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DarkDutchess — Cycle of Strife
Published: 2004-12-23 07:01:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 147; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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The stacks down the block spew black smokewhere we once flew kites and laughed,
into evening's last ray...
...a smog clouding the minds of its own inventors,
coaxing them to
make more
delve deeper
into an already endless hole,
where the white rabbit of hope no longer exists.
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Comments: 1
This is really wonderful. Good break in between 3rd and 4th line, I really enjoy that. "make more / delve deeper" good power use here. very powerful stuff here, keep it up.
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