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Demachic — When I cannot sleep

Published: 2011-05-14 11:55:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 59699; Favourites: 3629; Downloads: 142
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Description Poem about not being able to sleep like you could when you were a kid. =]


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safirediaz [2011-05-15 01:38:47 +0000 UTC]

I didn't go to bed until 4, tingly feet

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ManaxRyouxBakura In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 01:27:30 +0000 UTC]

My life

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TamarRei [2011-05-15 01:15:23 +0000 UTC]

lately I don't even go to bed until three...

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cloud265 In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 01:14:05 +0000 UTC]

I totally agree with this poem. It is incredibly true.

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TDDtheDeviant [2011-05-15 01:06:44 +0000 UTC]

Great poem!! I am the same way about sleep!

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booboobear99 In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 01:00:09 +0000 UTC]

nice ^.^

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LLawliet-X In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 00:56:47 +0000 UTC]

I'm lucky if I can fall asleep by 5am...

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V-Oblivion [2011-05-15 00:49:08 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, and so true too.

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iiKagoKitty In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 00:40:18 +0000 UTC]

I love your poems, they're so colorful and sweet. <3

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IronClark In reply to ??? [2011-05-15 00:28:44 +0000 UTC]

SO true!

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BlackRoseSinger [2011-05-15 00:11:33 +0000 UTC]

<3

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Weirdeh [2011-05-14 23:47:34 +0000 UTC]

sounds a lot like me xD

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ShadeROCKS [2011-05-14 23:39:32 +0000 UTC]

i might not like poetry but......I LOVE YOUR POETRY!!!

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Chigagigaroo [2011-05-14 23:30:09 +0000 UTC]

Aww, very cute style!

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albanian0 [2011-05-14 23:27:09 +0000 UTC]

May I suggest meditation?

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zexioncat [2011-05-14 23:23:54 +0000 UTC]

So very, very true. I love this~ ;u;

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taylorem In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 23:23:03 +0000 UTC]

Love it So true.

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GardenofSpice [2011-05-14 23:19:42 +0000 UTC]

story of my life 8)

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AStarWithNoSky In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 23:19:40 +0000 UTC]

I love your poems ! They're really cute, & I love the colours added to it. :3

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ppleater In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 23:17:06 +0000 UTC]

It's the opposite for me. My childhood was filled with many sleepless hours. Now I can be out in ten minutes at most.

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kitsunegirl14 In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 23:03:14 +0000 UTC]

thats my life.

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Sapphireskull [2011-05-14 22:54:57 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like me xD

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ninjagummybear In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 22:44:21 +0000 UTC]

haha your so right, that's exactly what i do and think when i can't go to sleep

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K-fish In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 21:03:17 +0000 UTC]

wow, I love how you write your poems, they look so much more colorfull and interesting than if it was just text <3 keep it up

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CHaRBini In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 20:51:20 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I know the feeling! Sleeping was so easy when I was a little child...

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pristinepanda In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 20:49:26 +0000 UTC]

this is cute

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Eurykins In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 20:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Awww that's adorable <3 I love the rainbow colors and the little :\ face at the end > u <

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Saraez [2011-05-14 20:41:35 +0000 UTC]

Gaah... I understand this all too well. It's an excellent poem.

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RaeMina In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 20:31:54 +0000 UTC]

I like how you're poems are all decorated Gives it a very nice touch!

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specialk669 In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 20:31:35 +0000 UTC]

i like it!

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Paimelu In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 20:24:33 +0000 UTC]

So sweet. <3 I love the layout of the poem, with the colors and all. *o*

I have the opposite experience; when I was a kid, I would lay in bed for hours and not be able to fall asleep. But now that I'm older, I sleep easier than I ever have in my life!

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ApocalypticAya In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 20:23:02 +0000 UTC]

I love this X3. I can totally relate X3.

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sparkly55123 In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 20:04:46 +0000 UTC]

I can totally relate. thanks for posting. ^^

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ToxicSapphire In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 20:03:52 +0000 UTC]

Amazing poem!
It reminds me of what happens every night.
It like it's impossible for me to fall asleep before midnight!

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Dulololove In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 20:01:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for writing this! I love this poem. I read some of your others, but I can really relate to this one. I've had trouble falling asleep since I was little, but, as I got older, it got a lot worse. A lot of the time I feel just like this, wishing I could still fall asleep like I used to be able to.

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joyus-artist [2011-05-14 19:56:30 +0000 UTC]

this is true, I lay in bed and end up thinking about something as I stare at some random point on the wall or ceiling and next thing I know its 3/4 in the morning. So good job, this is so true.

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Ebvardh In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 19:43:29 +0000 UTC]


Does anyone have a normal sleeping schedule anymore? No. No they don't.

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KreoWolf [2011-05-14 19:39:02 +0000 UTC]

so.... true... ; v;....

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ciron24 In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 19:30:49 +0000 UTC]

I don't think I could agree more with this. Really well-written, too.

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Teams--Black [2011-05-14 19:30:46 +0000 UTC]

wow that's exactly how I feel And 3 is even my goal every night haha.

I love all the color you use, it really adds to the poem

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ParadoxComplex [2011-05-14 19:13:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh I know how that feels all to well. Lil kids are so lucky they can sleep all through the night and be all energized come morning. But when you get older it seems you can't do that anymore.

A great poem none the less. Simple yet it really hits home for me. And I like how your layout your poems they are so colorful.

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kumuri-kawaii In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 19:09:46 +0000 UTC]

This is so true...i wonder why.... = ___ = it's like this for me every night....

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hoefer13 In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 18:03:02 +0000 UTC]

haha this one is by far my favorite of your poems

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blizz-ma-tizz101 In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 17:38:27 +0000 UTC]

Haha this is so true! I love it!

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Kuurankukka In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 17:32:59 +0000 UTC]

more than true oh yes

nice ... layout? I like how you write poems :3

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Emerald-SunSet In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 17:15:40 +0000 UTC]

cute

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Stixenon [2011-05-14 17:10:23 +0000 UTC]

Owwh i know just what you mean>_< when i was little it took like 10 mins to sleep and now i can lie awake for 2-3 hours

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Lady-Cheshire In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 17:00:59 +0000 UTC]

that is so cute and true

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Rairox64 [2011-05-14 15:23:13 +0000 UTC]

Very true.

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Sartosis In reply to ??? [2011-05-14 15:12:00 +0000 UTC]

Adore it.

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