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Demachic — When I cannot sleep

Published: 2011-05-14 11:55:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 59699; Favourites: 3629; Downloads: 142
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Description Poem about not being able to sleep like you could when you were a kid. =]


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Awesome9000 [2011-07-07 05:57:28 +0000 UTC]

SOO TRUE! i can never sleep :/

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Xaishi In reply to ??? [2011-07-03 19:52:27 +0000 UTC]

Guh, story of my life. ._. I love your style. It's an adorable way to combine writing with visual art. C:

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jubeeajwee [2011-06-26 15:52:30 +0000 UTC]

I love your poems, I can always relate to them, and they have a very attractive rhythm.

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Djb645 In reply to ??? [2011-06-26 06:51:15 +0000 UTC]

So true. I have had the worst time trying to sleep recently. And its almost 2 in the morning.

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Karmadactyl [2011-06-21 04:48:18 +0000 UTC]

lol soooo ture its almost midnight and i'm wide awake:/....
i knew i should ahve drank that coffee at 3:1

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artorifreedom In reply to ??? [2011-06-14 12:56:18 +0000 UTC]

Featured [link]

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Perchling In reply to ??? [2011-06-13 05:12:09 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. I adore the presentation.

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Eziotehwomanizer [2011-06-12 02:33:00 +0000 UTC]

This one is so me.. lol.. I love it..

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wiggle97 In reply to ??? [2011-06-11 04:20:39 +0000 UTC]

aww its sooo truee

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Shikyo-Koinu In reply to ??? [2011-06-11 03:48:08 +0000 UTC]

This is very cute! I love how you ended it~ <3

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thecheergurl4u [2011-06-10 23:44:19 +0000 UTC]

IKR this happens to me all the time O_o i luv ur poems btw

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DCaddict [2011-06-10 21:17:27 +0000 UTC]

story of my life! lol

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jamdahxos [2011-06-10 21:15:41 +0000 UTC]

This might happen to me this summer vacation!
Hehehe

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TheAnalyzingDreamer [2011-06-10 19:32:40 +0000 UTC]

So MUCH true!
I sometimes wish I could switch off my mind

your poems are so cute,keep them flowing please

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SakuraUtsukushii [2011-06-10 18:42:28 +0000 UTC]

True, dat. ^.^

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punk0000 [2011-06-10 17:27:13 +0000 UTC]

XD

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MissStar489 In reply to ??? [2011-06-10 17:12:15 +0000 UTC]

this hapins to me wen the rado dies I NEED MY MUSIC TO ZZZZZZ! XP

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Terrashark [2011-06-06 01:53:39 +0000 UTC]

This is me most of the time. XD Although I mostly stay up 'till midnight, then go to bed and hope to be asleep at 5. >3<"

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FreyanKitsune In reply to ??? [2011-05-23 02:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Awesome poem!

Having that problem right this instance as it's 4am n I've got school tomorrow as well :/

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FatesGuardian In reply to ??? [2011-05-21 07:34:20 +0000 UTC]

XD You just described me to a point. It's 3:33am right now... Whoa...freaky...

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chemicalromacefreak In reply to ??? [2011-05-21 03:14:42 +0000 UTC]

the feelings are mutual -.-
great poem!

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Kubulu [2011-05-19 02:55:47 +0000 UTC]

I can definitely relate.

I adore this format you have chosen. I haven't seen anything like it here on dA! It's wonderful and original

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nightworldcutie34 In reply to ??? [2011-05-18 22:31:24 +0000 UTC]

i can relate 2 that

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KiLin7 In reply to ??? [2011-05-18 18:18:00 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, love it! So true! Although I'm happy I usually fall asleep quite fast (after maybe an hour hehe...)

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PayneB In reply to ??? [2011-05-18 12:26:57 +0000 UTC]

love this so me lolololol awesome !!!!

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Cicillia In reply to ??? [2011-05-18 09:14:39 +0000 UTC]

I really enjoy reading your poems You're amazing at them!

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Trziethetiger In reply to ??? [2011-05-18 04:56:26 +0000 UTC]

again cute

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caleb247 [2011-05-18 04:01:32 +0000 UTC]

I love your poems. <3 ^v^

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CloudedRain1331 In reply to ??? [2011-05-18 01:25:25 +0000 UTC]

This happens so much in my life and my friends'

Your poetry is great ^.^b

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stitchsmile In reply to ??? [2011-05-17 07:49:17 +0000 UTC]

That is so my life right now

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sORRYbUTnO In reply to ??? [2011-05-17 01:07:44 +0000 UTC]

seriously, you're the next Shel Silverstein

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Sh3ikha In reply to ??? [2011-05-16 20:42:38 +0000 UTC]

Amen....lol

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GamerNinja280 In reply to ??? [2011-05-16 11:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Happens to me all the time. This also really inspired me to draw a pic, thanks!

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AnimeOtaku4444 In reply to ??? [2011-05-16 09:06:35 +0000 UTC]

That's a situation I'm VERY familiar with, particularly during the school holidays when I turn into a total night-owl.

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xXxDemonprincessxXx In reply to ??? [2011-05-16 07:04:42 +0000 UTC]

Now this one I can fully relate to. It's 3:01AM at the moment! And I'm not sleepy yet. Anyway I love this poem!

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DobbySmock [2011-05-16 06:15:22 +0000 UTC]

Haha this pretty much is my life at the moment.

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YukiH In reply to ??? [2011-05-16 04:08:36 +0000 UTC]

LMAO so true, esp during finals week when you're stressed. Good stories!

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SilentBlackCat [2011-05-16 03:34:40 +0000 UTC]

Ugh, I'm An Insomniac, And Sleepless Night Suck.

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verryrobust In reply to ??? [2011-05-16 02:53:14 +0000 UTC]

If I don't sleep by 10, I also hope to be out by 3amXD

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Moa-isa-JediKnight [2011-05-15 23:25:52 +0000 UTC]

amazing! insomnia strikes us all, no?

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Icelandic-catlover [2011-05-15 23:03:25 +0000 UTC]

that's so true ! I just love your little poems, they actually make me smile

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love-or-not In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 21:51:43 +0000 UTC]

so true im so sleepy but end up wit a boi on my mind or a test i didnt study 4 or wondering if mework isright because it's my turn to say them in frnt of the class i love all your poems why cant people b lke that in eng histry

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Quincux In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 20:31:40 +0000 UTC]

Your poems are all so sweet! I love what you do with the color, too, and I can't help but smile at the doodles!
b(o3o)d

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PatternPaw In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 20:23:38 +0000 UTC]

True,

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shamulover4life In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 20:23:11 +0000 UTC]

Your poetry is fantastic, and beautifully presented in all its colour! I love it, keep up the great work!

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CherryChrisyPop In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 20:18:57 +0000 UTC]

ive had sooooooooooo many nights like that.
it take so long to fall asleep...

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pineacus [2011-05-15 20:04:04 +0000 UTC]

loving it! i enjoy greatly the creativity in the outlook. :>> deserves a fave!

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Mundo-Azul In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 20:03:04 +0000 UTC]

My mother would relate to this very well, the poor thing.
I adore these little poems. You go a step beyond just writing them when you highlight certain words with multiple colors, and the adorable little drawings at the end of each one. Gives them an extra coating of fun. :>

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emi764 [2011-05-15 19:23:43 +0000 UTC]

Your poems are just adorable X3

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Sound-Of-Soul In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 19:19:46 +0000 UTC]

This is my life.... im so sleep deprived.....

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