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Published: 2001-08-17 03:41:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 303; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 29
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Description Each night I see you in my dreams
and I know you are the one for me.
And even though I've never met
this beauty of an angel yet,
I hope and pray that someday soon
our eyes will meet across a room
and instantly we'll know for sure
this is the day we waited for.

Cross the room and gazes meet
I hold my breath, so scared to breathe.
Afraid that it's another dream
where I awake as you reach for me.
Both amazed at how unreal
love at first sight finally feels.

My heart beats faster as we stand
close enough to take your hand.
I see the details of your face
and can't help think of your embrace.
Our eyes are locked and time stands still,
and doesnt move again until
she reaches out her hand for mine
and smiles that smile so divine.

We sit and talk for hours on end
and instantly we're closest friends.
That night I dream again, and yet
I wake up in a cold sweat
afraid it was another dream
not trusting how real it had all seemed.
But when I scan the room that day
I see you cast a look my way
I smile as I call your name
and know our lives will never be the same.

We face the trials hand-in-hand
and know we'll never dream again
of finding the one for you it seems
just to find that it's a dream
that slipped right through your fingertips
just like an Angel Made of Mist...
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Comments: 9

twira [2002-07-13 07:36:02 +0000 UTC]

That's so gorgeous, so beautiful... Veeery romantic too I love how you make everything rhyme; it can be so difficult, but you seem to have no problem with it at all... Oh yes, there's talent in you

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d00bie [2002-05-25 08:23:49 +0000 UTC]

the title and the poem are both truly beautiful

very well written and has a good flow to it
well done
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Whoever said that theres plenty of fish in the sea was lying
Sometimes theres only one fish trust me.

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jsenn [2001-10-25 02:26:39 +0000 UTC]

I love the sound of strength and love in marriage. It is not easy. It is frought with difficulty at times and yet when there is a basis of enormous love, especially from the husband, things somehow work out, adjust, improve, strengthen...become what was meant to be, a melding of two into one...we become soulmates. It is an amazing process and when it turns out right, it is the most rewarding relationship, I think God intended, next to His with us individually. Okay so I skipped lightly into the future with this but it's because you lay the foundation of love....and I know what comes next because I hear it in your words. Beautiful words here, Sir.

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dor [2001-08-29 15:36:58 +0000 UTC]

sheesh Matrix!!! I hope your wife don't mind but...
I'm gonna read you forever!!! hehe
There goes my day! I gotta read "all" your stuff now

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darake [2001-08-17 22:15:19 +0000 UTC]

Matrix:

https://www.deviantart.com/news.php?id=54 11



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matrix7 [2001-08-17 19:04:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow, you guys have got me almost blushing here. I truly appreciate all the kind words. I got a quick quesiton. I saw that they are running a poetry contest here that is about your lifelong ambition. At the time I wrote this it was to meet my "dream girl". Would that be considered grounds for a submission??

I would really like to submit this one and I just need to know how (assumin I will be able to upload again by the deadline). I havent been here long so I need to know the procedure I suppose...Can anyone help??

Thanks for any help...

::Matrix7::

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darake [2001-08-17 18:05:38 +0000 UTC]

Truly a gorgeous poem, I usually go deeper in commenting on poetry...but this one is perfect, nothing more to say

You got me stunned.

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nitrus [2001-08-17 13:59:45 +0000 UTC]

wow.

nuff said.

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sanguru [2001-08-17 04:08:44 +0000 UTC]

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Again with this amazing rhyming! You're making me so very jealous! oi, very nice. I love the skill you have with these words and the emotion you portray. It all feels like a dream, but it's so very real. great job, you gotta keep me jealous now. =]

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*Sannie*
-I enter in silence
and in that way
I leave.-

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