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Published: 2001-09-05 20:37:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 165; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 22
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Open ended landscapes of emotionstretching as far as they eye
can see to an unseen destination
that only it knows.
No limits, no boundries
no start, no end.
For good emotions this is
a wonderful thing.
Finding a new facet to explore
every day as you run with childlike
innocence simply because you can.
Room to fly, room to soar
room to run, room to be free.
But what happens when the painful
feelings transforms this
utopia of open space into a
prison without bars?
No companionship, no change
no laughter, no tears left...
And you would trade all the
space in your world for
a tiny room with a single
friend who cares and listens.
No hidden goals, no mistaken meanings
no bitterness, no hate...
Just a little closure.
And that is enough.
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Comments: 4
matrix7 [2001-09-06 11:30:05 +0000 UTC]
Faithwalker: does that mean you were glad to see the poem end *pouts*
hahaha
Thanx guys! I especially liked the "...snap me back in my chair..." ----josh---- heehee
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----josh---- [2001-09-06 00:36:58 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome, you took me on a flight
through that beautiful land of expanse and never ending space, only to snap me back in my chair with the reality of what was missing. I love this...
Psalm 139:13
For you created my inmost being. You knit me together in my mothers womb.
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giggly [2001-09-05 20:46:20 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I definately love it. Very nice, though I am like the opposite.. yet not. I can't explain it, but I understand it. Lol Great poem!
O.o The world is full of endless possibilities, just out of my reach O.o
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faithwalker [2001-09-05 20:43:52 +0000 UTC]
Closure......a good thing!
Great poem!
Faithwalker
Grow
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