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Published: 2014-02-01 04:24:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 453; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 0
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Not as detailed as I'd like to make it, I will change this later ok i promise. i'm buried in homework and robotics and just ahhDon't cry because it's over; smile because it happened.
fun facts bc why not
*yes, my hair is actually like that in real life, it's getting super long and shaggy in the front ahh
*the photos are actually based on real ones with my brothers (we're triplets, that's why there's three babies in the first one lol)
*forΒ deviantART-Related 's contest, with the theme "Memories" with a deviantID
*me and my best friend made a blue/purplish flower crown a while ago, i love them ok
*happy chinese new year!!
3 hours, wacom bamboo fun tablet
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First of al, the color has been done really and you integrate pattern within the color which is very cool that you did that. Next, is that proportion is pretty good everywhere except for the face. I feel that the check bones is slightly to big and kind of goes against the tilted head, and I think the lips and the nose is too straight for the tilted head, but overall it is pretty good. I love the flow of the hair it really good, and I love how you did roughed in, because it give a perspective of it is far and slight important to her because it mean something to her, but the focus is more on the person then the picture. In addition my eye are taken to her face more then the picture itself which is good and I wonder what see looking at as well. MY guess is that she look at her past, because it seem important and a safe keep to her. I love how you did a spotted background which goes back to the pattern. Another issue I had is that it seems flat and this is because their isn't enough shading and if the light is in front, because I think this because of the hair, then make sure the edge of her have shading and the shading transition from dark to gray to light. You did that somewhat in the hair, just make sure in goes to the rest of the body. Over all this is a really lovely piece and done well, just fix those problems and you skills will increase and this piece would look a lot better.
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