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Published: 2005-10-01 02:56:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 160; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description HELEN (calmly)

No.

ELI

Whaddaya mean, “no”?!

HELEN (deliberately)

Eli, you are my son, and I will not per-

ELI

Ma, I’m not your child anymore.

HELEN

Do not interrupt me!  (regaining composure)  Eli, sweetie, you have such potential!  You’re always making good grades in school, you’ve visited some of the best colleges in the country… Why you’d want to go and throw all that away is beyond me.  You could make something of yourself.  You could be someone!

ELI

This is being someone, this is being me!  Just think, after training I could-

HELEN

Stop it!  (takes him by the arm, points into the dining room)  Do you see that man in there?  He doesn’t even know that we’re here, Eli.  For the past 10 years, we’ve been taking care of him, and he doesn’t even know we’re here!  Is that what- No!  No backtalk!  We’re going to go and have a quiet dinner and then you can have your say.

Helen and Eli walk into the dining room where Grandfather sits in his wheelchair.  They sit down, Helen prays, and then they begin to eat in silence.  Several minutes pass.

GRANDFATHER (reaching across the table and taking Helen’s hand, he looks up into her eyes)

It’s time to let the boy go, Helen.

Helen collapses into sobs as Grandfather goes back to eating.  Eli looks on stunned at both of them.
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Comments: 4

ushouldknowme [2006-07-05 23:01:55 +0000 UTC]

this is fantastic. i need your help! jk. although collaborating with someone who can organize in a coherent form the movie i see in my head would be nice. i just write it all train of thought and draw story boards. i am terrible at dialogue.

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paul-beaulieu [2005-10-17 08:34:42 +0000 UTC]

I like this. It would be interesting to see it filmed. Keep up the good work.

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shrtcracker07 [2005-10-13 15:57:09 +0000 UTC]

i like it. someone who didn't know much about war wouldn't understand tho. for a shallow thinker...it's kind of dry... to me...i am interested in the novel that is forming around this....

-sPiKe

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Aquaorchid17 [2005-10-09 16:06:53 +0000 UTC]

whats been up with u havent heard from u in 4 ever

still a pixie

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