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matrix7 — Corridors of the Mind
Published: 2001-08-30 20:26:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 159; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 21
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egin:::Walking through the spaceous halls
always changing beneath my feet.
Bending to my moods and whims
dancing to some unseen beat.
Marble floors and stony walls
brooding, thinking of my life.
Hear the silent echo's call
as thoughts go speeding fast as light.
Warp and change, change and move
different now, yet still unchanged.
Amazing as I change my moods
the space does change, but I remain.
Here, then there, then gone again
Hearing echoes of the past
I turn to find myself alone
voiceless questions never asked.
Ghosts of futures long forgot
surround my esssence as I see
memories, more oft than not
staring at a transparent me.
Some old friends, some from books
others I wish that I could find
as I explore the turns and nooks
in the Corridors of the Mind.
:::End:::
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Comments: 3
Great, as always. You write such inspiring thing, I just love them so much. Please, for everyone on here. never stop writing.
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very nice read, maybe on the 3rd stanza
first line
warp and change, rearranged and moved
different now yet still unchanged
it is a little hard to read with the ammount of times change is used
but it is a very nice and original poem nice work on the ending it caps it off with an !
words mean nothing without emotion ....show some heart write a poem
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very nice. the flow got a little jerky at the 2nd stanza though... but i love the way you've worded everything. corridors of the mind. very powerful ending.
::: Life is a privilige... not a curse... live it like it is.
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