HOME | DD

Published: 2010-06-27 22:18:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 5964; Favourites: 209; Downloads: 20
Redirect to original
Description
He came to kill her,to get rid of his weakness;
these feelings for his brother's miko,
feelings Sesshoumaru could not name.
"Prepare yourself!"
was all the warning she got, before he took his aim.
But even in the face of death
the miko showed no fear.
A calm smile on her lips,
the young girl reached for him instead.
Blue orbs, full of trust, gazed deep in golden eyes.
"Everything will be all right," she promised
and the taiyoukai's heart skipped a beat.
These unknown feelings, Sesshoumaru was aware,
posed a risk for him.
They were his only weakness.
But, deep down inside, the inu-youkai knew
it was too late.
He never would get rid of her.
Kagome.
so... i really, really hope, i did't make too many mistakes.... like i said befor....
i'm german... and i never had good grads in my english classes..
if someone thinks, it's total crap... i will delete it immediately ... it's ok *smile*
but the picture is nice, right!?.. *wink*
Related content
Comments: 10
Bluediamondpikachu83 [2022-10-22 22:16:09 +0000 UTC]
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Anil-Pheonix [2012-07-07 07:53:44 +0000 UTC]
If this is art to fsnfuc, I'd like to read it, but I love the concept, very pretty.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
ShifterPrincessmoved [2011-12-14 01:51:26 +0000 UTC]
what an awesome and beautiful image!!!!
No you didn't make any mistakes despite english being your second language, its really good
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
emerding [2010-09-26 03:36:21 +0000 UTC]
i love your little poem/story and the picture i think their both great! please DON'T delete it.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Lunae-Ariae [2010-07-04 03:32:15 +0000 UTC]
It is sooo not total crap. I love the picture and the poem/story.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
InuYashaSesshomaru [2010-06-28 21:42:52 +0000 UTC]
This is a WONDERFUL little drabble! And your drawing is beautiful as well!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
AwesomePirate [2010-06-28 08:38:51 +0000 UTC]
WOW
this is just....AMAZING
- Me? I'm dishonest, and you can always trust me to be dishonest, honestly. It's the honest ones you have to watch out...because you can never predict if they're doing something incredibly...stupid-
-Jack Sparrow-
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
LovelyPoison [2010-06-28 01:44:49 +0000 UTC]
♥♥♥
No, I think your little poem/tale was very nicely done! ♥
Also, beautiful picture! ♥
👍: 0 ⏩: 0