In reply to dinosaurusgede [2012-08-20 15:52:48 +0000 UTC]

I teared up reading the story!

Spain ruined yet another lovestory.

And thanks~!!

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Seichee In reply to ??? [2012-08-20 15:40:26 +0000 UTC]

Kada pagsilip ko sa bintana ng kwarto ko, plagi kong natatanaw ung Mt. Makiling -3-

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choco-java In reply to Seichee [2012-08-20 15:42:18 +0000 UTC]

awww...that's nice.

Makatagalog naman to, sinusulit ang buwan ng wika~.hehehehehe

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Seichee In reply to choco-java [2012-08-20 15:44:28 +0000 UTC]

Ahahaha, gnun tlga

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