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I'm creating and developing a new RPG to pitch and hopefully sell to whatever video game company will have it. This is a series containing artwork of different scenes from the story, all of which have been done by a very good friend of mine, whose work I respect very much.This is part of a scene from a later chapter of the story. It features Jyn Vlondett, the main villain of the story. And yes, for all of the admirers, it's a scene of vore. In this scene, he's asked by a little boy named Marcus if he'd like to play with him, and being the only werewolf in his village who eats humans, Jyn is certainly not one to turn down the chance to play with his food.
This one is a work in progress, though at this stage of the development, the forms are all clear, the facial expressions are clear, more present, and noticeable, and some real backgrounds and settings have been added. My friend from NH claims that there will be at one least more value pass, though, since some panels need some more attention. I'm uploading every updated work in progress as this scene goes along.
This is the fifth draft of the scene (the four prior drafts are all in my Fur Affinity gallery), and the above panels are part one of what I call the Play Half, as it refers to what happens as Jyn is playing with his soon-to-be victim before he eats him.
So here's the story below:
Panel 1:
Jyn sits alone on the Elder's Rock, a large, throne-shaped rock reserved for the elder of Kanine. His wife, Mil, had just left to make rounds around the village to check up on their people and see how they are coping with the arrival of humans, Castor, and Sui in their village. Jyn is stoic as he awaits word from his partner, Niles, on the progress of the Keepers' journey.
However, not that long after the departure of his wife, he hears a voice calling for him.
"Hi, Mr. Elder!" says the voice.
Jyn turns and sees a little boy, about six, a short distance away from him, smiling and waving at him. He is happy to see the werewolf elder, but the werewolf elder is not happy to see him. He registers a disdainful look on his face as he growls dismissively at the small boy.
However, Jyn's mood is about to improve.
Panel 2:
"Why are you all alone?" the little boy asks Jyn out of curiosity. "You wanna play with me?"
Jyn is slightly taken aback by the kindness of this little boy, who does clearly think that he is lonely and wants to keep him company. On some level, he is even touched and flattered by this offer. However, as much as he does feel this way, that does not stop him from feeling something else.
He feels a wave of hunger washing over him, and seeing a young, fresh piece of meat standing so close to him gives him an idea. He smiles a devious, sinister smile as he decides to use the boy's kindness against him.
Panel 3:
"Why, of course, dear child," Jyn replies, smiling a warm, welcoming, but very insincere smile at the boy. "I would love to play with you." He sets down his pole at the side of the Elder's Rock and extends a paw toward him. "Come join me."
The young boy smiles widely and excitedly runs toward Jyn's open arms, blissfully unaware that he is running right into the arms of death.
Panel 4:
Once the boy reaches Jyn, he picks him up and cradles him in his arms just above his lap. Continuing to smile deceitfully, he asks, "What is your name, child?"
"Marcus," the little boy answers, still smiling brightly.
"Well, Marcus," Jyn says, "this is something that our adults do when they play with their cubs. Specifically, fathers do this with their sons. I used to partake in this with my own son, as my father did with me."
Panel 5:
Jyn gently pulls up Marcus's shirt, exposing his small belly. He then proceeds to crane his head down and start biting on it. It is not hard biting, by any means, but soft and gentle, merely meant to tickle the boy.
Marcus laughs and laughs merrily at this ticklish feeling, very much enjoying himself, while Jyn utters growling noises as he playfully gnaws on his young “playmate,” as though he is a predator feeding on his prey.
But Jyn is overcome by a bit of surprise. Not more than a minute into playing with Marcus, he is slowly realizing how much he is enjoying it. A look of clear enjoyment even appears on his face as he nibbles on him. It is not a look of evil enjoyment, but one of delightful enjoyment instead. He is genuinely having fun with a human and can hardly believe it!
Panel 6:
Marcus's laughter proves quite infectious when, after a few more minutes of nibbling on him, Jyn stops and joins him in laughing elatedly, though his laughs are quieter than the small boy’s. His expression is completely soft and very warm. This is because he is having a rare moment of clarity. He is starting to wonder if his hatred for humans is worth holding onto, since he starts to realize how much he is already beginning to like this small boy who showed him some genuine gentleness.
However, he will not feel this way for long. . . .