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Published: 2006-06-01 20:22:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 249; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description This is somthing random that took me an hour or more to draw again from a roleplay. That is my OC from an FMA rp called Tani She's kinda wih Roy Mustang but no one knows so shhhhhhhh! I didnt know where to put it so i guess i'll put it here... I plan on doing a 2nd piccy in this little series of events. Leave coments pweeease!
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crimsoncloverv [2006-06-02 16:11:24 +0000 UTC]

I like the direction, pose, and feel of this peice. She lookes happy and eager. You can almost feel it by looking, which is hard to do. However, there are a lot of poportion issues here. I like the shape of the right arm(my right.) But there's almost no shoulder there. And on the other arm, the shoulder is a little off. Maybe a bit too low. I like her body pretty well, except that her torso may need a little more shape/body too it. Aside from the nitpicky details, I really like it.

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