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Published: 2012-12-17 03:44:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 6675; Favourites: 463; Downloads: 32
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Misplaced in a tiny moment this time slips away from us,like every doubt we’ve shared has me constantly counting backwards towards a cluster of empty promises.
Mostly I was just sitting there with you wasting another hour away from moving forward.
I was surprised when you caught me stuck in my head again,
contemplating every bad thing in this world like it was all a fault of my own.
An unfaithful me wanted to cower in a corner every time a flash of guilt triggered another reason to look away from you.
A misstep over a gap in my judgment was a free-fall into a persistent pit of regret.
Anticipating a negative reaction I tensed up waiting for this peaceful moment to fail,
When You playfully nudged me and said,
“Where there are shadows there is also light.”
I shrugged and accepted that you were probably right.
You smiled and I sighed.
Somehow you’ve always had a way of turning my attention to the brighter side of things.
However I don’t know where this life is going.
And I kind of feel like it’s pulling me away from you,
but I hope you know that I’ll take every memory of you with me,
wherever I go from here.
Prints available at: www.zazzle.com/wherever_i_go_f…
Music that inspired:
"Roads" Portishead
"Atlas" Sparta
"Sleeping at the wheel" Matchbox 20
***EDIT:12/17/12 - Color scheme/contrast was really bothering me so I adjusted it.***
***EDIT:12/18/12 - Finished writing the prose. The original was a rough draft. ***
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Comments: 91
Hazardousthing In reply to ??? [2012-12-21 22:31:10 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! Seriously, though, amazing work!
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cocoajaee [2012-12-18 21:36:25 +0000 UTC]
This looks absolutely spectacular! All the details and the lighting look amazing.
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SilyCllarinet [2012-12-18 20:55:24 +0000 UTC]
At first, I simply saw the clockwork in the picture, and thought that it was just that--a simple concept doable by pretty much anyone. But then I saw the lower left corner, and my opinion about the piece changed entirely. This is a great concept and very well done.
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ericinprogress In reply to SilyCllarinet [2012-12-21 18:56:49 +0000 UTC]
I agree, I focused much of my attention on that particular area. The rest evolved around it.
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SilyCllarinet In reply to ericinprogress [2012-12-22 01:02:17 +0000 UTC]
It turned out great.
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LaLaFoxtrot [2012-12-18 09:27:58 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god.....beautiful....simply beautiful ; o ;
THE MEANINGGG!!!!!!
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guitarangel1495 In reply to ??? [2012-12-18 02:44:43 +0000 UTC]
very cool, reminds me of series of unfortunate events for some reason, it would make an excellent book cover btw
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ericinprogress In reply to guitarangel1495 [2012-12-21 18:58:39 +0000 UTC]
I think you got pretty much what I was trying to portray. Thanks!
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Miss-A-sketches In reply to ericinprogress [2012-12-22 00:40:10 +0000 UTC]
Totally my pleasure!
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keren-or In reply to ??? [2012-12-17 20:42:37 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is beautiful. Very impressive.
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Nachiii In reply to ??? [2012-12-17 14:28:37 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing! I normally don't like this kind of picture, but this is so stunning. I have it opened in a window for half a day already and whenever I look at it again, I'm amazed anew. I simply love the colors in this. They create a very strong atmosphere, or how to say it. The details are also stunning as well as the scale. Adding the small people was a very nice touch
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ericinprogress In reply to Nachiii [2012-12-21 18:59:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I hope you don't mind the color changes.
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Nachiii In reply to ericinprogress [2012-12-21 19:38:25 +0000 UTC]
You're most welcome I like both versions. The previous one looked a bit more interesting in my opinion (but I already have it saved on my notebook so I can look at it again and again, anyway, hahaha
). It's your piece, so do whatever you like with it, of course. This version has a bit different atmosphere, but it's a stunning one as well
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SycamoreSea In reply to ??? [2012-12-17 06:31:38 +0000 UTC]
This is so lovely, I almost can't look away.
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KyseL [2012-12-17 04:35:59 +0000 UTC]
I took the liberty to feature this HERE . I hope it doesn't cause any problems
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XaliaScar [2012-12-17 04:05:47 +0000 UTC]
Amazing light, color, poem, everything! Fantastic piece!
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