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need some feedback desperately on this.... not too sure, but there is something about this that I likeRelated content
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i would keep it the same but remove the repetetive text..
once is enough for each phrase
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I can see where this is going.. But the white is too harsh. I actually like the weight of the makeup on the girl.
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the face is too dark. it's like it is "caked on" as in the way makeup gets caked on. other than that i really like the simplicity of this.
--[ jark ]--
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I'd take away the boxes and make the "face" a little less heavy, is that what you want to hear? I like the idea!
Paul
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nice idea. but i would recomend a prettier font for the text. some kinda script would make it look a lot better. just anything but arial.
try to make some glow behind the darkest letters.
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Its rather plane, but the majority of the peice shows emotions. I like the concept you are trying to show. Who says plain is bad?
if you change this I would like to see the end results
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