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Description Adler's Prelude - Forgiveness

I know I said Over Protective part 2 was the conclusion, but I got this idea and I think it really redeems Ashien. It takes place a couple of days after the events in the park. I really feel this is a nice touching end to that whole arc. Nice touch for Mother's Day as well.
Here we have Ash reading and Adler happy playing with his blocks.
Ash is looking at what happened, and she blames herself. She is completely heartbroken, but when she's at her lowest she feels this light tap on her cheek. Adler is too young to know what is really going on, but there he is trying to soothe her. She feels like he's forgiven her and that is just what she needed. She goes from completely depressed, and questioning her ability as a mother to overjoyed.

I do regret not doing the comic about Adler's first word before I did this. It would of given me a nice touch to the end. Still I think it works.
I know Ashien's shirt is open. If you read her character sheet I do mention she is a nudist. She doesn't like clothes very much, and she hates tight binding clothes. I just can't draw her nude sitting around the house without giving these pages a mature rating. FYI- That's iced herbal tea in her glass. His sippy-cup is close by with apple juice.
I love Adler in the second panel. He's just built something with his blocks, and he's so proud. The skull on Adler's shirt was inspired by the Becky skull in Pani Poni Dash.
Hardest panel to draw was the seventh panel. It was tricky, because she kept looking more angry then sad. I do love her reaction in the eighth panel. She was in such despair that she didn't notice him walking over.

There is one question that is never answered. "Has that cat landed yet?"

Hope you enjoy and I look forward to your comments.

Ashien, Adler © Kristoffer Remmell
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Comments: 89

FoxxFireArt In reply to ??? [2007-05-19 09:04:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. The main story I have planned I'd love to get published is about Adler as a grownup, though I could probably also develop a story of him in his teen years.
I'm making these comic shorts to sort of develop a fan base for him and his mom. Kind of like gorilla marketing. Lord knows his mom has a lot of fans. Mostly guys.

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DreamStarRei In reply to FoxxFireArt [2007-05-20 09:13:35 +0000 UTC]

that's awesome, maybe when you get a published, you tel me how I can get my comics published!

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FoxxFireArt In reply to DreamStarRei [2007-05-20 19:18:28 +0000 UTC]

That would be cool to be published.

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jalana1 [2007-05-15 03:37:49 +0000 UTC]

Great stuff Kris. I really thought that was touching and very sweet. Perfect for Mother's Day.

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FoxxFireArt In reply to jalana1 [2007-05-15 09:07:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I wasn't timing this for Mother's Day, but it seems appropriate.

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dunpinta [2007-05-13 13:19:05 +0000 UTC]

awww thats so sweet! I love all their expressions They have such lovely characters

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FoxxFireArt In reply to dunpinta [2007-05-14 01:05:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. This was going to be a rather emotional picture.

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dunpinta In reply to FoxxFireArt [2007-05-14 14:37:42 +0000 UTC]

Well I definately think you achieved that ^^

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Bonekid In reply to ??? [2007-05-12 04:46:53 +0000 UTC]

MAKE ANOTHER I COMMAND IT

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Bonekid In reply to Bonekid [2007-05-12 14:31:13 +0000 UTC]

sweet.............

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FoxxFireArt In reply to Bonekid [2007-05-12 05:01:29 +0000 UTC]

I have plenty ideas. I still need to introduce Ash's friend.

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Panzerfire In reply to ??? [2007-05-11 13:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Very good work.
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Hold on! When its mother's day in the USA???
Here in Arg. is the third sunday of October.
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Anyway... Nice work!

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FoxxFireArt In reply to Panzerfire [2007-05-12 02:22:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

In the US Mother's Day is on May 13th.

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Panzerfire In reply to FoxxFireArt [2007-05-12 22:53:56 +0000 UTC]

Allright.

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ultranic-comics In reply to ??? [2007-05-11 07:17:37 +0000 UTC]

This is spectacular. Very nice bold lines, and very emotional panels. Great work!

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FoxxFireArt In reply to ultranic-comics [2007-05-11 08:02:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I was going for a good emotional impact.

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RedWingsDragon [2007-05-11 04:13:52 +0000 UTC]

You know....... For some reason this page reminds me of Dead Pool and Cable.... Yeeah. Awsome work here

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FoxxFireArt In reply to RedWingsDragon [2007-05-11 04:46:21 +0000 UTC]

I think I know what you mean when it comes to Cable, they both have white hair; but they are really different things. Thanks.

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metalformer In reply to ??? [2007-05-10 23:46:52 +0000 UTC]

Very cute. Perfect for mother's day.

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FoxxFireArt In reply to metalformer [2007-05-10 23:51:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. With this week I knew I wanted to get this one out fast.

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darkwarrior In reply to ??? [2007-05-10 23:26:15 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.

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darkwarrior [2007-05-10 23:26:08 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.

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FoxxFireArt In reply to darkwarrior [2007-05-10 23:40:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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alwayssilver [2007-05-10 23:21:50 +0000 UTC]

Very cute, and great way to end the arc.

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FoxxFireArt In reply to alwayssilver [2007-05-10 23:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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taidaega In reply to ??? [2007-05-10 23:16:31 +0000 UTC]

that was good and ash needed to be comforted

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FoxxFireArt In reply to taidaega [2007-05-10 23:39:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Yeah, she needed something and her son was the best one to give it.

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formula4disaster In reply to ??? [2007-05-10 22:22:44 +0000 UTC]

Awww! My heart! It melts! I really like Ashien's outfit, it suits her. And little Adler, he's the sweetest. Well done -pat--pat-

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FoxxFireArt In reply to formula4disaster [2007-05-10 22:28:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I was going for that heartwarming moment for them. The conversation there at the end is my favorite.
It also makes up for the lack of dialog in this comic.

There is going to be a joke later on that Ashien's best friend comments how she looks like she dresses like a shrine maiden.

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formula4disaster In reply to FoxxFireArt [2007-05-10 22:39:17 +0000 UTC]

I'll be waiting for that joke then. Yes the conversation between them is so heart warming. I really like how you broke from the funny moments and did a sweet moment. I'm not really sure how to put it though. I'll have to ponder on it.

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FoxxFireArt In reply to formula4disaster [2007-05-10 22:49:15 +0000 UTC]

Hard to call it a conversation when she's the only one that can talk. He's not quite there yet, but I do have a comic in mind about his first word.

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formula4disaster In reply to FoxxFireArt [2007-05-13 22:58:35 +0000 UTC]

True, but Adler's first word. I can't even imagine how Ashien will react. However she reacts though I bet I'll find myself on the florr instead of in my chair.

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FoxxFireArt In reply to formula4disaster [2007-05-14 01:07:43 +0000 UTC]

His first word is actually based on a true story.

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formula4disaster In reply to FoxxFireArt [2007-05-17 02:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Really? Hehe, I don't know how long I can take it. The suspense is getting to me.

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FoxxFireArt In reply to formula4disaster [2007-05-17 03:28:24 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it really pissed my mom off. Needless to say that I am a natural born wise ass.

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UnforgetableMemory In reply to ??? [2007-05-10 22:20:54 +0000 UTC]

Touching indeed.
Awesome job, as usual; and just in time for Mother's day, huh.

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FoxxFireArt In reply to UnforgetableMemory [2007-05-10 22:24:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Once this came to me I could really feel the emotions behind it.

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UnforgetableMemory In reply to FoxxFireArt [2007-05-11 02:40:28 +0000 UTC]

Well, it shows sir.
I didn't mention it before but, awesome job with Ashien!

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