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Description I leaned against the doorframe, careful not to put my tail into a compromising position. Grandpa had splinted it, but I didn’t want to do anything taxing. Better not to push my luck.

“I’ve gotten his name so far, but not much else. He seems to have some trouble understanding and speaking – frankly, I think just remembering his name was an effort.” I said, looking at Benjamin in the sofa. He was scanning the room with a haggard look on his face, as if he couldn’t really make heads or tails of what was happening. I can’t blame him, I suppose. Judging by his difficulty with speech, he had had either little to none contact with people, or been out of touch for a very long time. Most of the time I had spoken to him, all I’d gotten as a reply was a confused look and a faint hum every now and then.

“He seems wary and afraid – I’m a bit afraid myself to be honest.” Dad said and shook his head. He nodded slightly in the general direction of the sofa. “Do you think he’s going to be a problem?”

I sighed. “Honestly? I don’t know. He seems sensible, at least to an extent – he’s not feral, if that’s you’re thinking about. Still, I’ve never seen the guy before, I don’t know what he’s like AND” , I said as I held up a claw, “we DID hit him with a car. That’s bound to shake him up a little.”

Dad nodded. I was about to continue, when I was distracted by a huff and a series of clicks. Looking towards the sofa, I discovered that Benjamin had found the light switch on the bedside lamp. He was flicking it back and forth, studying the bulb with a bewildered face. I shook my head.

“On second thought, maybe not. If I didn’t know better, I’d say he’s young and inexperienced. That can’t be right, though.”

Dad lifted an eyebrow. “What makes you say that?”

“Well, anyone who is that fascinated by a lightbulb is either a kid, or you’ve never seen one before. I’m routing for the latter. Just look at all his scars. No one, not even with constant abuse, can collect that many scars in a shorter timespan. Besides, there’s something about his eyes as well. I don’t know how I can tell, but they’re old. Really old.”

Shifting a bit, dad hummed in agreement. “I know what you mean.”

I took my weight off the wall and said “I’ll try talking to him some more. I want to make sure that he’s not in any pain, and I’d like to see if I can have a proper conversation this time. Who knows, maybe he remembers how to talk now?”

I patted his shoulder and walked back into the living room, where Benjamin had given up on abusing the light switch and instead shifted his attention to a small wooden puzzle. I stopped halfway, intrigued.

The puzzle was comprised of six blocks, cut into angular shapes. Once properly combined, they formed an orb with pyramidal protrusions. Benjamin had found it in an assembled state, and had probably picked it up in the key block, causing it to fall apart. His eyes were darting over the pieces, and he held two in his claws. After a few seconds, he put them together and flicked his tongue over them, leaving a tiny moisture trail. He reached out for a third part and clicked it into place.

Fascinated, I watched as he put two and two together and created another, reversed piece which he quickly pushed together with the first one forming the completed sphere. He sat propped up on his elbow for a few seconds before replacing the puzzle where he had found it.

I was impressed. With a slight smile, I sat down on a foot support next to the sofa.

“Nicely done. It took me the better part of an hour to realize the two interlocking pieces the first time I tried it.”

Benjamin tilted his head, and looked first at the puzzle and then me. Although he didn’t respond, I think he understood the gist of it.

I scratched my neck, and decided to try a few questions.

“Are you in pain anywhere?” Benjamin strained his face in an attempt to understand my question. I grabbed my arm and mimicked a painful expression, then pointed at him. “Pain. You, anywhere?” This attempt seemed to go better, and he lit up with recognition. Shifting, he pointed at his outer wing bone. “Pain. There.” he grated out with a semi-deep hoarse voice.

Nodding, I pointed at the spot he indicated and slowly rose. “I’d like to have a look at that. May I?” No reply this time either, so I took it slow. Reaching out with an arm, I once again pointed at his injury and made an asking face. Seeming to get the hint, he withdrew a bit and extended his wing. I touched his bone lightly, waiting for a response. Nothing.

Slowly poking and prodding the injury, I looked for a reaction on his part. He made a grimace every now and then – even growled at one point where I quickly withdrew. The bone seemed intact, and the tissue around it was bruised but not broken. We probably grazed him with the car when we swerved.

Lucky bastard, I thought to myself. A little closer and we’d be dealing with a broken, not battered wing.

Stopping my investigation, I sat back down. With a slight smile, I made a calming gesture and pointed at the wing bone. Making a breaking gesture with my hands, I shook my head. Instead, I hit my arm and nodded while pointing at his wing. “Just a small hit, not very bad.”

With a thoughtful look, Benjamin slowly nodded and withdrew his wing.

“So, where are you f…” A sudden growl from his belly interrupted my question, and he gave me an embarrassed look.

“Hungry, eh?” I asked with a slight smile.

“Hungry. Yes!” Benjamin blurted out and nodded frantically.

I stood up and said “Alright, I’ll see what I can find. You look like you could eat anything right now.”

Benjamin watched me intently with starving eyes as I walked towards the kitchen. Looking at him, I realized exactly HOW hungry he was – his paws were literally shaking at the thought of food.

Damn. I guess he hasn’t been very lucky lately.

The kitchen was as chaotic as always, with platters, cutlery and food bags spread out all over the shop. Sweeping aside a few random items, I fetched a plate and opened the fridge.

Alright, dragon food… let’s see here.

Leftovers from a roast beef caught my eye. There had to be a good half kilo here – certainly enough for at least one dinner, if not more. Considering his size and starving face, I reckoned he’d probably eat it whole. If he didn’t, it would go bad in a couple of days anyway.

Deciding not to be picky about it, I scrounged up a knife and one of the more solid forks – I knew from experience it was hard not to ruin them while eating. With a few quick movements, I cut the beef into a few good-sized pieces. Setting the now empty pan aside, I filled a glass with water and brought the whole thing into the living room.

Benjamin sobered up instantly at the smell of the roast, and sat up in the sofa with an eager look on his face.

“We’re usually not allowed to eat in here, but the exception makes the rule, I suppose.” I said as I handed him the platter. Ignoring the fork completely, he basically mashed his face into the plate and started shoveling.

Taken slightly aback, I raised an eyebrow. “Okay… no fork, I guess. If you’re hungry, you’re hungry.”

It took him no more than a minute to finish the whole plate, whereupon he hastily licked up every single speck of residue. The plate was as clean as if it had just been taken out of the dishwasher (save for the draconic spit plastered across the surface). With the look of a dog searching for more food in an empty bowl he sniffed at the plate one final time and looked up at me. He gave me a big grin and tried to say something. It took a few attempts, but he finally squeezed out something coherent.

“Good. Thank you.”

“No problem. Water?” I said and handed him the glass. He looked at the glass quizzically for a moment before accepting it. He gave the water a quick sniff and apparently determining it safe, guzzled it down. Holding up the clear and now empty glass, he tapped the side slightly, and it rang with a clear tone. With a huff, he handed it back to me.


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Benjamin struggled with his thoughts. There was so much he wanted to ask, but the words just wouldn’t form.

Use it or lose it. An old saying he’d heard so very long ago came to his mind, and it rang true for him at this moment.

Jarl, which the other dragon seemingly called himself, at least made an effort to talk to him. He had trouble understanding everything he said, but hungry was a word well known to him. The fairly sized hunk of meat Jarl brought him was a welcome sight that he gladly welcomed. It wasn’t until every last scrap was gone that he noticed the slightly surprised look on the other ones face and the fork in his hand. Benjamin thought about it for a few seconds and decided that he didn’t really care. A fork would’ve just slowed him down.

There was so much in this house that puzzled him. For one, the strange glass bauble that lit up on command confused him to no end. It seemed like magic, and he was beginning to come to the conclusion that they inhabitants must be wizards.

My typical luck. I’ve renounced religion and the supernatural my entire life, and then I end up with a bunch of magicians. At least they know how to cook.

A sound not unlike the rolling of thunder distracted him from his silent thoughts and he turned his head in the direction of the noise. A great green object just outside the house was causing the noise, and he watched in shock as the boulder-sized object started moving away. The object had four wheels on which it travelled as it moved towards a larger building further away.

Horseless carts. I can’t believe it. Horseless bloody carts, with thunder inside.

With a shaky hand, he pointed at the cart and pressed out a question with alarm in his voice. “No horse?!”

Jarl laughed slightly and replied “No horse.” With a more thoughtful and somewhat confused look, he cocked his head and asked something back. Benjamin strained his mind to recognize the words, and understood after Jarl had repeated it once more.

“How old are you?”

Benjamin halted at the question. He hadn’t counted for a while. The last time he could recall a number was… very long ago, and almost faded in his mind. Perhaps seventy at the time, but certainly much more now. Disturbed, Benjamin remained silent.

Seeing the distraught look on Benjamin's face, Jarl seemed to let the question slip. Instead, he took the glass and thoughtfully rolled it between his paws with a frown. Something was obviously on his mind, and he started to ask another question. Still confused and unnerved, Benjamin didn’t really want to talk anymore.

He turned away from the other dragon. “No more talk.” he muttered and stared up onto the roof.

After a moment of hesitation, Jarl rose and left Benjamin alone with his thoughts.
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Comments: 112

InVengefulEmbrace In reply to ??? [2014-03-15 23:09:06 +0000 UTC]

I could write now a text of almost fifty lines about how I first read the first part of your story and how pleasant it was, but now, after reading it after it was continued and discontinued in whole, I feel I must contribute to the matter. (mostly because your comment was a month old...)  Please let me tell you that I, even though I usually oppose concepts like anthropomorphism, dragons walking upright (and such, though most of it didn't appear in your story), I am almost upset about you not continuing this "masterpiece" (don't get me wrong, it could be the best DTF i have ever read if it was not unfinished and had not those puny tiny itty-bitty flawy thingies, you know what I mean. Small errors in spelling and personal views. And a masterpiece of course only within the scope of the DTF, for it maybe could not compare in quality or quantity with the real shit like Tolkien or Fitzgerald or Poe - you get it. Back to what I wanted to basically say: Your story is great, it deeply showed up the flaws and gaps in my storytelling, and you made (out of a normal concept) something that shall remain potential, and something I cherish. When I say I liked your storytelling very much I mean such subsidiary information as Benjamin tapping against the glass before giving it back to Jarl - all those facial expressions and emotions, watersheds and no single nasty repetition(and a lot of story overall condensed within such a short time - unlike FarmFresh, who, as we all will know, stretched his narration at some points, constantly blabbering about his own real life obviously sometimes, mainly those paintball-fights which were NOT interesting to me.)

So, what I wanted to say is: I'm sorry if this first one didn't work out, but I am looking forward to what you have got to tell in the future. Because what you already did was very ripe. (I have some enormous experience with DTF and at least I have read some really great books in English, therefore you can take me at my word.) YOU, my dear sir, did much better than you thought.

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JargonTheRed In reply to InVengefulEmbrace [2014-03-19 17:25:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for those kind words ^.=.^ I really appreciate that you took the time to tell me this. I've been playing around with the idea of going back and rewriting the story using my current english proficiency, but I don't think I'll do it anytime soon.

I do hope you'll enjoy the new story I've got planned as much as you did this one.

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InVengefulEmbrace In reply to JargonTheRed [2014-03-19 21:26:50 +0000 UTC]

Of course I will, but I want you not to hurry either. It took my favorite band 9 years to compose the album they got 'legendary' with... maybe, anyhow, you should not take 9 years .3.
And I think taking your time prevents art blocks. And if not, well, urgghhh... pffff.
So anyways... enjoy yourself xD

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TFMaster360 In reply to ??? [2013-11-30 21:51:03 +0000 UTC]

Okay. So, if you are really discontinuing this story, then a LOT of your fans will be disappointed, right? How about I continue it for you? I would love to write more of this story, and I'm sure your fans would love an ending! So what do you think?

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KarstenHarrington In reply to TFMaster360 [2014-08-06 02:52:13 +0000 UTC]

It's sad. I asked the same question; he said no. /.=.\

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TFMaster360 In reply to KarstenHarrington [2014-08-06 06:13:40 +0000 UTC]

 Actually emailed him and asked again, and he said no as well. He said I'm free to create a new story using the same universe, though.

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KarstenHarrington In reply to TFMaster360 [2014-09-01 05:00:17 +0000 UTC]

And I did. Read Echoes From The Past!

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TFMaster360 In reply to KarstenHarrington [2014-09-01 16:29:26 +0000 UTC]

I'll add that to my list!

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gokk99 [2013-10-11 15:31:43 +0000 UTC]

could you make one only chapter to end this story? it really deserves an ending.

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JargonTheRed In reply to gokk99 [2013-10-12 15:06:16 +0000 UTC]

I may revisit it on the future, but right now I have plans (or ideas, for that matter) for an ending chapter to this story. Sorry, but for now it really is dead.

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hammarbomber [2013-10-10 17:41:08 +0000 UTC]

How are you doing on writing the next chapter?

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JargonTheRed In reply to hammarbomber [2013-10-10 17:53:12 +0000 UTC]

I'm afraid this story has been discontinued, and I'm working on a new story now. You can read more details about it in my latest journal ^.=.^

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hammarbomber In reply to JargonTheRed [2013-10-10 18:24:16 +0000 UTC]

darn..... IT WOULD HAVE MADE A GOOD NOVEL!!!! much like 's Operation: Dragon, Here's My Two Weeks, and The College Drag.

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JargonTheRed In reply to hammarbomber [2013-10-10 18:52:33 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I know - his was actually this inspiration for this one. My new one is actually intended as a proper novel from the start, so I believe it will work out better as I plan it from the start.

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hammarbomber In reply to JargonTheRed [2013-10-10 18:57:17 +0000 UTC]

i need to find that one.... I'm also watching you so when it's up i'll look at it

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JargonTheRed In reply to hammarbomber [2013-10-10 19:07:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I hope you'll enjoy it.

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HechTea In reply to ??? [2013-08-29 01:51:44 +0000 UTC]

oh yeah..  caught up with ya XD

Nothing to complain about

Looking fowards to next chapter

 

I kinda doubt that you're really only 16..

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JargonTheRed In reply to HechTea [2013-08-29 21:59:43 +0000 UTC]

I really am I can't really prove it, though xD

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HechTea In reply to JargonTheRed [2013-08-30 13:31:06 +0000 UTC]

oh well.. just wondering

cuz this is so damn awsome  

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Magneticmole In reply to ??? [2013-07-25 03:38:29 +0000 UTC]

The story ark that you have started interests me. I look forward to seeing how the story develops.

keep up the good work!  ¦¬) 

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dijin777 [2013-06-19 17:23:05 +0000 UTC]

I love how you put some of the simple objects of everyday life and put Benjamin's view on it, like "the strange glass bauble that lit up and confused him to no end" comedy gold man

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Dragnseeker [2013-05-31 02:56:53 +0000 UTC]

Okay, rarely does any pieces of writing hold my attention for long, but you have majorly interested me. I really like your writing.

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JargonTheRed In reply to Dragnseeker [2013-05-31 17:21:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I've been on a bit of a writing hiatus for some time, but I think I'll get back to it soon.

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Dragnseeker In reply to JargonTheRed [2013-05-31 17:48:36 +0000 UTC]

Okay!

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InnerDragon0475 [2013-05-19 21:46:07 +0000 UTC]

his he( the protagonist) gunna find a mate x3

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cocotheplayer [2013-05-01 23:08:08 +0000 UTC]

Dovahkiin, dovahkiin naal ok zin los vahriin
Var dein, var kool, marfaeraak ahrst val!

Ahhh good old skyrim
3 things in this story link to skyrim
-dragons (dovah)
-jarl
-weirdos and nut jobs

Huh classic.

Sorry is this comes through twice, didn't work the first time for me

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cocotheplayer [2013-05-01 23:02:02 +0000 UTC]

Is he an accidental transformational time traveller?
'Cus horse 'n carts were like SOOOOO last year.

Affixing storyline, weird old freak, whatever next?
Oh yeah, chapter 9

Keep up the good work/free-time-m'gubbins
Fav'd all of 'en!

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JargonTheRed In reply to cocotheplayer [2013-05-17 21:12:49 +0000 UTC]

If you want a bit of background information on him, go read "Betrayal and Tears" (I just realized how much I hate that title).

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juju712 In reply to ??? [2013-04-18 18:23:27 +0000 UTC]

what with the name?

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JargonTheRed In reply to juju712 [2013-04-26 17:59:51 +0000 UTC]

If you've played Skyrim, you should know If not, the leaders of the forts have the title of "Jarl", which coincidentially is my name.

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cocotheplayer In reply to JargonTheRed [2013-05-01 23:09:35 +0000 UTC]

Didn't you say previously you're gunna change 'Jarl' to 'Earl' as its more English?

Sorry for the excess of comments, I'm chattitive

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JargonTheRed In reply to cocotheplayer [2013-05-17 21:10:36 +0000 UTC]

I tried it but scrapped it - kinda got a bit weird.

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juju712 In reply to JargonTheRed [2013-04-26 18:37:08 +0000 UTC]

ok

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Gadzooooks In reply to ??? [2013-04-17 03:18:51 +0000 UTC]

Can't stop looking at your name in having things like "JARL ULFIRC STORMCLOAK" appear in my mind. In full caps.

>:c

Otherwise, t'is be a pleasure to get more material from you, some good writing is always refreshing to read ^.=.^

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JargonTheRed In reply to Gadzooooks [2013-04-18 17:10:09 +0000 UTC]

SKYRIM BELONGS TO THE FORDS!

wait what

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Gadzooooks In reply to JargonTheRed [2013-05-07 15:13:40 +0000 UTC]

Now, picture a truck plowing through an Imperial camp, while the truck driver wears an iron helmet.

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JargonTheRed In reply to Gadzooooks [2013-05-17 21:16:19 +0000 UTC]

I see this guy as the driver: [link]

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Sturalke In reply to ??? [2013-04-09 02:29:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm interested to see where this one goes, keep up the great work ^.=.^
At first I was thinking that Benjamin would have been maybe 150 to 200 and I think that is fairly close for not having seen a light bulb before as it was officially invented in the year 1879 but you never know. For all I know Benjamin could be 1,500 years old and that's the fun part about it to me. I WANT TO KNOW MORE XD
I can't wait for the next part

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JargonTheRed In reply to Sturalke [2013-04-09 14:29:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^.=.^ More be coming!

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coolcat007 In reply to ??? [2013-03-12 19:39:25 +0000 UTC]

"No fork, I guess..."

Well done, keep it up!

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cocotheplayer In reply to coolcat007 [2013-05-01 23:10:43 +0000 UTC]

Fork?
Meh, fork off is what I think of THAT offer.

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JargonTheRed In reply to coolcat007 [2013-03-12 21:13:12 +0000 UTC]

It just so happened that my uncle did the exact same thing a few days ago xD. He just picked up a steak and went "NOM"

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NagandEmerald In reply to JargonTheRed [2013-03-13 03:21:16 +0000 UTC]

Nom? Hillarious !

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coolcat007 In reply to JargonTheRed [2013-03-12 22:55:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, I do that with chicken legs too, so I don't see why not. It just gets a bit messy, that's all

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JargonTheRed In reply to coolcat007 [2013-03-13 11:25:24 +0000 UTC]

It does xD

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sticklebrickkid [2013-03-11 23:04:46 +0000 UTC]

Like where this is going, keep up the good work

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JargonTheRed In reply to sticklebrickkid [2013-03-12 07:27:03 +0000 UTC]

Will do

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TheDragonWithinYou In reply to ??? [2013-03-10 16:23:17 +0000 UTC]

Really awesome chapter
I really liked the way you made Benjamin slowly fade back into reality.

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JargonTheRed In reply to TheDragonWithinYou [2013-03-10 17:30:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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yosup7400 In reply to ??? [2013-03-04 22:44:42 +0000 UTC]

I love how simple-minded benjamin is, you really make it seem like he has been away from others for far too long. You get two thumbs up and a cookie!

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