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Name: | Lake | Quietpaw | Quietsong |Clan: IceClan
Rank: Apprentice
Gender: She-cat
Appearance: Cream tabby with white paws, belly and muzzle
Brief Personallity: She's very quiet and doesn't have many friends. She likes to stay alone and think about stuff. Sometimes she looks like she's seeing things that only she can see. During a battle it's better to have her as your ally, since she'll not hesitate in killing a cat (if they're not part of any of the Clans, of couse)
Brief History: She was the only one that survived in her litter. Her parents were loners that were attacked by rogues, and both of them died. She then was found by a IceClan patrol. Quietpaw (Lake, back then) was accepted in the Clan and received her apprentice name (she was six moons old when that happened)
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Comments: 369
oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-09-30 21:26:23 +0000 UTC]
Smokepaw drifted into sleep once again. He didn't dream at all. He just awoke the next morning. Smokepaw quietly got up and padded out into the forest with out Quietpaw waking up. He went to go climb one of the few trees that was in his Clan. Smokepaw looked at all of the rivers and streams, he watched the birds fly and the sun rise.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-09-30 22:52:44 +0000 UTC]
When Quietpaw woke up, she didn't see Smokepaw. She stood up and looked for him. When she didn't found him, she went to stream and got a fsh for herself. She would look for him again once she had ate.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-01 20:44:38 +0000 UTC]
Smokepaw looked around. He decided to climb down from the tree. Smokepaw started padding back over to Quietpaw when something hit him. Smokepaw screeched as loud as he could, he knew it was another animal and it was too heavy. He looked up and saw a fox holding him down.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-01 20:50:19 +0000 UTC]
Suddendly, Quietpaw heard a screech. It sounded like Smokepaw. She stood up and ran towards the noise. ''Smokepaw?!'', she called. Finally, she found him and a fox attacking him. Quietpaw stood petrified, then attacked the fox.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-01 21:21:00 +0000 UTC]
The fox grabbed Smokepaw and shook him from side to side. He yelled "Quietpaw!" Soon he saw Quietpaw rush out of the bushes and attack the fox. Smokepaw dropped to the ground, His breathing became shallow and harsh. Smokepaw closed his eyes.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-01 22:26:52 +0000 UTC]
Quietpaw slashed at the fox one more time, then it ran away. ''Are you okay?'', she asked Smokepaw.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-01 22:35:40 +0000 UTC]
Blood was pouring down a wound on Smokepaw's side. He opened his eyes and looked at Quietpaw. "T-Thank... Thank you...." He trailed off. Smokepaw felt like he was going to die and never see Quietpaw again.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-01 23:58:10 +0000 UTC]
Quietpaw took a step forwards and held him so he wouldn't fall. ''You're definily not okay'', she mewed. ''We should go back to the camp''.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-02 00:03:15 +0000 UTC]
Smokepaw laid down on the grass, he was not feeling good at all. Smokepaw wrapped his tail around Quietpaw, "I love-" He was cut off. He heard rustling in one of the bushes, What if it was the fox? He pricked his ears and stared into the bush.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-02 00:06:09 +0000 UTC]
Quietpaw looked at the bush. She couldn't smell it beause of Smokepaw's blood scent. It could be anything, and she was afraid it was the fox again. Or even worse; a badger.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-02 00:13:00 +0000 UTC]
Smokepaw would try to defend Quietpaw if the fox came back. He was worried that something might happen to her. "I-Ill protect you.." He whispered to Quietpaw. Smokepaw slowly got up and stood in front of the bush.
"Smokepaw!" squeaked a voice. Then a White she-cat with piercing blue eyes came out of the bush with cobwebs in her jaw. The She-cat came walked towards Smokepaw and wrapped her tail around him.
"I-I'm so glad you're here." He mewed. Smokepaw nuzzled the She-cat.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-02 00:18:24 +0000 UTC]
''Who are you?'', Quietpaw asked.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-02 00:26:26 +0000 UTC]
The she-cat began to put the cobwebs onto Smokepaw's wounds. She dropped the cobweb that she was holding. "I'm sorry, I am being so rude." She giggled "I'm Cloudpaw, Smokepaw's sister." She mewed. "It's nice to meet you." She said. Cloudpaw started to place cobwebs onto Smokepaw again.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-02 00:31:53 +0000 UTC]
''Oh. It's nice to meet you too... I guess...''. 'Well, at least she's helping Smokepaw', Quietpaw thought. 'She can't be that bad...'.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-02 00:37:20 +0000 UTC]
Cloudpaw looked at Smokepaw, She licked his forehead. "You lay down and rest, okay?" She mewed to Smokepaw.
Smokepaw shook his head and mewed "Not without Quietpaw." He was being stern. Smokepaw would not rest until Quietpaw was with him.
Cloudpaw sighed. "Fine." She mewed. Cloudpaw walked over to Quietpaw "Does anything hurt?" She asked. "I don't want you to lie, Ya hear me?" Cloudpaw wanted to make sure everyone was okay.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-02 00:45:16 +0000 UTC]
Quietpaw laid beside Smokepaw ad licked him on the cheek.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-02 00:53:08 +0000 UTC]
Smokepaw smiled. "A-Are you hurt?" He asked. Smokepaw knew his sister wanted to know. Smokepaw wrapped himself around Quietpaw. He whispered into her ear quiet enough that Cloudpaw couldn't hear "I love you."
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-02 00:59:37 +0000 UTC]
''I love you too'', she whispered, then mewed louder ''I'm fine''.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-02 01:07:14 +0000 UTC]
Smokepaw smiled. Then he looked at his sister, who had a Questioning look on her face.
Cloudpaw looked at the two cats. "Whats up with you two?" She asked. Cloudpaw noticed how close they were with each other.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-02 20:25:53 +0000 UTC]
Quietpaw looked at her paws. She did love Smokepaw, but still wasn't comfortable talking about that with strangers, even if with his sister.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-02 20:55:48 +0000 UTC]
Cloudpaw looked over to Smokepaw "Well..?" She asked.
Smokepaw looked at Quietpaw then back to Cloudpaw. "Ill tell you later." He whispered. Smokepaw's wounds were starting to heal, but they still hurt a lot.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-02 22:43:44 +0000 UTC]
Quietpaw looked worried at his wounds. She was trying to convince herself that they looked worse than it actually felt.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-03 00:36:12 +0000 UTC]
Smokepaw laid his head on his paws. He looked over to Cloudpaw, who was walking away.
Cloudpaw looked back at the two cats. "Ill be back at camp, Quietpaw? If Smokepaw's wounds start to hurt again come back to camp and tell me, okay?" She asked. Cloudpaw wanted to make sure her brother would be okay.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-03 21:27:19 +0000 UTC]
Smokepaw sighed. His wounds were starting to hurt more. He snuggled up to Quietpaw and closed his eyes.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-03 21:40:00 +0000 UTC]
Quietpaw laid her head between her paws.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-03 21:43:19 +0000 UTC]
Smokepaw glanced over at Quietpaw. "Whats wrong?" He whispered. Smokepaw would do anything to make Quietpaw happy.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-03 21:43:59 +0000 UTC]
''Nothing'', she mewed. ''I'm just tired''.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-03 21:47:05 +0000 UTC]
The sun was starting to set. Smokepaw wondered if Quietpaw did get hurt. She wasn't acting like herself lately. "Okay, we can sleep." He mewed quietly.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-04 21:42:36 +0000 UTC]
Quietpaw laid her head closer to Smokepaw, then closed her eyes. Since Cloudpaw had left, she remembered something: Smokepaw's dream. Did ''Watch out Smokey'' meant the fox? And she running torwards him was she trying to find him?
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-04 21:45:47 +0000 UTC]
Smokepaw licked Quietpaw's cheek. His wounds were still hurting, but he tried to ignore it. He thought about being with Quietpaw when they were warriors. Smokepaw was sad because Quietpaw would become one before him.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-06 00:19:16 +0000 UTC]
Quietpaw purred. "What do you think your warrior name will be?", she asked.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-06 00:29:45 +0000 UTC]
Smokepaw smiled. "I'm not really sure, but I like the name Smokestorm." He mewed.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-06 00:54:18 +0000 UTC]
"That's a nice name", she mewed.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-06 01:30:03 +0000 UTC]
Smokepaw looked at Quietpaw. "What do you want yours to be?" He asked.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-06 01:33:51 +0000 UTC]
"Maybe Quietsong, or Quietheart"
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-06 02:05:19 +0000 UTC]
"How about Quietbreeze?" Smokepaw mewed. He liked that name alot.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-06 02:06:37 +0000 UTC]
"That sounds cool", she mewed.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-06 13:04:53 +0000 UTC]
Smokepaw sighed. He closed his eyes and fell asleep. He dreamed about the fox chasing him all over Iceclan. no cat would help him, not even Quietpaw.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-07 00:52:33 +0000 UTC]
Quietpaw didn't slept, even tought she was kind of tired. She was too scared that the fox would come back.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-07 00:55:06 +0000 UTC]
Smokepaw slowly woke up from his dream. He moaned because his muscles were stiff. "Q-Quietpaw..." He groaned again. His whole body was aching.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-07 00:57:26 +0000 UTC]
She looked at him quickly. ''What? Is-Is it hurting? Do you want me to call Cloudpaw?'', she asked, suddendly worried.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-07 01:06:38 +0000 UTC]
Smokepaw laid still on his side. His body was aching too much for him to move. "aaahg.." He moaned. Smokepaw just decided to lay still. His sides were in so much pain.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-07 01:18:55 +0000 UTC]
''Stay here'', Quietpaw mewed, the realized how stupid that sounded. Smokepaw clearly wasn't going to be able to walk. ''I'll get Cloudpaw''. She prepared to run torwars the camp, but then hesitated. What if something bad happened to Smokepaw while she was away? She had to risk it. ''I'll be back soon'', she mewed and dashed torwards the camp.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-07 01:23:27 +0000 UTC]
Smokepaw frowned. He shut his eyes after Quietpaw left and began to cry because if the pain, he didn't want Quietpaw to think he was a kit. Tears were streaming down his face.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-07 01:35:28 +0000 UTC]
When Quietpaw arrived at the camp she looked for Smokepaw's sister. ''Cloudpaw?'', she called.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-07 01:39:33 +0000 UTC]
Cloudpaw was just trotting back into camp with the sun high patrol. She heard some cat shouting. Cloudpaw looked all around until she spotted Quietpaw calling her. Cloudpaw dashed over to Quietpaw. "Whats wrong? Are you okay? You look dizzy!" She mewed frantically.
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Icepath39 In reply to oOBlackShadow14Oo [2012-10-07 01:47:00 +0000 UTC]
''I-It's Smokepaw. He's... He's not feeling OK. You need to see him'', she mewed and started to lead her torwards Smokepaw.
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oOBlackShadow14Oo In reply to Icepath39 [2012-10-07 01:56:34 +0000 UTC]
Cloudpaw stared at Quietpaw. "WAIT!" She yelled. "I need to get something to treat him with!" Cloudpaw ran and snuck into the Medicine cats den. She grabbed spider webs, She ran out and followed Quietpaw. Cloudpaw felt like she was forgetting something.
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