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LinearMango — CC-OCT Chapter 0 pg 8
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Page 7: [link]Intro comic: done!!!!!!
Biggest question to ask! What has the mayor done to earn a visit from the Dianthus family?
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Okay. There are a bag full of things that are wrong with this comic. The ways some of the panels are placed, the timing, and don't get me started on the dialogue. Simply put it, there are A LOT of things that could be improved with all of this.
Yet all that aside, I'm very pleased with what I've done. I haven't assembled something like this before and considering my lack of skills, I did rather well. I've learned more things in the month of doing this comic than I have in the past two years and I honestly can't beat that. If I get the chance to do another comic, I guarantee it wont be as bad as this.
And if I don't make it into the tournament, I would regret NOTHING!
*sigh* Okay, I just wanted to get that out!
Please leave some constructive criticism on what I could do to improve my comic skills.
All characters belong to me!!!!
Core-Up City concept and tournament:
