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Description
Name: Burningpaw
Age: 7moons (7 months)
Gender: Tom
Clan: 
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance: Pale Ginger tabby tom with Ginger coloured tail and ears with dark Ginger tabby-markings, White paws and pale Creamy-Brown eyes
Personality: Burningpaw is straight out said a trouble-maker. After his parents' and siblings' deaths he has lost positive look in the life and in the worst case he releases his pain on others. Maybe once he becomes a warrior he gets to understand world better?
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Family
Brightskies (dead) - Mother
Littlestar (dead) - Father
Vixenkit (dead) - Sister
Cavernkit (dead) - Brother
Kindlekit (dead???) - Brother (or Sister???)
Carrotkit (dead) - Brother
Mate: **open (Crush part)**
Kits ---
Mentor: Frostfur
Apprentice: **Too young to train any**
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History:
Burningkit was born for Brightskies and Littlestar along with his sibblings, Vixenkit, Carrotkit, Kindlekit and Cavernkit, which Carrotkit and Kindlekit died right away and it didn't take long that also Cavernkit was dead also. Burningkit spent most of his time with Vixenkit or just wondering around the camp.
Littlestar, Burningkit's father, dies and Burningkit gets more determined about his dream to follow his father's pawsteps, no matter what it would take from him.
After Vixenkit's death, Burningkit tried to find someone else or elses to play with him and he soon found himself in a "competion" with Ripplekit, a she-kit younger than him. She though became an apprentice before him and he began to grow jelousity-ship towards her. Just before he was about to get apprentice as well, his mother Brightskies died too, leaving him to be only one left in his family. This drove him into despression that left him in the nursery for one more extra moon.
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After a very long and awaited time, Burningkit becomes finally a Burningpaw and gets Frostfur as his mentor **WIP**
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Relationships:
1st thoughts: "I don't know her. I've only seen her in my camp"
2nd thoughts: "
thoughts: "I don't know her enough well too. Just the same as with Moonwing; I've only seen her in the camp"
thoughts: "He's great warrior! He even played with me when I was a kit..."
thoughts: "In the first place, she wouldn't have deserved to become a warrior before me! I should've left the nursery before her and be on the place she's now!"
thoughts: "Ripplewing's brother, I used to play with him when we were kits... We've distanced"
thoughts: "...I still think my father was the best leader this Clan could handle"
thoughts: "...She retried?"
thoughts: "Shadowkit's father...Who's from...ClawClan?"
thoughts: "He's a nice guy! He has got some energy and all...he's good to play/hang out with...We should spend more time"
thoughts: "Ripplewing's friend..."
thoughts: "a tom that Ripplewing used to spend a lot time with..."
thoughts: "..."
thoughts: "*sighs*...I am going to follow your pawsteps, father, and I promise to do my best to reach as high as you did"
thoughts: "My bother...who's dead *sigh*"
thoughts: "My sister and only she-kit in my litter! She's quiet but I still like to play with her"
thoughts: "Tom I've played few times with... He's also Dewstar's mate"
thoughts: "She's warrior of my Clan! He taught some fishing for me and Ripplepaw. She's nice"
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Other cats of mine in The-Six-Clans
Dustlight - FeatherClan
Duskflower - FeatherClan
Fallpetal - FeatherClan
Sorrelkit - FeatherClan
Flamedapple - SparkClan
Redpaw - SparkClan
Ripplewing - MistClan
Burningpaw - MistClan
Shadestream - TornadoClan
Bluepaw - TornadoClan
Froststar - ClawClan
Blaze - Rogue/Non Clan
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Crowpaw perked her ears, quite at shock of what he was saying. "Oh, I see...." She whispered, lowering her gaze for a moment. She wasn't sure of how she should react, this information was quite new to her. She thought that it was mostly because of how she became an apprentice and warrior before her, and nothing more than that. "Burningpaw...." Crowpaw began, but she was unable to find the words to say.
(Oh no thats okay! I think that is a really interesting twist. xD)
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"...?" Burningpaw lifted his eyebrow, giving a questioning glance at the grey apprentice.
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"It's nothing." She meowed more cheerfully, smiling. "Maybe you should just tell her how you feel, and see where it goes from there...? It probably would make things easier on the both of you then." She mewed.
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Burningpaw halted for a moment. "...You see... it is not that simple." He mewed, hint of stammer on his tone yet his voice was still staying steady.
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"..How come...?" Crowpaw inquired, tilting her head to the side ever so slightly.
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"She enjoyed her company with Rainpool and now she seems to get so well with Sandstripe so yeah... I just feel alike it is better to let it be." He explained before turning to look at the sky. "Besides StarClan has doomed me familyless, maybe even friendless."
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"That's not true Burningpaw, I can be your friend after all." Crowpaw meowed, slowly padding over to sit beside the rock Burningpaw was on, gazing up at the sky as the stars began to come out. "You might not think you have any family or friends, but really you do. After all, they are watching over you from Starclan."
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"I know it. But... They're not around. Like around around." Burningpaw mewed with hint of sadness on his tone. Letting a sigh he returned his gaze to the ground and glanced at the stream that was streaming across the rock they were sitting on.
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Crowpaw blinked her eyes sympathetically. "Yeah, I know that Burningpaw." She meowed softly, giving him a soft nudge on the shoulder. "How about I make a promise..." Crowpaw whispered. "Would you like that?"
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"A promise?" Burningpaw echoed and turned to face Crowpaw his head briefly tilted. "What kind of promise?"
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Crowpaw looked down at her paws. "Yeah...." Crowpaw mumbled, then smiled a little. "A promise to always be your friend and never leave you no matter what happens. That way, you wont ever be lonely."
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Burningpaw opened his jaws first for a protest but didn't say anything. She will just follow me no matter where I go... It just would be useless... Besides, would it be that bad in the end? Maybe the only thing I need is company over all... He was still few more moments before he sighed and finally shut his jaws. "...Okay then." He mewed with a slight nod.
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Sure,Here ya go!
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Alright; Could you start?^^
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I hope Comments are okay.
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Sootpaw Awkwardly shuffled her paws as she walked.The she-cat was quite nervous around her new clanmates but she didn't find any problem with sleeping in a den with them.She then spotted burningpaw and hurried over."H-Hey..W-Whats your name?"
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Burningpaw was sitting aside of the camp staring at the sky semi-serious expression drawn on his face. Hearing up some paw steps to approach her, he didn't react anything until he heard Sootpaw's mew and he blinked and turned his gaze at her before turning his head. "My name is Burningpaw" He replied her tone showing no signs of friendliness. "I assume you're just another apprentice of this Clan; just like me?" He asked in exchange.
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"I'm Sootpaw." She replied quickly before sitting down."I Just Joined the clan not too long ago,But yea.I'm apprentice just like you burningpaw."
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"Alright then" Burningpaw replied his chest rising up by a sigh and he rolled briefly his eyes. "I see that Wolfstar is desperately wanting new warriors in this Clan; after some of them left" he mewed his tone neutral and his expression still the same. "And if you ask, no I don't despise nonClan cats"
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Sootpaw shuffled her paws awkwardly before speaking once again."My mother had been one of the warriors to leave.I felt as If I needed to make it up to her and show her that her kits could be great warriors." Sootpaw said softly before continuing on."One of my brothers came with me.My other two and my sister are back as loners with my father."
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"I see." Burningpaw replied bluntly and nodded. "Well, at least you got some siblings", he mewed with a shrug as remembering his own bad luck how he didn't anymore have his siblings or his parents. He still looked up to his father, Littlestar, who was leader before Dewstar and he couldn't help but vow for that he would one day become Burningstar by himself.
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The tabby flattened her ears as she looked at the pale blue sky."Who are your parents?" She asked the ginger tom.Her pale sea green eyes glistened with a slight sadness as she looked down at her paws.The young she-cat had known of dewstar and Wolfstar from her mother,Wavesoul,She knew very little about littlestar.Only knowing he had been leader before dewstar.
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"My parents...?" Burningpaw echoed and followed her gaze. "Brightskies was my mom; she is the most beautiful she-cat I know. And Littlestar was my father, he led this Clan before Dewstar... and I'd have hoped he would've done it further..." He mewed hint of sadness darkening her tone but his expression was still. "One day I am going to be like him! Just wait and see!" He vowed on his dream his head and chin high.
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Her eyes had lit up once had had spoken littlestars name."You're the son of a leader!" Excitement shone in her voice.Before talking again she gave her head a little shake as she realized they were dead just from his tone."Burningpaw,With that determination I know you'll be leader someday!"
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"Yes I am", Burningpaw replied suddenly feeling a bit taken off by his guard. "T-thanks!" He added his ears prickling by the semi uncomfortable feeling on his spine as he had got more attention as he was expecting to. "I...er...I hope so...Like one day, yeah", He mewed yet only thing he managed to do was stammering.
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"No Problem." Sootpaw purred before continuing on."Even if you don't become leader or deputy, You can still become the best Warrior that Mistclan ever knew!"
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"...Umm, true" Burningpaw agreed wondering whether to feel happy and grateful about the comments or still feel that it wouldn't be enough. His goal over all was to be leader like his father but being still memorable warrior sounded somewhat good.
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Role-play with Snowpaw?
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Sorry I am now staying out from new roleplays since I have so many going on atm xD; Please try later!
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Sure Flare! I know you are real busy with art and animations and all that. Maybe you can notify me when you can role-play?
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Kk!
(I know this is out of nowhere but can I just say your one of my idols?)
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I don't remember you mentioning about that?xD
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Well I know but I wanted to mention it now. XD
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I am good, you?^^
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I'm okay, but I'll be better.
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Sure~ *replied the older comment*
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I pass this one since once again I am getting into bunch of roleplays xD'' Suggest again later! Maybe then you have better luck
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ok! same :I i should really finish some role pays
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Oh by the way I'm taking over Kindlekit :3 But it will be a girl this time~
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Ooh did you get premissions and all?o:
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Well Sprite said I could so 
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Aah you're talking about ~Sammsy ?:3
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Alrighty :3 Good luck with her~
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