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In a faraway galaxy, On a faraway Planet, in the future year of 5059 P.T. (That is, Planetary Travel)A magnificent and massive story unfolds. But he label above the amazing contradictory to the above statement tis amazing story doesn't begin on 5059. It begins 2021 AD, with a family that barely makes enough to feed themselves yet somehow affords cable TV.
Readers of the present, I give you the story of the Future, created in the past.
WELCOME TO THE FUTURE
By DivideandConquer1010.
IF YOU DONT LIKE VERY DESCRIPTIVE WRITINGS, COME NO FURTHER.
Chapter 1: Humble Beginnings.
Part 1: The Shanty on the Edge of Nowhere.
(Note to the readers: I will continue to update the other parts and chapters later. Not daily, but later.)
The extraordinary story of a far distant Future had begun quite simply: it began on the very same planet 3000 years before. This Planet was not like or own, but its inhabitants were just like ours. This Planet was referred to by its inhabitants as Volcanx, named so because they lived inside a dormant volcano as big as all of Asia and Europe combined (which they are).
You see, Volcanx was a planet with little sunlight. It was light years away from its Solar System's Sun, and as such no life ever existed there, until space travelers figured out that a dormant volcano on that planet still resonated enough warmth to sustain life; but that's another story.
Inside the volcano, water flooded the lower fourth. Various rock spires protruded from the water like mesas: Perfect for small towns. One spire was a huge mountain instead of a mesa, off to the side of one massive mesa. This mountain was very steep, and as such it was difficult to climb, but near the bottom flat ledges made living possible. Only one house stood on this mountain, off to the side of the mesa known as Mio Mesa, a major city. This shantylike house literally existed on the edge of nowhere.
In this house, a family of 6 lived peacefully and comfortably. They did not make much money, as only two of them worked. The family consisted of 2 wives, 2 husbands, and 1 child for each set. Two brothers, who had married two sisters, had a grand total of two children. Lacking much space, the two children grew up accustomed to entertaining each other within the household, without the prescence of other children. A poor lifestyle indeed. No other children existed on the mountain, just the two. Their names were Isaac and Nameless- the second child was unfortunate enough to have unimaginative parents, so he was just referred to as "honey" and "Children." The two sisters and fathers names were unimportant to this story. Anyway, Naming aside, the six lived comfortably in this wooden shanty. The shanty itelf had two rooms- A living room/ kitchen mixture, split by a counter next to the front door, and off to the right, concealed by a curtain rather than a door, the bedroom of the first set of parents. The living room just had a couch and a massive flatscreen TV- no one knows how they got it. Then the shanty was built so as to have 2 more subterrainean floors, lead to by a door opposite the bedroom. Down here, all the utilities, other bedrooms, closets and Laboratories (one father was an inventor).
Now the action comes in. "Finally!" You say. Well get this straight: the greatest literature was 4:1 description to action. Anyway, the boys, over time, had grown. Only 3 parents remained when they both were 20 and 21 (one veing a few months older). The other father, the brother to the one that invented useless gismos, had died of old age. This made the two boys want to get out more and live life to the fullest, before it ended unsuspectfully. As such, the two began working in the nearby Mio City, helping the remaining father pay the inexistent bills. One of the two was inventionally inclined- Issac- just like his dad. The other wielded incredible strength and an interest in Middle Age weaponry, so he became a blacksmith, a very useless profession on a planet that had discovered the rapid fire rifle recently. The two had made friends, more so for nameless than Issac, as he was more outgoing. His pasttimes were operating on machinery such as cars, and practicing with his swords. He met an austrailian-like person whom he nicknamed Aussie (who the hell knows why) who also shared a suprising interest in motor vehicles. The two built an entire custom ATV from scratch, with the seats side by side so both could enjoy. They enjoyed riding it, as Issac enjoyed tinkering with science to enhance it. Everything seemed fine.
But then it happened. One morning, Nameless woke up to pancakes from his mom, and milk, and syrup (a feast as compared to what he normally got). He got dressed, ate, and declared he would go with Aussie to test a new accelerator Issac designed on the rugged terrain up the mountain. But when he looked downstairs, and at Isaac's Lab- he was nowhere to be found.
2 of the family were down, and 4 remained. The accelerator had failed in its test, resulting in no injury except for the injured pride of Nameless's lost brother. 10 years passed. Nmeless was now 30 years of age and still Nameless. It just so happened that on this particular day, 10 years later, in the year 2021 AD, it had been the 10th anniversary of the day that Issac had disappeared. As such, Nameless felt it his duty to take the ATV with Aussie up the mountain and test the accelerator device again, which he had been doing once every year. It never worked.
About halfway up the mountain, the engine stalled. It was because of the accelerator. It simply drew too much power. They stopped at a flat ledge nearby and Nameless got out to make adjustments. It was here that Time repeated itself. As Nameless fixed the vehicle, Something stirred nearby. An electric crackle. A spark. Then a blue, swirling vortex appeared as if out of nowhere! The two stared at it, trying to keep away from the magnificent force it pulled on them, or more specifically, Nameless. Aussie didn't have to hold onto anything except his hat. Nameless was being sucked in. A faint image appeared in the vortex. I was his lost brother. Except much older now, appearing 40. He called out, "Brother... The Future needs you, just as it needed me! Brother... come to the future with me!" "Issac? What-" "Just come! We need you!" Soon the vortex pull became overpowering and pulled Nameless in. And with that, the vortex snapped shut, and the lighting returned to normal, as it had darkened. Nameless was now gone. Aussie tried to file a report for a missing person by myterious vortex and call from the assumed dead, but no police station in Mio or the nearby Lavaridge would hear of it. The two brothers were in the future now, together, and safe, not to the knowledge of the 3 remaining parents, who over the course of 3000 years, had died. The vortex was a time vortex, by what Nameless could tell, or now as he was named, Hero. As far as he could tell from the newspaper with moving pictures describing him as the Sunshine City Hero of the Year, it was the year 5059, Planetary Travel Era, or P.T. War had recently ceased, and cars had learned to fly. Skyscrapers replaced all 1 or 2 story buildings, the city limit was 3. The future had come, and brought unexpected results...
WELCOME TO THE FUTURE Copyright by DivideandConquer1010 All Rights Reserved for those who ask for them. Welcome to the Future Chapter 1 Episode 1
Yeah, that's right- If i get good "reviews" I may be making more.
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DivideAndConquer1010 [2008-09-02 04:57:31 +0000 UTC]
And I forgot to mention- what you may post here is anything. Comments, whether good or bad, about my, er, Novel, are appreciated. If you think it sucks, say so. I will be pleased. If you think its good, speak up! My desicion to make more depends on my reviews, given by youse guys.
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