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Published: 2013-04-05 15:27:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 4677; Favourites: 68; Downloads: 11
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Fixed description and updated his application; I don't care if there is coding mistakes in the description, I have literally given this fixed description for hour and half so Idc now if it doesn't look perfect



Name: Burningpaw

Age: 7moons (7 months)

Gender: Tom


Clan: MistClan

Rank: Apprentice



Appearance: Pale Ginger tabby tom with Ginger coloured tail and ears with dark Ginger tabby-markings,  White paws and pale Creamy-Brown eyes



Personality: Burningpaw is straight out said a trouble-maker. After his parents' and siblings' deaths he has lost positive look in the life and in the worst case he releases his pain on others. Maybe once he becomes a warrior he gets to understand world better?


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Family

Brightskies (dead) - Mother

Littlestar (dead) - Father

Vixenkit (dead)  - Sister

Cavernkit (dead) - Brother

Kindlekit (dead???) - Brother (or Sister???)

Carrotkit (dead) - Brother


Mate: **open (Crush part)**

Kits ---


Mentor: Frostfur


Apprentice: **Too young to train any**


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History:


Burningkit was born for Brightskies and Littlestar along with his sibblings, Vixenkit, Carrotkit, Kindlekit and Cavernkit, which Carrotkit and Kindlekit died right away and it didn't take long that also Cavernkit was dead also. Burningkit spent most of his time with Vixenkit or just wondering around the camp.

Littlestar, Burningkit's father, dies and Burningkit gets more determined about his dream to follow his father's pawsteps, no matter what it would take from him.

After Vixenkit's death, Burningkit tried to find someone else or elses to play with him and he soon found himself in a "competion" with Ripplekit, a she-kit younger than him. She though became an apprentice before him and he began to grow jelousity-ship towards her. Just before he was about to get apprentice as well, his mother Brightskies died too, leaving him to be only one left in his family. This drove him into despression that left him in the nursery for one more extra moon.

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After a very long and awaited time, Burningkit becomes finally a Burningpaw and gets Frostfur as his mentor **WIP**


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Relationships:


Don't know...

Friend

Good Friend

Best Friend

Crush

Love

Hate/Jealousy/Dislike

Respect

Family

Mate


FeatherClan


SparkClan


MistClan


Moonwing (xAquaMoonx )

1st thoughts: "I don't know her. I've only seen her in my camp"

2nd thoughts: "


Cocoafur (xAquaMoonx )

thoughts: "I don't know her enough well too. Just the same as with Moonwing; I've only seen her in the camp"


Olivecloud (Gingerblazee )

thoughts: "He's great warrior! He even played with me when I was a kit..."


Ripplewing (FlareAKACuteFlareon )

thoughts: "In the first place, she wouldn't have deserved to become a warrior before me! I should've left the nursery before her and be on the place she's now!"


Galefrost (Flaring--Supernova )

thoughts: "Ripplewing's brother, I used to play with him when we were kits... We've distanced"


Wolfstar (gerbutt )

thoughts: "...I still think my father was the best leader this Clan could handle"


Dewstar (BizTheWolfLover )

thoughts: "...She retried?"


Hawkflight (gerbutt )

thoughts: "Shadowkit's father...Who's from...ClawClan?"


Shadowpaw (gerbutt )

thoughts: "He's a nice guy! He has got some energy and all...he's good to play/hang out with...We should spend more time"


Shineflare (gerbutt )

thoughts: "Ripplewing's friend..."


Rainpool (Gingerblazee )

thoughts: "a tom that Ripplewing used to spend a lot time with..."


TornadoClan


ClawClan


Other


StarClan


Brightskies  (Kittysprite )

thoughts: "..."


Littlestar  (little-bash )

thoughts: "*sighs*...I am going to follow your pawsteps, father, and I promise to do my best to reach as high as you did"


Cavernkit  (little-bash )

thoughts: "My bother...who's dead *sigh*"


Vixenkit (Kittysprite )

thoughts: "My sister and only she-kit in my litter! She's quiet but I still like to play with her"


Swiftstorm (XxAyakoxX )

thoughts: "Tom I've played few times with... He's also Dewstar's mate"


Spiritfrost (Asuye )

thoughts: "She's warrior of my Clan! He taught some fishing for me and Ripplepaw. She's nice"


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Other cats of mine in The-Six-Clans


Dustlight - FeatherClan

Duskflower - FeatherClan

Fallpetal - FeatherClan

Sorrelkit - FeatherClan

Flamedapple - SparkClan

Redpaw - SparkClan

Ripplewing - MistClan

Burningpaw - MistClan

Shadestream - TornadoClan

Bluepaw - TornadoClan

Froststar - ClawClan

Blaze - Rogue/Non Clan

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Comments: 256

blazinq In reply to ??? [2013-04-06 10:18:53 +0000 UTC]

Do you wanna maybe rp with Olivecloud sometime? ^^ he's so cute!

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CuteFlare In reply to blazinq [2013-04-06 10:20:27 +0000 UTC]

Sure~ ^^ Now maybe? Would you like to start? Or will I?:3
and thanks~

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blazinq In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-06 10:23:49 +0000 UTC]

Ok you start and comments or notes?

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CuteFlare In reply to blazinq [2013-04-06 14:24:31 +0000 UTC]

I guess comments?^^ Since it works pretty naturally between us~
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Burningkit was sitting outside of the nursery. Brightskies was sleeping along with his other siblings I'm going to die by boredom! he thought and stared the camp

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blazinq In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-06 14:35:27 +0000 UTC]

Ok yh :3

Olivecloud lay in the sun just by the nursery, letting the sun sink into his black coat. He opened one eye as he heard footsteps, he saw Burningkit standing outside the entrance to the nursery muttering to himself.

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CuteFlare In reply to blazinq [2013-04-06 14:40:53 +0000 UTC]

Finally Burningkit decided to do something. He padded to the fresh-kill pile and poked one minnow in it. He mewed in surprise as it fell on him and he quickly moved away. Padding back, he sniffed it and leaped at it "No one messes with me!"

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blazinq In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-06 14:52:26 +0000 UTC]

Olivecloud watched and smiled at the kit as he leap about fighting a dead fish. He crept up to the kit and just as Burningkit was going to pounce Olivecloud said 'Hey'. He laughed as the kit almost jumped out of his skin.

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CuteFlare In reply to blazinq [2013-04-06 15:04:56 +0000 UTC]

Turning around he prickled his ears as he saw Olivecloud "Umm.. Hi!" he mewed quickly and looked at the fish then at him "Umm... I was doing nothing! Not about to kill this fish anyway..." His voice trailed off and he bowed his head

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blazinq In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-06 15:53:59 +0000 UTC]

Olivecloud just grinned. "You seemed to of given it a good beating!" He said looking down at the ruined minnow. "What about instead of you fighting that fish, you attack me."

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CuteFlare In reply to blazinq [2013-04-06 15:59:19 +0000 UTC]

Hearing the suggestion Burningkit was again on his paws his tail waving wildly "Alright~" he crouched down and started to circle the older warrior

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blazinq In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-06 19:36:12 +0000 UTC]

Olivecloud lifted his tail up and put his head low to the ground. He watched as Burningkit circled him, swishing his orange tail back and forth.

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CuteFlare In reply to blazinq [2013-04-07 10:57:58 +0000 UTC]

For a while circling Burningkit leaped and gave a soft blow to tom's muzzle "Take this ClawClan warrior!" he mewed as he backed off for new blow

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blazinq In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-07 11:40:12 +0000 UTC]

Olivecloud narrowed his eyes at the little cat then just as he took off for a second leap Olivecloud dodged. Burningkit landed then sprinted back. Olivecloud lunged forward and clipped the kits feet.

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CuteFlare In reply to blazinq [2013-04-07 11:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Falling on his muzzle, Burningkit let out of snort "hmph..." getting up he raced again towards Olivecloud he leaped, this time at his tail tip and bit it softly.

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blazinq In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-07 11:44:46 +0000 UTC]

Olivecloud spun round to find the kit clinging to his tail. He laughed then rolled over, flicking his tail. Burningkit still clung on. Olivecloud then tried slowed hopping about to see if the kit could still hang on.

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CuteFlare In reply to blazinq [2013-04-07 11:51:29 +0000 UTC]

Surprised by the leap Burningkit opened her jaws and let the tail tip go, landing on his four paws "That was cool!" he boasted "Let's do it again!"

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blazinq In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-07 13:11:20 +0000 UTC]

He grinned. "That's if you can get back on my tail" he shouted as he bolted away from the kit. He heard scrabbling as the kit tried to keep up with him.

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CuteFlare In reply to blazinq [2013-04-07 14:39:15 +0000 UTC]

Burningkit ran after him I'm never gonna catch him like this... he thought and then an idea flashed inside his little mind. Instead running after he ran half cricling him and then crapped Olivecloud's tail between his jaws

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blazinq In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-07 15:27:55 +0000 UTC]

Olivecloud jumped round, a little shocked the kit had got him. *He's clever... Very clever* he thought. "Ok you got me" Olivecloud said slowing down.

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CuteFlare In reply to blazinq [2013-04-07 15:57:47 +0000 UTC]

Purring Burningkit let go off his tail and bounced in the air. After jumping around, he slowed down and looked up at him "Are you hungry? I can bring ya a fish?"

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blazinq In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-07 16:59:08 +0000 UTC]

"Ok!" He purred at Burningkit. Olivecloud looked over to the nursery where Brightskies was stirring. Then you'd better get back to your mum he smiled at the kit.

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CuteFlare In reply to blazinq [2013-04-08 12:52:49 +0000 UTC]

"Okay!" Burningkit mewed "Thank you for playing with me!" he mewed after running at his mother and other siblings

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LazulineWolf In reply to ??? [2013-04-05 18:56:42 +0000 UTC]

agh! luv it ^^

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CuteFlare In reply to LazulineWolf [2013-04-06 09:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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LazulineWolf In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-06 13:48:31 +0000 UTC]

All of your art deserves to be greatly complimented!

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CuteFlare In reply to LazulineWolf [2013-04-06 14:33:56 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank yew~

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LazulineWolf In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-06 15:26:08 +0000 UTC]

yw ^^

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Vilefighter In reply to ??? [2013-04-05 16:55:06 +0000 UTC]

he does have collours to be in mistclan, very suiting.
someone, get a firefighter! he has fire in his eyes! such a passion...i wonder for what...

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CuteFlare In reply to Vilefighter [2013-04-06 09:18:53 +0000 UTC]

Haha xD

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Vilefighter In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-06 16:00:55 +0000 UTC]

no srsly, for what?

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CuteFlare In reply to Vilefighter [2013-04-07 11:27:09 +0000 UTC]

Umm for that joke? or at least I found it funny x3

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Vilefighter In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-07 11:46:49 +0000 UTC]

thanks, but i ment:
"someone, get a firefighter! he has fire in his eyes! such a passion...i wonder for what..."
what passion he has and for what?

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CuteFlare In reply to Vilefighter [2013-04-09 17:32:10 +0000 UTC]

Well... He loves adventures xD So yeah

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Vilefighter In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-09 18:11:33 +0000 UTC]

"ah, the soul of an adventurer is the flame in the iris" -made it up

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CuteFlare In reply to Vilefighter [2013-04-12 11:43:36 +0000 UTC]

Sweet

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Vilefighter In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-12 15:33:39 +0000 UTC]

but there ain't sugar in this pic!!

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Pigletor In reply to ??? [2013-04-05 16:20:27 +0000 UTC]

Aw he looks so cute

If you ever wanna RP with Littlestar or Cavernkit lemme know

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CuteFlare In reply to Pigletor [2013-04-05 16:21:53 +0000 UTC]

I can RP now~ or anytime!
Thanks

Btw just side note was it your turn to reply to the Duskflower and Lionpaw RP?

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Pigletor In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-05 16:51:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I'm so sorry! I must have forgotten to let you go, I've taken Lionpaw and Snowpaw out of the group, cause I want to concentrate on Littlestar ^^ sorry I don't let you know sooner! D:

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CuteFlare In reply to Pigletor [2013-04-06 09:19:46 +0000 UTC]

Aah alright~
It's okay Don't you worry about it~ I'm fine with it ^^
Anyway... So...Through Notes or comments?c:

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Pigletor In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-06 10:54:27 +0000 UTC]

Notes please :3

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CuteFlare In reply to Pigletor [2013-04-06 14:23:01 +0000 UTC]

Okay~ ^^ Do you wanna start or me?xD

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Pigletor In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-06 14:41:55 +0000 UTC]

Can you please? ^^

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CuteFlare In reply to Pigletor [2013-04-06 14:45:01 +0000 UTC]

Sure~ Sending a note!

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skitty2bruce In reply to ??? [2013-04-05 15:50:07 +0000 UTC]

aww! cute!

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CuteFlare In reply to skitty2bruce [2013-04-05 16:12:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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skitty2bruce In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-05 16:39:04 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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Auroraclaw In reply to ??? [2013-04-05 15:49:00 +0000 UTC]

Awesome ;3;

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CuteFlare In reply to Auroraclaw [2013-04-05 16:12:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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Auroraclaw In reply to CuteFlare [2013-04-05 16:22:08 +0000 UTC]

np

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