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Description Hello, and thanks for reading my tutorial, here I hope to give some sound advice to those who want to make their OC Mew Mew but don't know where to start. Let's begin!

Names:
Alright, first off, you have to name your girl after some type of food, and pronounce it the way the Japanese would, it won't make sense later on if you don't. You pretty much have free range with given names anyway! For family names make sure it's connected to a color. "Momo"= peach, "ai"= indigo. And that it connects with her outfit's color scheme too.

Animals:
Unfortunately, there are more than enough endangered species to choose from. >.>" And everyone, making the 698,972,356,385,903,127th canine/feline Mew is not CREATIVE. Remember now, the more endangered they are, the stronger your Mew will be, and I challenge you to choose an "ugly" critter and make a Mew with it. But please for the love of God DO NOT make your Mew have the DNA of some mythological animal if you're NOT planning an AU fanfiction! A phoenix Mew with the canon group is a Mary Sue, that same phoenix Mew teamed up with a unicorn, lochness monster, dragon, and minotaur Mew is CREATIVE!

Colors:
If you've named your girl say...Salsa, don't make her color scheme black and blue! The color scheme has to connect with her name, either with just family name like Mint's, or both like Lettuce and Ichigo. And all the mews have some secondary color, which you can see on their "fur" trim on their outfits. Either it's white, a shade/tint of their main color, or the same color as their animal features. The third option works best with animals of one main color though, so no zebra stripes, that'd be odd.

For the most part, Mews change hair color to an unnatural variant of their natural shade. Ichigo goes from dark red to pink, and Minto goes from dark blue to medium blue.

Outfits/Mew Marks:
Here's something that gets overlooked a lot, if you think about it, everything about the Mew's physical appearance is symmetrical. Some things that all the Mews have in common are as listed:

-The collars, of course!
-Their outfits are sleeveless.
-They have those puffy, detached sleeves.
-Their outfits are short enough to expose their garters.
-Their Mew marks fall in the mid-line of their bodies.
-Their outfits also reveal their marks somehow.

Anyway, besides the marks being symmetrical, imagine an invisible line splitting you perfectly down the middle and that's the mid-line. Unless your Mew was hand injected, her mark will appear on said line, let's look at Ichigo, hers is on her inner thigh. But, if she stood with her feet together, her mark still falls on her mid-line as well.

And the garters, well they show what the Mew's rank is. If it's on the left thigh, she's a follower, right thigh symbolizes the leader (AKA the most powerful.)

Weapons/Attacks:
Now all the Mews weapons are musical instruments, thank goodness there's a plethora to choose from as well, why not have a Mew who's animal AND weapon come from the same continent? Such as a didgeridoo and a Kangaroo? (Feel free to use that idea if you want!) Anyways, let's look at some examples on how to choose a weapon for your Mew! Anyway, there are three ways to go about this:

Word-smushing 1: "Strawberu-beru" = "Strawberry Bell"

This is where you can smush the instrument name along with your Mew's given name.
Word-smushing 2: "Min-tone Arrow" = "Mint Tone Arrow"
This second choice is where you can take a word with musical meaning and smush it with your OC's name. Now take into account that Minto's bow is shaped like a harp, and Zakuro's whip is a flute, but you don't HAVE to say it like with Strawberry Bell.

The girl behind the Mew:

The list of questions you want to ask before putting tragedy in:
- Has it happened explicitly in-universe to either a main character, side character, or even an extra?
- Has it happened implicitly in-universe?
- Could the authorities' behavior reflect a world in which this tragedy is common, rare but possible, or almost impossible?
- Are you TRYING in general to dismantle the innocence of the series you're using? (Simply writing in a tragic character to add more edge does not count--- dismantling an innocent world is usually a pretty serious literary experiment, perhaps done for a creative writing course.)
- Are the authorities hopelessly incompetent, yet this sort of thing does not crop up regularly? (Incompetent cops yet little crime tend to be a clue that certain things may not be plausible in a fanfic.

To use Pokemon as an example, a fanfiction in which Misty is killed by Rockets and then have Ash embark on a quest of bloody revenge is ridiculous when not played for humour or for the sake of dismantling innocence. This is because:

- This has never happened explicitly in-universe.
- It has not happened implicitly, either, though the Japanese dub DID include the Squirtle Squad threatening to kill Misty if Ash didn't come back--- though, the same Squirtle turned out to be a bit of a softie later, so it's possible he'd have never followed through.
- The authorities behavior suggests that some things may be nigh impossible occurences--- parents send their children away from home on unsupervised adventures at the age of ten, compare to this world where some kids aren't allowed to play unsupervised in the front yard or walk down the street.
- The authorities are not hopelessly incompetent, either. Jenny is portrayed as sharp and in the know on things. This suggests that if something like abuse did transpire, it would likely not go to an extreme, and the child would be pulled away from his abusive guardians before it turned any worse.

In fact, you are more likely to encounter a legendary Pokemon than a severely abused kid or a serial killer.

And on a last note folks, try not to give your OC a SUPER KAWAII DESU NEKO GIRL DITZY PERSONALITY DESU!
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Comments: 398

kitsunekeyblader In reply to ??? [2013-12-07 02:05:31 +0000 UTC]

Ha! If there's even character development at all, and I think I might steal that line for my personal use.

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Twifairy-Noire In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2013-12-07 20:39:11 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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emeralddream36 In reply to ??? [2013-12-06 08:46:46 +0000 UTC]

also, all the mew have fringes(except for mew lettuce), no side fringes.
And nice tutorial!

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to emeralddream36 [2013-12-07 02:03:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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blazesnow13 In reply to ??? [2013-11-24 03:15:23 +0000 UTC]

araripe manakin*

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blazesnow13 In reply to ??? [2013-11-24 03:14:17 +0000 UTC]

i did make a mew mew based off your format...her name hakumai aibori (rice ivory^^) Aka mew ivory her animal is a very pretty bird named araipe manakin and she has a shamisen scythe: she is a strong spirited hyper 16 year old that loves the wind and loves to be with friends she loves music and walking her parents died from a car crash when she was 4 so her aunt took care of her until she moved out because her aunt went blind she also loves to cook and can help any problem she is very wise...is this a good mew i want your opinion and help if i should change anything thank you ^^

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to blazesnow13 [2013-11-24 13:03:16 +0000 UTC]

What kind of scythe is the weapon?

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blazesnow13 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2013-11-24 17:20:08 +0000 UTC]

just like a traditional reaper scythe...the longer ones

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to blazesnow13 [2013-11-25 01:19:31 +0000 UTC]

Scythes like the ones you're talking about are terrible weapon choices, not to mention they are farming tools, not weapons. The blade being on the inside makes practically useless since you'd be forced to swing it a certain way, and it'd leave you wide open to attacks. The opponent could simply push the scythe towards you and cut you wide open with the bladed side too.

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blazesnow13 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2013-11-26 00:42:42 +0000 UTC]

i modified the blade of the scythe...the blade dosent point inwards it points outwards...kinda like an inside out scythe^^

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to blazesnow13 [2013-11-26 02:53:07 +0000 UTC]

The design still it makes an awful weapon choice, and now it's more awkward to use. It's not made for thrusting, like a spear, and trying to slash with it ain't gonna do much good because its range is so limited. I would suggest finding a new weapon and researching the hell out of it.

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blazesnow13 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2013-11-26 02:59:15 +0000 UTC]

what weapon would you suggest?

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to blazesnow13 [2013-11-26 13:14:42 +0000 UTC]

You'll have to do research to find one, since I don't know your OC as well as you do.

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blazesnow13 In reply to ??? [2013-11-24 02:11:48 +0000 UTC]

so my mew mew dosent have a food related name. i named her kurai nichibotsu which means dark sunset because she is a red panda and has a rusty color suit kinda, her weapon is like a bamboo clarinet/spear do you think its an ok mew?

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Emmalinalove In reply to ??? [2013-10-21 02:14:21 +0000 UTC]

What do you think about this my mew mew oc is part panda and her weapon is a bamboo flute/whip.Her name is mew mew lime.

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Emmalinalove [2013-10-21 13:01:28 +0000 UTC]

I look more at the personality and history of an OC. It's much more important than name, weapon, and DNA.

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Emmalinalove In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2013-10-21 22:15:57 +0000 UTC]

Her personality is when she's with her friends she loud and bubbly but when she's with strangers she shy and timid

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Emmalinalove [2013-10-22 02:56:37 +0000 UTC]

You're going to have to be a lot more detailed than that. Think about how her personality affects herself and others.

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Emmalinalove In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2013-10-23 23:22:51 +0000 UTC]

Well she can't really trust people she just met and people sometimes think she's fake.

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Emmalinalove [2013-10-24 23:30:09 +0000 UTC]

Think about the "why" in how a trait came about, and why do people think she's "fake," and what exactly do you mean by it?

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Emmalinalove In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2013-10-27 19:22:57 +0000 UTC]

The trait came about when she meet this stranger and he tried to kill her for ransom.People think she's fake because when they see her with her friends she all bubbly and loud.But when she's with them she's so shy.

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Emmalinalove [2013-10-28 14:03:57 +0000 UTC]

Tokyo Mew Mew is set in a fairly innocent world, and shoehorning something like an attempted murder into it doesn't mesh well with the innocence, at all. You didn't mention that your story might be a dark deconstruction of the universe, so I doubt that's what you're trying to do. As for the reason that others think she's fake, that makes absolutely no sense. She's not close friends with them, whoever they are, so of course she's going to act differently around them since she's shy.


What you're doing is fishing for easy sympathy where nothing is your OC's fault. Why not have her ACTUALLY be fake? That could make for some great character development, and at least you wouldn't have the same exact shy girl character that 2,675,936,209,532,529,562,392 other people have.

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Emmalinalove In reply to Emmalinalove [2013-10-21 02:15:40 +0000 UTC]

Also when she's in her human form her hair is black when she's in her mew mew form her hair is white.

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HimeCandy In reply to ??? [2013-09-14 16:07:21 +0000 UTC]

My OC's animal is an Egyptian vulture XD

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to HimeCandy [2013-09-14 23:04:50 +0000 UTC]

Yay, vultures need more love!

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wolffang719 In reply to ??? [2013-09-03 13:34:31 +0000 UTC]

hmm... suddenly I am unsure if I should write my mew team... the idea was it would take placeΒ simultaneously 'A la monde' but in America... however having a reluctant Ocelot mew now feels... wrong...

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to wolffang719 [2013-09-03 21:21:43 +0000 UTC]

How does it feel wrong?

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wolffang719 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2013-09-04 16:09:38 +0000 UTC]

Ocelot- a rare north America wild cat, described as resembling a cheetah but smaller with thicker front legs. So, feels unoriginal (albeit I have yet to find an ocelot oc elsewhere) and the idea for my story feels about as connected to the actual story as MGS and MGR REvengance... so I feel like I'm butchering it... I think, I dunno I did readΒ your tutorialΒ when my sleep meds started to work... upon rereading I suppose its not to screwd up... its just; Tokyo mew mew is my walking dead (It's my show that I have unconditional love for despite other peoples opinion.) so I guess I may have reacted wrong...

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to wolffang719 [2013-09-06 01:00:27 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if I'd say that an Ocelot is really a North American cat since they're much more common in South America and some parts of Central America. Sure they've been spotted in the more southern parts of Texas and Arizona, but they might not survive as well as they do in other places.


Ocelots are another popular choice for Mew Mew OCs, from what I've seen if it's a cat or dog like critter then there's a Mew Mew OC for it.


I have no idea what you mean by 'MGS.' :T

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wolffang719 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2013-09-06 01:10:52 +0000 UTC]

Metal gear solid, I suppose Ocelots are more southern-ish, and I actually tried looking harder and there are quite a fewΒ ocelots... huh.

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ZoraMuffinz In reply to ??? [2013-07-31 01:53:21 +0000 UTC]

I call Panda


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OcelotMatryoshka In reply to ??? [2013-07-30 02:42:57 +0000 UTC]

Hello! I'm trying to design an OC of my own, and this guide has been very helpful. However, I'd like to know if you could assist me on some aspects.

My mew is infused with the DNA of a Pygmy Hippopotamus, and although I've managed to come up with an outfit and a personality for her, I haven't been able to come up with a name, and she's lacking a color scheme as a result.Β 

I was wondering if you wouldn't mind helping me come up with a name for her?

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to OcelotMatryoshka [2013-07-30 03:40:51 +0000 UTC]

I don't mind helping, though I mostly focus on personality and back story.

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OcelotMatryoshka In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2013-07-30 18:01:50 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thats fine then. Perhaps you can help me improve upon those, then?

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to OcelotMatryoshka [2013-07-30 21:14:58 +0000 UTC]

Sure, tell me about her.

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OcelotMatryoshka In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2013-07-31 01:33:42 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you!

(And I've managed to come up with a name for her, too.)

My mew's name is Maembe Daidai. She's an African-American girl who moved to Japan after her father was shot by police officers and her mother re-married to a Japanese businessman. She was teased for being pudgy when she was younger, and for a long while, was focused on nothing but losing weight, until she realized that no matter how hard she tried, her body stayed the same. Since then, she's allowed herself to relax about the issue, and doesn't really get offended when people mention it anymore.

Back in America, she would babysit for neighbors, allowing her to form a very strong maternal instinct. Around children she is soft-spoken and gentle, as long as they are well behaved. If not, she is stern, and quick to correct any disrespectful behavior.

Around people her own age, she is typically very pleasant, as she believes in the philosophy of treating others how she'd like to be treated. However, if someone is rude and/or disrespectful towards her first, she will not hesitate to be rude and/or disrespectful right back until they correct themselves.

She is not very timid in the face of danger, but she will not throw herself into a situation she deems unsafe, if she can help it.

Around adults, Maembe is, more often than not, very quiet and respectful, however, she is not afraid to voice her opinion and/or criticize them if she feels they are overstepping any boundaries. Her new step-father discourages this behavior, while her mother encourages it.

How's that?

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to OcelotMatryoshka [2013-08-01 14:53:09 +0000 UTC]

Why exactly was her dad shot by police officers?

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OcelotMatryoshka In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2013-08-01 15:07:30 +0000 UTC]

Maembe's dad had gone out to the store rather late to pick up something-or-other, and was stopped by a couple of police officers to be frisked, because they thought he looked suspicious. He refused, things escalated, and a fight broke out. If he ever went out after sunset, it was always with a blade, and when he pulled it out during the fight, one of the officers saw it, and shot at him.

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to OcelotMatryoshka [2013-08-01 22:59:13 +0000 UTC]

That's way too dark and out of place for the TMM series. I explained the flaws of putting dark things into an innocent series in the guide, and you didn't mention anything about your story being a deconstruction of TMM, which leads me to think that you aren't planning to do that. Also what happened to Maembe's dad doesn't seem to have a place in her development later in the story, from what you've told me anyway, which makes this scenario seem rather tacked on for the sake of getting her cheap sympathy points.

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OcelotMatryoshka In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2013-08-02 00:07:57 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I see what you mean.

However, I wasn't actually trying to get sympathy points for her, I just needed a way to shift Maembe's biological father out of the story, and police shootings aren't a very rare occurrence where i live, so I used that. Of course, I didn't put very much thought into it, and now that I think about it, it does seem incredibly unnecessary.

Thank you for the critique.Β 

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to OcelotMatryoshka [2013-08-02 01:29:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, you can always have a Japanese-American be her dad, I have a friend who knows a girl who's Chinese and Jewish, and I myself am Hispanic and Jewish. We're not called a melting-pot nation for nothing.

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OcelotMatryoshka In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2013-08-02 15:02:25 +0000 UTC]

Haha, that is true! I think I'll do that.

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SpicyFox16 In reply to ??? [2013-07-15 19:36:35 +0000 UTC]

these are excellent guide lines for almost all Oc's from a series, good job and thanks!

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to SpicyFox16 [2013-07-15 23:09:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, and you're welcome!

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Alles-de-la-rocha In reply to ??? [2013-07-06 22:57:12 +0000 UTC]

I'm making one like a centipede, is that Ok~? (-w-)

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Alles-de-la-rocha [2013-07-07 12:10:59 +0000 UTC]

Of course, have a blast!

And thanks for the fave.

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sailorphoenixblack In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 18:00:34 +0000 UTC]

This is a very good one, I was actually thinking of doing a Mew OC to ad on to my Quotev account, anyway, I already have some info gathered, I wanted to make a rodent based Mew because I love rodents, and they are not very common in the Mew fandom. this is what I have so far

Name: Mikan, it translates to Orange, the fruit, the last name I'm still figuring out
Animal: Beach Mouse, I looked up endangered mice species, and that's one found in the southeast of the United States
Normal physical appearance: Dark orangish, close to brown, green eyes
Mew physical appearance: Light orange hair, I'm thinking of light brown eyes, or just go with orange eyes, that I'm not sure about
Features as a mew: Mouse ears and tail
Cafe colors: Light brown, since all the mews work at the cafe
Mew Uniform: the colors are orange, and her uniform consists of booty shorts, and the top which connects to the shorts is similar to Mint's
Personality: very quiet and soft spoken, she's honestly afraid of offending someone. She's really sweet towards everyone, no matter who they are, whether human or alien, she doesn't care, but if someone says her ex boyfriend never loved her, then she will start to attack them while crying, saying it isn't true. She is at times jealous of Ichigo because she has a stable relationship with Aoyama. Sometimes she'll but heads with Ryou, Mint, and Zakuro because they put up cruel exteriors when they are really nice on the inside. She also has a huge fear on snakes, and if a Kirema Anima was a snake then she will flee instantly.
History: When Mikan was little, she was almost bit by a snake that made its way into her room, but her parents got it before it could reach her. Ever since then, she's been terrified of snakes. She had two loving parents that would stick together through thick and thin. But soon her mom's boss made her take a bunch of business trips around the world, leaving her and her dad at home alone. They both miss her very much and hopes she'll come home soon. Later on, Mikan met a guy named Kuro who became her best friend, but later on they began dating. After about a year, they started to feel a sudden awkwardness and decided to just stay friends, but people would then pick on her, saying Kuro never truly cared. Eventually she stopped listening to them and they got bored and moved on. But if she hears someone say Kuro never liked her, then she will attack while crying.
Possible love interest: she might get back together with Kuro, but that would be when they are adults, but she may end up with an Alien OC I'm making later.

I know she needs more work, but what do you think so far? anything I have currently that needs to be changed? any pointers? it would be very helpful if you could help out.

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to sailorphoenixblack [2013-06-18 18:11:04 +0000 UTC]

I think you're off to a decent start. Although you could expand more on why her personality is the way it is, mostly her introverted nature and her becoming overly defensive about her ex-boyfriend. Also, the way you describe her fear of snakes, it doesn't seem all that important to her development, especially since the way she got it is fairly mundane. Not to say that a mundane past is bad, it's usually better to do that in order to keep it from being more interesting than what happens to her in the present. Delve more into her relationship with Kuro and why it didn't work out, because that's way more important to know than the reason she fears snakes so much.

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sailorphoenixblack In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2013-06-20 13:22:02 +0000 UTC]

that's true, I'll need to get more work done, although I put the fear of snakes as a little bit of irony because her animal is a species of mouse and snakes are predators of the mice

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kitsunekeyblader In reply to sailorphoenixblack [2013-06-20 13:29:09 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I like it when people include that their OC actually acts like their animal. Too bad Ichigo never grew claws and impulsively destroyed her furniture or chased wild birds.

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