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drawingbugger [2013-02-02 22:27:58 +0000 UTC]

i agree with dr watchamacallit that the only improvement needed is the text. BUT everything else is superb. ur the best

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DR-WATCHAMACALLIT [2013-02-02 16:59:27 +0000 UTC]

Great work Dave I've been wanting to see this Graphic Novel of yours for a while so I'm glad you've finally got round to uploading bits of it

since yer wantin sum critique I'll give you my thoughts on what I like and dislike

GOOD
what can I say? has that nonsensical Kirkham feel to it
it's like opening birthday presents from strangers you never know what your gonna get
with your work I never know what your gonna do next and being able to keep it completley random and enjoyable to read at the same is awesome in my book I've known you for a while now so I know the style of strips you can come up with but this one shows your trying something new but still retaining your humour
Kind of reminds me of those collab strip we used to do except this one actually has a structured plot lol
the style is also great very stylish with the lines and negative space going on

BAD
While I do tend not to give constructive criticism to people as much as I used to mainly because when I have done in the past people get the wrong idea and get butt hurt lol but since yer askin for some honest critcism I can be as mean as I want MU HA HA.....just kiddin
the only thing I would say I had a problem with was the text
at times I found it hard to read either because it's too small or to scrunched up together I had a real hard time reading panel 7 because the writing is way too small.. If the comic was enlarged this would make it less painful on my eyes
you have to make the text work with the pictures so just keep in mind that other people will be reading this so just fix on keep your writing more neater and readable thats my only gripe the comic itself is beautiful we're all learning stuff all the time even me
but the more we look at things in a diffrent perspective the more things we can learn

overall brill comic mate you should be proud

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