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Description Edit: dead project...Dunno if I should keep this pic up or delete it.

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Anyway, here's what happens in this scene.
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Naruto: ...

Sakura: so what do we do now?

Sasuke: Leave the brat at the first port and go on with our lives.

Sakura: we can’t do that, Sasuke-kun. You know how important he is! If he gets los-

Naruto: She’s right. He’s a Sarutobi, we can’t leave him on his own. If he gets killed or kidnapped, it’ll come bite us in the ass. Someone must have seen us near his ship.

Sasuke: Exactly! Why the hell did we have to save him?!

Naruto: They are our countrymen and they were attacked in front of us, everyone on his ship was killed! We couldn’t have left him alone in that wreck... Not even someone like you would.

Sakura: ...Naruto

Naruto: what?

Sakura: I have to agree with Sasuke, we were near a Suna trader fleet, they are allies with Leaf. Give or take a couple of hours, they would have rescued him anyway.

Sasuke: they’re not my countrymen.

Naruto: Sasuke...

Sasuke: What’s more we have a bloody Sarutobi on our hands, do you know what they will do to you if he gets so much as a scratch? They’ll flay you alive... I can’t go anywhere near leaf city, you know that.

Sakura: Actually you got that wrong, Sasuke-kun. Those punishments were only used by old generation Uchiha and Senju. Sarutobi clan are quite diplomatic. If I remember correctly, rumour has it that your own great grandfather had someone burned alive because he looked at him wrong.

Naruto: Yeah, your family is messed up man.

Sasuke: *nod* yeah, old Makoto was crazy.

Naruto: You’re no prize yourself.

Sasuke: *glare*

Sakura: Guys! Concentrate! What are we going to do wi*


*Crash**Boink*


Konohamaru: Ouch! That huuuuuurts. Blooooodd, my blooodd! ahhhhhhh!

Sakura: of course it hurts you idi--- your lordship, it’s a double edged sword. You’re not supposed to touch that. *fake smile*

Sasuke: I still say we leave the brat at the first port.

Naruto*glare*: we’ll have to split, Sakura take a scout vessel, some crew and go to Wind Port, check how much credit we still have with the traders’ guild and prepare for winter expedition. Sasu-

Sasuke: I’ll take 3 vessels and head north, I need a hunt or two.

Naru: Bu-

Sasuke: Enjoy babysitting, I’ll go pirate hunting. I hear Ol’Snake king is raiding Yuuehi Shores.

Naruto: Fuck you

Sasuke: I love you too.
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Comments: 176

e-nat In reply to ??? [2009-10-28 21:17:58 +0000 UTC]

XD

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XinjiEm [2009-10-25 22:14:26 +0000 UTC]

I love:
"Naruto: Fuck you
Sasuke: I love you too."

Excellent xD Konohamaru is so...imbecile xDD He's brat, after all xD
Nice pic, awesome story! *_*

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e-nat In reply to XinjiEm [2009-10-25 23:15:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
I imagined they'd be like if everything was
...relatively good.

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Hari-Jizo [2009-09-26 18:38:02 +0000 UTC]

there isn't more to say than awesome!

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e-nat In reply to Hari-Jizo [2009-09-26 19:13:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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Hari-Jizo In reply to e-nat [2009-09-26 19:22:31 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure^^

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X-NotListeningX [2009-09-21 20:51:55 +0000 UTC]

I enjoyed reading this! I would sooooo love to act it out! I have an uncontrolable urge to read this outloud! *I'm an obsessed young actress*

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e-nat In reply to X-NotListeningX [2009-09-21 21:05:03 +0000 UTC]

lol, I make scripts...

Glad you liked XD

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X-NotListeningX In reply to e-nat [2009-09-21 21:06:10 +0000 UTC]

I totally did! I think I'm gonna watch you...

P.S. I watch too much xD

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e-nat In reply to X-NotListeningX [2009-09-21 21:08:28 +0000 UTC]

I'm not complaining :
Thanks!

Now my ego goes up big time, I'm starting
to think I'm script writer...

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X-NotListeningX In reply to e-nat [2009-09-21 21:32:43 +0000 UTC]

Actually, I AM FORCING YOU TO WRITE! Any time soon! Your script is the only one I haven't totally SNOOZED during the reading! You have a talent. And, if it makes your ego boost even more, I'd totally love a role in some of your scenarios. And I don't like to act everyone!

So, now that I wasted a tremendous amount of energy on scrolling the mouse up to the "deviant watch" button, I am ordering you to publish a story. Any story. Or I shall take it personally.

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e-nat In reply to X-NotListeningX [2009-09-21 22:29:19 +0000 UTC]

ehehe...Thank you :bush:
Helps me that my scripts are short (too lazy >.>
I'll keep working on that story starting by character sheets
and random design concepts.

lol.....
my dev watch usually finds the watched artist instantly.
maybe it's a subscriber thing

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X-NotListeningX In reply to e-nat [2009-09-21 22:36:48 +0000 UTC]

Sure! As long as you write it. And I shall gloat while I'm reading your new scripts! The shorter ones (which we call improvisations - dunno why, there's like no improvising) are actually more interesting, but if you made an entire story, it would have a bunch of faves. Starting with mine. Good luck, I'll be sure to comment and fave and all the stuff. Oh, aaaaaand I'm lazy too. Like a cow. A sick cow. I have a cold. And the most perverted cow I ever seen x'D That would be meh.

Nice meeting ya. You'll be hearing from me soon

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e-nat In reply to X-NotListeningX [2009-09-21 23:41:47 +0000 UTC]

poor thing! I hope you get well soon ^^

Perverted cow? That's new

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X-NotListeningX In reply to e-nat [2009-09-22 11:01:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks *sneeze* Oh, yeah. I now *evil, serious look*

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DemonFoxKira [2009-09-19 19:18:07 +0000 UTC]

Love everyone's outfit. That greatly drawn and lol at Konohamaru

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e-nat In reply to DemonFoxKira [2009-09-19 19:33:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks Kira ^^

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DemonFoxKira In reply to e-nat [2009-09-19 20:35:59 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome my dear Konan ^^

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HinataTentenAnkoRul [2009-09-16 00:12:13 +0000 UTC]

Stop being awesome Eru, this is unfair ! :C

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e-nat In reply to HinataTentenAnkoRul [2009-09-16 00:30:35 +0000 UTC]

I z awesome ('n hungry)
Sankyuu!

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Amaterasu-kun [2009-09-13 18:07:18 +0000 UTC]

awesome job'

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e-nat In reply to Amaterasu-kun [2009-09-13 18:14:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks amt!

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Amaterasu-kun In reply to e-nat [2009-09-15 11:43:26 +0000 UTC]

really welcome ^^

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MiAsMaKi In reply to ??? [2009-09-11 07:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Heh.

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Babu-chan In reply to ??? [2009-09-11 05:28:04 +0000 UTC]

lol you invented new style of doujinshi It's really funny story and great picture I just

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EmoProductions12 In reply to ??? [2009-09-11 00:42:25 +0000 UTC]

This story looks intresting.
Do u know if there are any pairings in this?

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e-nat In reply to EmoProductions12 [2009-09-11 00:49:23 +0000 UTC]

so far it's not definitive yet, but I like team seven love
fests. So I would start with that, and some more on the side.
I don't believe in only one love through the story.

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EmoProductions12 In reply to e-nat [2009-09-11 02:04:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh okay thanks. I love team 7 love ^^

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sosokrazy In reply to ??? [2009-09-10 20:26:31 +0000 UTC]

lol! i love the story to this! too cool naruto pirates!

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e-nat In reply to sosokrazy [2009-09-10 22:25:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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sosokrazy In reply to e-nat [2009-09-11 00:17:02 +0000 UTC]

wellcome! keep doing your thing!

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aka-no-gabby [2009-09-10 16:09:51 +0000 UTC]

I loved this scena too. XDXDXD

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e-nat In reply to aka-no-gabby [2009-09-10 16:11:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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mintwinter In reply to ??? [2009-09-10 13:06:26 +0000 UTC]

i love it

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e-nat In reply to mintwinter [2009-09-10 14:38:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Narusaku4ever14 In reply to ??? [2009-09-10 12:09:38 +0000 UTC]

the best! the story was amazing and the picture splendit!

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e-nat In reply to Narusaku4ever14 [2009-09-10 14:37:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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Celious In reply to ??? [2009-09-10 08:40:49 +0000 UTC]

Very nice job I understand why you said that perspective were difficult here because there is a lot But this drawing comes out very cool The background is awesome and I love the way you colored it And your little story in the artist comment made me laugh a lot, especially the end That " I love you too" from Sasuke killed me Very nice job

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e-nat In reply to Celious [2009-09-10 14:44:58 +0000 UTC]

hehe...It was very hard, I worked a lot
on that background...

Thank you XD Stories like that are very cool
to write.

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Celious In reply to e-nat [2009-09-10 15:04:37 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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RiseDarkMoon In reply to ??? [2009-09-10 07:41:23 +0000 UTC]

ahaha thats so cute
lovely job again
-ew konohamaru the brat

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e-nat In reply to RiseDarkMoon [2009-09-10 14:44:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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WistfulGem In reply to ??? [2009-09-10 05:52:11 +0000 UTC]

I see what you mean by the table, but it looks really good 3-D objects are so hard to draw, with furniture, if you draw a straight line too inwardly or outwardly it'll looked screwed up and rickety, (if you get what I mean by that )

I luvs the colour and the lighting, just the overall greenish tint of the room is really well done, Don't worry darl, I think Sasuke looks just fine here, and I must add I love the simple layout of the room!

'Yeah, your family is messed up Man..."
That part just had me laughing
Interesting story! I'll definately read it e-nat!

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e-nat In reply to WistfulGem [2009-09-10 14:48:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment and encouraging words!



Sasuke's family is awesome, but Naruto doesn't know how to talk...

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fu-bby In reply to ??? [2009-09-10 03:48:32 +0000 UTC]

Lol XD Haha XD

Don't touch the pointy sword child...

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e-nat In reply to fu-bby [2009-09-10 04:29:13 +0000 UTC]

hehe true that

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fu-bby In reply to e-nat [2009-09-10 06:01:53 +0000 UTC]

Lol, word ;3

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XxTriniSakura125xX [2009-09-10 03:21:43 +0000 UTC]

I love the scene...it was hilarous
especially the end!
the picture is funny 2
<3

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e-nat In reply to XxTriniSakura125xX [2009-09-10 03:52:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

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eleniux993 [2009-09-10 01:55:15 +0000 UTC]

hell yeah!!!! you take my advice for doing a doujin, well kinda XD anyways is awesome!!!!!

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