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Published: 2002-01-24 05:15:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 329; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 78
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This is a render that was done in Bryce 5. I started working on it one day and could stop till it was finished. As you can see it is a four-cylinder crank and pistons (please no 4 cylinder jokes).I like to have my bgs plan and simple to keep from being to destracting, yet artistic.
Tell me what you think and what you would try to improve on.
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i agree with the most stuff said above, but i would change the colour of the font too ... this is somehow to aggresive ...
the engine is great, maby just make it a little bit bigger ...
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Sweet. I have thought about doing an engine myself. You nailed the pistions, but like others have said, the text covers most of it. Move that and you are good to go!
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Yeah, don't cover a beautiful render like that
I love it..
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mmmm... emu.
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I can't say anything Cranial hasn't. Only emphasize that I'm in complete agreement.
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The model looks awesome, and I really wish I could see it.
As said already you definitely need to consider not covering the focal point with a sub-element of the piece.
I'm not to sure about the white glow either, but if you fix those issues this will be very nice.
Good work.
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see me in a polar bear suit ?
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I agree with billy, it's very nice, but move the text, or make it transparent.
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Move the text or make it transparent
Doesnt matter if you win or you lose. Its all bollocks anyway
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