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This is a drawing of a scene from a fanfiction I wrote a few months ago. Hiyono stole Ayumu's umbrella. She was dancing in the rain and he spoiled her fun, so she's getting revenge.

I don't known, I really don't know. I'm not really sure about anything in this drawing. I've never really drawn rain before, let alone people in it. I'm still looking for more reference material for various things. Ayumu's hand(s) look kind of weird, and I'm not sure about the position of his arms, and my little sister says Hiyono's arm looks like a noodle. ( )

The background looks, well, empty. But I have no idea what to do about that. Seriously, no idea. Maybe it needs more, but I'm not sure what else to put back there. The grass needs detail but I'm not sure how to go about doing it.

If you have any advice and/or tips for (if) I color it, please tell me. I can use all the help I can get.

Now if you'll excuse me, I must continue my search for reference material. T^T Wish me luck.

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Ayumu & Hiyono (c) Kyo Shirodaira and Eita Mizuno

Description
This is a drawing of a scene from a fanfiction I wrote a few months ago. Hiyono stole Ayumu's umbrella. She was dancing in the rain and he spoiled her fun, so she's getting revenge.

I don't known, I really don't know. I'm not really sure about anything in this drawing. I've never really drawn rain before, let alone people in it. I'm still looking for more reference material for various things. Ayumu's hand(s) look kind of weird, and I'm not sure about the position of his arms, and my little sister says Hiyono's arm looks like a noodle. ( )

The background looks, well, empty. But I have no idea what to do about that. Seriously, no idea. Maybe it needs more, but I'm not sure what else to put back there. The grass needs detail but I'm not sure how to go about doing it.

If you have any advice and/or tips for (if) I color it, please tell me. I can use all the help I can get.

Now if you'll excuse me, I must continue my search for reference material. T^T Wish me luck.

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Ayumu & Hiyono (c) Kyo Shirodaira and Eita Mizuno