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Published: 2019-09-10 07:13:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 82105; Favourites: 845; Downloads: 136
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part 1:  www.deviantart.com/hezuneutral…
Deviantart wouldn't let me upload the full, so here's part 2  

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That’s right, I heard the story over and over again 

Gee, it’s swell to finally see the Steven Movie 

That’s right, I heard the story, don’t really like how it ends 

Gee it’s swell that the crewniverse continues to demonize Pink Diamond’s character meanwhile redeem her abusive fusion-phobic racist genocidal maniacal totalitarian family 

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Liked the movie a lot. Music was amazing as usual. Nice to see a surprise Steg fusion. It was interesting to see all the gems relive their pasts but with a twist. Spinel was cool, super powerful villain, really liked her. 

But the entire thing just felt like a Steven Bomb side-story combined into one. Not really much of a movie. 

I was so unbearably disappointed that the rejuvenator didn't come full circle. We know for a fact that rejuvenator could bring back Pink Diamond. I don't understand why the Crewniverse continues to deny her existence. "SHE'S GONE!" Yes, but you already had an episode where Steven sees his mother in the room. You've established different versions of a gem can exist in one in the Single Pale Rose episode. Now you've brought into play a weapon that can revert a gem to that first form. Aka, Pink Diamond was trapped within Steven this entire movie. 

Pink Diamond is overly villainized when she has done so much for everyone that people just like to forget. The consequences had she not done any of her shady actions could have been worse. She tried Steven's way. To talk things out. But no one ever listened to her. 

It was great that Pink Diamond shattered Rose Quartz's image, but now this is getting ridiculous. This could have been the perfect opportunity to fix Pink's reputation in the eyes of the fanbase. Pink could have returned to deal with Spinel herself. Then she is confronted with her child, dying in her arms. 

And she makes the quick and easy decision to save him by allowing the gem to revert back to his fusion. Therefore, Rose is not brought back in the cliche "Hero never dies" way. She is brought back temporarily. She comes back, only to leave once more. And that would be perfect. But the crewniverse didn't do it so I'm forever salty and disappointed. 

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Also worth noting, the chest in Lion's mane was open. Jasper and Pink Pearl are no where to be found. I think I heard rumors we may be getting another season, so it's kinda awkward to have a massive timeskip movie only to jump backwards from all the progress. 

(Unless...we are gonna continue on from the timeskip?) 

Whatever the case. I still love Steven Universe. But ever since last season's finale, the plot has become kinda messy. Jasper, Pink Pearl, and Lapis were severely neglected characters. And I honestly have low hopes for any other villain this series would have to offer. White Diamond was the cherry on the cake. She can take away your free will and control you like a puppet. Not to mention, if you are a gem, she can basically read your mind. There's really no topping that. 

(Also, side note. I love the Diamonds. I love their characters. Problem is they went from being galactic tyrants to Steven's other moms which...is cute, but with everything they did, I don't think they deserved to be saved. ESPECIALLY NOT WHITE. Yellow and Blue I can understand but White? HOOooooooo boy. I think I'm mostly upset because I like the villains and I'm getting tired of Steven redeeming them all in a single episode just by talking to them skdjfhgdjkfhjgkj) 

I'm staying on the ride though. May as well see it through to the end, even if I gotta fix this one too. 

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Here's my tumblr explanation for those who are confused / disagree with the comic: 

The crewniverse portrays Pink in a way that the FANDOM demonizes her character. (Love the Crewniverse and I know Pink’s character is complex but people are hating her more and more with each new episode which is what is upsetting.) Spinel showed up to Earth, wiped Steven’s friend’s memories and poisoned everything. Steven is upset, and Spinel feels absolutely no remorse. She’s just her innocent goofy self that could not care less about Steven trying to fix her mess. She also ends up making it worse by “innocently” destroying a whole section of New Homeworld with the pizza cutter. I have no doubt she did the same with Pink Diamond. Pink didn’t have it in her heart to say anything bad to Spinel’s face so she left her there. Total dick move, which is why Pink should have had more justification. (And I believe she did, after seeing how destructive and insensitive Spinel can be) 

Also, Pink Diamond is not gone. Yeah, I heard what PInk Steven said. It’s not true. 

A. “A Single Pale Rose.” Multiple Pearls exist within Pearl’s gem depending on the form and timeframe. Even the lowest buried subconscious Pearl is able to see and hear things that happen on the outside of the gem. She can even interact with the outer layer by stealing the phone to lure Steven to see the truth. 

B. “Mirror Gem.” Again, a gem stuck in an object can still hear and see things happening outside, That’s how Lapis was able to speak to Steven. She could even still manipulate water. “Desert Glass” can even still interact with a sandy environment despite being attached to a pillow. 

C. “3 Gems and a Baby”. All the gems had theories. Steven is just a shapeshift of Rose. Steven is actually a fusion. And Rose is simply trapped in her baby. All three are TRUE. Rose shapeshifted so Steven could exist. Steven is confirmed a fusion of his human side and his gem. Now with the introduction to the rejuvenator, Rose couldn’t reform because she was literally trapped in Steven. 

D. “Change your Mind.” Pink and Rose’s forms and memories still exist within the gem as seen in this episode. Pink Steven is SURFACE. He is in control. From the Single Pale Rose Episode: 

“There’s more of you in here?”

“Oh no, not HERE. I made sure of that. I’m very good at compartmentalizing everything, that’s why I get to be SURFACE! And THEY have to be put away.”

Rose is not gone. She is put away. She is the subconscious of the gem. 

E. The Rejuvenator.  The rejuvenator reverts a gem back to its FIRST FORM. Which is Pink Diamond. Not Pink Steven. 

Steven claimed the rejuvenator merely set him back to the beginning of the show where he couldn’t use his powers. If that were the case, why did he look like he was dying like he was in Change your Mind?  This is because the gem now (Or at least SHOULD HAVE) belonged to his MOTHER, and not HIM. His part of the gem was shoved away, inaccessible. He will die without it. 

(The Show’s interpretation of this is messy. Steven was still able to fuse and use some aspects of his gem, which goes against all logic set up beforehand.) 

Don’t misunderstand. Steven is NOT his mother. Pink Steven is NOT Pink Diamond. They SHARE this gem. Pink Diamond/Rose Quartz is not gone, especially now with the introduction to the rejuvenator. 

Now, Pink Diamond is not GONE, but she should NOT RETURN TO THE SHOW PERMANENTLY. I respect the crewniverse for this decision. No cliche “The hero returns from the dead” stuff. However. Reiterating that Pink is permanently gone despite giving us hint after hint that she ISN’T is what frustrates me. 

“The Storm in the Room” brought up many questions and theories. Rose was the most normal acting of all characters formed in the room. Even fake Connie, who was a replica that existed in the same room as the real Connie (So the Room could get the reference) acted strange enough for Steven to notice. The room wants to please Steven, it wants to do what he thinks and says. But when Steven accuses Rose of making him just to run from her problems, she goes AGAINST this belief, saying “Steven, you know that isn’t true,” Which made people question if Rose had a connection with this room, being able to subconsciously interact with Steven much like Pearl did in the “Single Pale Rose” episode. 

Also, Spinel was ditched by Pink. Some people think Pink ordered her to stay so she couldn’t move. Whether this is true or not is unclear, but had this not been an order, SPinel would have either A. Still waited around in the Garden for Pink. Or B. Ran off to go find her which probably wouldn’t have ended well if she found out her best friend was playing “pretend” without her. She could have ruined the entire rebellion operation by revealing Rose’s true identity simply by being NEAR her. 

To restate from my comic, this is not an excuse for Spinel to go destroy a planet and all Pink’s new friends, some of which have suffered from her misdeeds prior. Pink is a victim of the diamonds. Spinel is a victim of Pink. Now all of Earth is a victim of Spinel. Spinel is still a villain, and her motivation is not a free pass to claim what she did on Pink’s name. She scapegoated Steven and all of Earth because Pink was gone and she had no one else to take her anger on. Pink had a good reason to keep her locked away, but lying to Spinel was not the best option, but it was all she ever knew. SO Spinel is a victim AND a villain. Yes, that’s possible guys. 

But I digress. 

Anyway. A controversial statement that I’m standing by: 

Pink / Rose isn’t truly gone, Spinel was the main villain, and the movie was kinda boring/anticlimactic. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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Comments: 100

Tikaful In reply to ??? [2019-09-19 20:44:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh. I wonder why? I mean the whole thing about Spinel's backstory and Pink's backstory was that Pink was just a bit immature and naive which we know. Earth is where she made the big change.

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DofieProductions In reply to ??? [2019-09-18 22:55:40 +0000 UTC]

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funny4urface [2019-09-18 01:51:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for making this.  

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Mouse145 [2019-09-17 21:11:59 +0000 UTC]

This comic deserves so much more attention

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FR13D-7473R In reply to Mouse145 [2019-11-11 03:41:28 +0000 UTC]

Agreed

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GalacticHypernova [2019-09-17 01:04:15 +0000 UTC]

;-;

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Pestinaut [2019-09-16 23:52:06 +0000 UTC]

man this is such a better ending. great job :thumbs_up:

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Deviantartfan0xxxx [2019-09-16 20:31:58 +0000 UTC]

I could still picture them fighting afterwards innocence spinel feels broken the third time and being told straight to her face  about how pink feels about her I still picture Steven singing a song change spinel believes him but she's just sad and angry that she just wants to fight and hit something and then everything plays out with spinel crying again banging on his shield

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SwiftwindKC In reply to Deviantartfan0xxxx [2019-09-18 22:44:46 +0000 UTC]

O W

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SwiftwindKC In reply to Deviantartfan0xxxx [2019-09-18 22:44:37 +0000 UTC]

Ow

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SHM-STOCK [2019-09-16 04:54:36 +0000 UTC]

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theJazza In reply to ??? [2019-09-15 03:25:12 +0000 UTC]

I haven't seen the full movie yet.  But I wasn't crazy about the fact that the plot seems to just boil down to: Hey here's something/someone else Pink diamond screwed up.  Now it seems everywhere you look there's more people hating on Pink with the utmost savagery, which as you say seems to be a little unfair given that the other diamonds are being redeemed.

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Fox-Trap-Forever In reply to theJazza [2019-09-19 20:12:06 +0000 UTC]

None of the diamonds deserved a redemption arc. NONE OF THEM.

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CheesyFeta In reply to ??? [2019-09-14 22:54:07 +0000 UTC]

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HezuNeutral In reply to CheesyFeta [2019-09-21 07:29:26 +0000 UTC]

Steven's gem became dislodged because the rejuvenator reset the gem to Pink. Steven was no longer fused with the gem, since his mother was now in control of it, which allowed it to get forced out of him with a blow to his back. 
I should have fixed that in my comic, but here, Steven and his mother aren't the same person. They merely share the gem. He should have said "Goodbye mom, hello me." 
While I agree Rose being gone is an important aspect to the show, if it was just in front of Steven, with reiteration if not more confirmation that they aren't the same person would be a good idea. 
Gems are immortal unless they are shattered. 
Lion and Lars are mortal, but they got revived, so I think if Pink came back for just a second for her own character development would be a better idea. 
But it's totally okay for people not to get behind this ending since bringing her back could feel like a cop-out. But, since Steven is half delirious, and no one else is around to witness it, (and perhaps they destroy the rejuvenator so something like this doesn't happen again, it will have made Rose go out with a true bang. A true finale, closure to her own arc. She finally gets her piece of development and redemption.) 

I just made this comic because, with the introduction to the rejuvenator, the "she's gone" statement just backfired on itself. 
I don't understand why Spinel brought that scythe if she hadn't planned to revert Steven's gem back to Pink in the first place. She could have just shattered his friends instead of having us go through the boring amnesia arc with each crystal gem that took up 70% of the movie, just reliving arcs we've already seen just in a different light. I wholeheartedly believed she came with the scythe so she could confront Pink, not just use it to torture her son Steven. If she had done that, it would have made her actions so much more justifiable and would have made the movie a thousand times more interesting, personally.  

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metaXzero In reply to HezuNeutral [2019-09-22 06:16:08 +0000 UTC]

"I don't understand why Spinel brought that scythe if she hadn't planned to revert Steven's gem back to Pink in the first place." Considering her plan of destroying the Earth, that scythe is a pretty good weapon. It not only poofs, but takes gems back to their factory settings and thus, reduces their chances of coming back in time to able to stop her plan even if she's defeated.  And when could she shatter the CGs? Steven was still standing after she poofed them and he obviously isn't going to let her crush them.


Also, using the rejuvinator to confront Pink? Even if it could bring Pink back, it'd be factory settings Pink. She'd know nothing and remember nothing which makes any questions and closure Spinel could want unable to be fulfilled. At best, Spinel could just beat up the image of Pink Diamond in some form of empty revenge but just like with Steven, she'd be taking her anger out on a stranger.

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CheesyFeta In reply to HezuNeutral [2019-09-21 08:51:36 +0000 UTC]

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Fox-Trap-Forever In reply to CheesyFeta [2019-09-19 20:11:26 +0000 UTC]

You. I like you.

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Seikalice In reply to CheesyFeta [2019-09-16 17:53:16 +0000 UTC]

I completely agree ! How come people don't understand this ? And the worst thing is that the artist completely denies spinel's emotions. Pink appearently has the right to be angry, but for some reason, spinel can't... 

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bleachcrater [2019-09-14 16:02:53 +0000 UTC]

a very nice alt ending

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TommyBoyio In reply to ??? [2019-09-12 20:27:34 +0000 UTC]

I dont care what anyone says this is the cannon mod ending to the movie. 

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Jeroeswu [2019-09-12 19:57:22 +0000 UTC]

This. THIS is exactly what I wanted to happen in the movie!

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LarioLario54321 In reply to Jeroeswu [2019-09-20 14:34:19 +0000 UTC]

ME, TOO!!!

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Netheris-Queen [2019-09-12 14:42:50 +0000 UTC]

THIS MADE ME CRY

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WarriorNun [2019-09-12 07:10:17 +0000 UTC]

Now this is a What-If scenario I can get behind.

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JustAFanOfStuff In reply to ??? [2019-09-12 03:05:48 +0000 UTC]

Ireallydon’tknowhowtofeelaboutthisbutIjustgottasayit. Steven looks a lot like max from camp camp.

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shina1319 In reply to ??? [2019-09-12 02:38:42 +0000 UTC]

omg!!! im crying!!!! QAQ

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TheAstuteDevil [2019-09-12 02:05:37 +0000 UTC]

I can make a promise,
I can make a plan.
I can make a difference,
I can take a stand.
I can make an effort,
If I only understand,
That I,
I can make a change!

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GabaKawa [2019-09-11 05:04:14 +0000 UTC]

Just, beautiful!

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TheCresentRose11 [2019-09-11 03:02:28 +0000 UTC]

<3

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onemario1234 [2019-09-11 00:37:16 +0000 UTC]

The movie was fine. I liked it

But this?

This is
g o o d

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Luciiyfur [2019-09-11 00:27:48 +0000 UTC]

THAT SHIT HURTED

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desenhera [2019-09-11 00:24:47 +0000 UTC]

I'M SCREAMING THIS IS GREAT

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Drpepper1152002 In reply to ??? [2019-09-10 23:31:01 +0000 UTC]

Why. DO. people. keep. COMING. UP! with. better. ideas. than. Rebecca. Sugar?

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mickeythekapowfan In reply to Drpepper1152002 [2025-05-24 12:15:55 +0000 UTC]

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Phoenix-Prime-3000 [2019-09-10 18:12:54 +0000 UTC]

Hey, is it okay if I dub this comic and put it up on YouTube? I promise to give you credit for the art and provide a link to your DA page! (I'll also give you a link to the video so you can see it for yourself! )

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HezuNeutral In reply to Phoenix-Prime-3000 [2019-09-10 21:41:41 +0000 UTC]

as long as credit is given I don't mind at all, would love to see it when it's done! 

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Phoenix-Prime-3000 In reply to HezuNeutral [2019-09-10 22:22:18 +0000 UTC]

You got it!

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Ghadioforce In reply to ??? [2019-09-10 17:03:07 +0000 UTC]

But will it came a new enemy? Someone like   

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TheStarsofPines In reply to ??? [2019-09-10 16:35:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, this would've been so much better

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Negaboss2000 In reply to ??? [2019-09-10 14:42:40 +0000 UTC]

What if Pink actually stayed with her family?

That would have been a good redemption, right?

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HezuNeutral In reply to Negaboss2000 [2019-09-10 18:02:27 +0000 UTC]

If Pink stayed with her family, she would probably have shattered herself from all the abuse she had to endure. : ( 

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Negaboss2000 In reply to HezuNeutral [2019-09-10 21:13:13 +0000 UTC]

But the others would be there to help her through it

Man...it'd be sad if she committed suicide TT_TT

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Leiko-Moon In reply to ??? [2019-09-10 10:29:28 +0000 UTC]

that's a beautiful alternative for the movie! It would have redeemed Rose/Pink's actions! I agree with you, they evilized a little too much Rose's actions. I know she wasn't perfect but here, it almost villain like...This version you made is interesting, it would had at least show that even if she didn't make right décisions, it wasn't for cruelty but because she thought it would be a better way...

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hollowguyver In reply to ??? [2019-09-10 09:08:24 +0000 UTC]

I really wish the movie did this.

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TheArtisticApe In reply to hollowguyver [2019-09-10 14:35:06 +0000 UTC]

But we wouldn't have "Change"...

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hollowguyver In reply to TheArtisticApe [2019-09-10 18:46:41 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't call it change pink is still going to be apart of Steven, but ex-least he gets to meet his mother the more thing's change the more they stay the same.

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TheArtisticApe In reply to hollowguyver [2019-09-10 19:35:55 +0000 UTC]

I meant the song.

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hollowguyver In reply to TheArtisticApe [2019-09-10 20:20:25 +0000 UTC]

oh okay.

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TCTwinscover In reply to ??? [2019-09-10 07:25:46 +0000 UTC]

OOOOOOH! I LOVE THIS COMIC! IT'S REALLY GREAT, EVEN THIS IS JUST AU, BUT I LIKE IT. :loves:

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