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WaterJewelEmi [2007-08-29 11:11:49 +0000 UTC]
Wow I love this Doujinshi. You are very talented.
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Maru-mar [2007-08-25 16:02:14 +0000 UTC]
Roxas and Riku's fight is next? Man I sure as hell can't draw (nor ink anything as a matter of fact) well. And your English is not that bad.
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3-2-1xGLOMP [2007-08-25 03:02:09 +0000 UTC]
The art is wonderful~! But I won`t complain about the english, it really is hard to translate~ Thank you so much for trying~ <333
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MythicalDelusion [2007-08-25 02:26:09 +0000 UTC]
I'm really, really enjoying this series, and I hope you understand my english enough to understand that (I don't know if you can read english well or not, sorry)
It's awesome. <3
Your art is, of course, spectacular.
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starninja [2007-08-24 21:51:24 +0000 UTC]
i understand the english and i love the drawings but the english is not written in proper order er you may mean
riku "sora are you hiding something from me?"
"maybe you hit your head during the day" (?)
"riku are you laughing at me again?" or "riku stop making fun of me"
and he is hate me probably should be "he hates me"
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Fellier [2007-08-24 21:03:41 +0000 UTC]
aw, poor sora ;3; this is getting really good so far :3
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Beckza [2007-08-24 20:46:49 +0000 UTC]
wow love this comic <3
but maybe u should ask for help with the english?
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Chibichan91 [2007-08-24 20:15:27 +0000 UTC]
I love the way you draw! <3
Can't wait to see next page! ^_^
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numberman123 [2007-08-24 17:53:47 +0000 UTC]
I love it! The english is good, I can understand it. You draw them both so nicely, and I love the dialogue between them. Their expressions are wonderful, for all the comics. XD
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Kawaiii-Chibi [2007-08-24 16:39:51 +0000 UTC]
Maybe, "Sora, are you keeping something from me?"
And when Sora says, "Is he hate me?" I think it should be, "Does he hate me?"
But still, awesome work, as always~ =3
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neko-no-hi [2007-08-24 16:39:50 +0000 UTC]
Really good doujin,I love it
Keep up the good work! <3
(Sorry,my english is really bad ._.|||)
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YuNiSeL [2007-08-24 16:24:18 +0000 UTC]
This is good, i love it, up-date again soon pretty please!
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