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Published: 2006-05-08 01:39:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 10147; Favourites: 246; Downloads: 1677
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Description I fabricated a desert background. It's not right, I know but I don't know how to correct it.
Something wrong with the character too.
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Comments: 60

tenshi-no-pocky [2006-05-08 02:26:08 +0000 UTC]

uwah, i don't see anything wrong with it ^^

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Nikki0417 [2006-05-08 02:19:22 +0000 UTC]

the bg looks great to me. great lighting, too.

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maria-jaujou [2006-05-08 02:13:47 +0000 UTC]

his forward foot is too big.. and the back foot is standing on his toes. so his walk looks wierd then.

great coloring though. the desert is good - it fits with the characters. the characters are shaded a little too darkly for such a bright sun, though.

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egosun In reply to maria-jaujou [2006-05-08 03:44:53 +0000 UTC]

I see that too, thank you for your advice

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Yuuki-sama [2006-05-08 02:05:18 +0000 UTC]

;o; I think the walking character's (our left) leg is maybe bent too outward xP I dunno.
Maybe the sand should be more of a reddish/brown shade... and more hills? xDD;;

*trying to help but failing*

Anyway the coloring on the characters is really nice >O< I love the expressions. <3

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egosun In reply to Yuuki-sama [2006-05-08 03:46:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~ Afterall it is a doodle, luckily not a commissionXD.

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Endless-Labyrinth [2006-05-08 02:03:43 +0000 UTC]

I love the background! The watercolour-effect you put on it is nice ^^ I don't think there's anything wrong with this picture, but then what do I know? *laugh* Anyway, good job on the picture! I love it

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An-Asian-girl [2006-05-08 02:02:22 +0000 UTC]

Kool!

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devil-slut [2006-05-08 01:48:17 +0000 UTC]

It looks fine to me ^_^

Its overall aww-nish rating: 8

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