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Description I had the idea for this comic the night before an O-chem exam. Guess that goes to show you where my priorities lie.

So I've noticed that the show's been kind of nice about giving Rainbow Dash things over time -- way back in Season 2, ~RizCifra drew this up after we realized how not alone Dash was anymore with Tank. Then "Sleepless in Ponyville" aired, and take that, Faust -- Dash's gonna try and be a responsible big sister. That said, we STILL haven't seen any mention of pegasus families for either Rainbow, Fluttershy, or Scootaloo (and I'm pretending the middle satisfies herself with bears or something for the sake of a joke), and the episode slots to explore those things are running out.

I can't say I WANT the show to go into their histories, though. Making up stuff like this is, in an attempt to get me labeled something derogatory, fun. I personally believe Rainbow Dash comes from a very happy family who she can count on when times get tough, but I just had to draw this first.

Thank you for reading. I'd love to know your thoughts on this, especially from the art angle if you could spare some critique!

My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic belongs to Hasbro, but the art is mine.
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Comments: 542

Couch-Crusader In reply to ??? [2012-12-19 14:05:04 +0000 UTC]

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wevert In reply to Couch-Crusader [2012-12-20 20:44:58 +0000 UTC]

Indeed you did fellow dA user. Indeed you did...

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xaq10r In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 20:04:44 +0000 UTC]

Dammit...I shoulda stopped at panel 4. ;_;

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Couch-Crusader In reply to xaq10r [2012-12-19 14:04:28 +0000 UTC]

Why didn't you? D:

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xaq10r In reply to Couch-Crusader [2012-12-19 19:46:20 +0000 UTC]

I didn't know I should have until it was too late. :[

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tarbano In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 20:02:54 +0000 UTC]

First 6 panels - funny
Last 2 - GAH! RIGHT IN THE FEELS!

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Couch-Crusader In reply to tarbano [2012-12-19 14:04:19 +0000 UTC]

What about the very last panel, then? Anyway, hope you enjoyed yourself~

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poisonkid528 In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 20:00:20 +0000 UTC]

This actually made me incredible sad and tear up a bit. I hope the pegasus' have families and that part of the character's history is explained as the seasons go on.

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Couch-Crusader In reply to poisonkid528 [2012-12-19 14:03:46 +0000 UTC]

All I wanted was your tears and praise. And yeah, I would be interested in seeing how the writers approach pegafamilies

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Shadowcross In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 19:59:37 +0000 UTC]

With Rainbow Dash being a tomboy, I kind of imagined her being largely influenced by a few big brothers. I also thought of her as being the youngest among her siblings, as Faust has already stated that RD would make a particularly poor big sister. I do believe Faust was right, initially, but I like Rainbow Dash's commitment to Scootaloo as a positive step in the right direction.

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Couch-Crusader In reply to Shadowcross [2012-12-19 14:03:15 +0000 UTC]

I could definitely see RD having some big brothers, too. However, you already have Shining Armor and Big Mac for those roles with Twi and AJ already. My headcanon's that Firefly's actually RD's older sister, but good freakin' luck trying to make that work in the show now that Hasbro let the copyright slip, haha!

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Neriad In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 19:40:11 +0000 UTC]

Fluttershy was raised by bears. I'm ok with this.

I really like your storytelling in this. I actually got it in the feels for RD at the end.

I do have one teensy crit though- since it's a copy-paste job in a lot of the frames, fram 5 (the group shot) really bugs me. RD's leg which was raised in all the others has been lowered, but the bent joint is still there. Perhaps this is intentional, but to me it looks like a creepy fatty bulge... But that is a very small thing in an otherwise great comic :3

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Couch-Crusader In reply to Neriad [2012-12-19 13:55:56 +0000 UTC]

I noticed that issue in the 5th panel as I was drawing this, yeah. Then I thought this image would get shrunken down for the final comic, and I'm like, "Man, no one's gonna point that out at all. I've got bigger things to do."

Can't get away with nuthin'.

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10art1 In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 19:39:15 +0000 UTC]

Rainbow Dash face: O '3 O

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bethrezen91 In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 19:37:04 +0000 UTC]

Made me have a good laugh 10/10.

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Couch-Crusader In reply to bethrezen91 [2012-12-19 13:54:41 +0000 UTC]

Psychopath!

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bethrezen91 In reply to Couch-Crusader [2012-12-20 01:29:41 +0000 UTC]

It isn't my fault you made such a funny comic.

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snake-eyed-chick2 In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 19:30:03 +0000 UTC]

poor dash. seriously, when are we going to see Dashie's family? oh thats right, we have. MY LITTLE DASHIE IS TRUE!!!!!

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ArcusWind In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 19:30:01 +0000 UTC]

OMG! That is so sad. I hope they have something in the works for Rainbows family. Even if it's just a cameo.

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Couch-Crusader In reply to ArcusWind [2012-12-19 13:53:25 +0000 UTC]

I'd definitely be interested in seeing the writers' take on pegaparents, all right.

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Sarhkan In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 19:27:22 +0000 UTC]

*HUGS*

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MrSpartin In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 19:19:40 +0000 UTC]

If anyone on the show doesn't have family it's orphan Scootaloo.

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Couch-Crusader In reply to MrSpartin [2012-12-19 13:52:28 +0000 UTC]

Aw, we don't know that for sure The ambiguities with things like that are what make participating in this fandom fun!

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Readerofthenigth In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 19:10:06 +0000 UTC]

It started with funny and silly stuff and then... just a huge explosion of sadness.
Great work.

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Couch-Crusader In reply to Readerofthenigth [2012-12-19 13:52:01 +0000 UTC]

That was the idea! Thanks for reading!

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Readerofthenigth In reply to Couch-Crusader [2012-12-19 21:21:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank YOU for making it.

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Masdragonflare In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 19:05:08 +0000 UTC]

SO SAD

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Couch-Crusader In reply to Masdragonflare [2012-12-19 13:51:49 +0000 UTC]

No, no. Just regular tears, man.

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DustyScarecrow In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 19:01:44 +0000 UTC]

This is horribly sad (although true). I really hope they reveal Rainbow's family soon. . .

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Couch-Crusader In reply to DustyScarecrow [2012-12-19 13:51:10 +0000 UTC]

True? You mean the part where the show makes no reference to Rainbow's family?

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DustyScarecrow In reply to Couch-Crusader [2012-12-19 21:34:26 +0000 UTC]

Indeed.

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spikethed In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 19:01:16 +0000 UTC]

Hold on Twilight family with no Spike? I feel like Rainbow dash Now

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Couch-Crusader In reply to spikethed [2012-12-19 13:50:33 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, bro! If I ever get around to redoing this comic I'll make sure you're invited, haha!

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Dorucario In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 18:55:15 +0000 UTC]

*hugs rainbow dash*

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fotland42 In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 18:54:46 +0000 UTC]

You are something derogatory! I'm sure you can figure out what. Unless the answer is "stupid".

And what about Scoots? She seems more than ever like she has no family. You saw how eager she was to get Dash to be her sister.

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Couch-Crusader In reply to fotland42 [2012-12-18 22:01:04 +0000 UTC]

Just enjoy the joke, friend.

In all seriousness, I did this comic 'cause I was like, "They've given her a pet and a little sister--when will they give her the rest of a family?"

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fotland42 In reply to Couch-Crusader [2012-12-19 19:13:00 +0000 UTC]

I can't obey orders like "don't call me something derogatory." It is psychologically impossible. I don't know how anybody manages it, really. And then I always feel bad about posting a comment for no purpose other than a really obvious joke, so I try to think of something else to say.

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Couch-Crusader In reply to fotland42 [2012-12-19 20:36:45 +0000 UTC]

'S all good. In the meantime, you should probably find a way to inoculate yourself from those kinds of suggestions, lest the forces of evil turn that trait against you.

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useraccount In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 18:49:28 +0000 UTC]

My personal headcanon is that Fluttershy is estranged from her mother (her father was eaten by a dragon). She comes from a long line of top flyers, and her mother constantly pushed and shoved her toward a career in flying, hence her reluctant acceptance into Flight Camp. Fluttershy can keep up with Rainbow Dash even without any sort of training (of course, since RD's cutie mark is speed, she could easily outpace Fluttershy if she wanted to) That's inborn talent.

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Couch-Crusader In reply to useraccount [2012-12-18 21:58:42 +0000 UTC]

Ouch, that's quite a violent end for Flutterdad. You and I have a brainwave there, though--I like to believe Fluttershy's parents ARE involved with dragon affairs, especially when it comes to keeping them out of Equestria as a special division of the royal guard.

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useraccount In reply to Couch-Crusader [2012-12-19 04:50:14 +0000 UTC]

Nopony except Fluttershy seems to be afraid of dragons, despite the fact that a dragon could very well eat a pony in one bite. So, the reason Fluttershy is so afraid of dragons is because her father was eaten by one.

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LanceOmikron In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 18:47:34 +0000 UTC]

I... I think I just got blindsided by a tear-jerker. Well played. T_T

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Couch-Crusader In reply to LanceOmikron [2012-12-18 21:56:49 +0000 UTC]

Excellent. My dastardly scheme is paying dividends.

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coolclaytony In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 18:45:54 +0000 UTC]

I mean its just sad.
She has a tortise.
She has an apprentise.
But no family...tise.

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Couch-Crusader In reply to coolclaytony [2012-12-18 21:56:17 +0000 UTC]

Ahahaha, nice.

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coolclaytony In reply to Couch-Crusader [2012-12-19 03:09:49 +0000 UTC]

You bet your velvet lined panties it is lad!

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DC13master In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 18:44:44 +0000 UTC]

Too many feels

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Freilaclanbarin In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 18:38:27 +0000 UTC]

...RAINBOW! ....I'll be your brother RD...

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coolclaytony In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 18:35:36 +0000 UTC]

Dang; Stubio B, you really need to get on this.

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AlanES In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 18:19:36 +0000 UTC]

There's always Season 4, Dash.

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