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m32 — At least this one is breathing
Published: 2006-07-09 11:02:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 16; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Twenty minutes I've spent, reflecting my lifeseems like forever since I last heard you breathe
And I'm flirting with visions of you as my wife
Everytime, I can't shake this feeling
finding myself mezmerized, and drawn in by your lips
Again, I'm not sure if I'm dreaming
finding myself hypnotized, and drawn in by your hips
So twenty months have passed with you in my life
I've found comfort in simply watching you breathe
I tell you now what I've thought, I want you for my wife
Everytime, I can't shake this feeling
finding myself mezmerized, and drawn in by your lips
Again, I'm not sure if I'm dreaming
finding myself hypnotized, and drawn in by your hips
Now twenty years I've given you of my life
now lying beside me I can feel as you breathe
My own breath draws more surely with you as my wife
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I like this. I'm never good at poetry critique, so all I can say is, I like how it moves, I like the structure, I like it.
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