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matrix7 — Experiment in Rays 2
Published: 2002-07-26 16:16:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 493; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 34
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Again, I know the landscape is not quite right here (the line on the horizon) but I liked the rays. This series is more about the sky and I will rework these all when i get time to, just wanting to give ya somethign to hold you over till thenComments welcome
::[Matrix7]::
Wes Smith
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it's cool, the clouds kind of mimic the shapes on the sea; with the rocks and such. . .in comparison to the holes in the clouds. well composed picture
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the sky is the part that attracted me the most to this image - I loved what you did with the colours of the sky and the clouds. the reflection on the water is a bit bright - but I still love the piece. the rays are awesome, though! great scenery.
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Listen to Aleks -Good words there, I would have said things along those lines.
I have a problem with that horizontal band of orange - so distracting, I will let you keep going on that though .. and yes, very nice rays
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Everything that I can think of has been said, nice piece here.
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Very good job on the rays in this one .. they come through perfectly. I would say to work with the density shift and contrast of the clouds a bit and the darkening so the clouds don't look so black .. You have to remember that there is still a lot of light coming through, so .. the clouds will still be lit up quite a bit. I'd love to have seen some more of the terrain lit up by the sun rays but its still good.
Shoreline could use a bit of touch up and the reflection could down a bit, and you already know about the horizon. Overall a well done scene though.
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Detail:
3/5 -[ Shoreline and clouds need some re-working. ]-
Complexity:
3/5 -[ Reflection could go down a bit and you know about the horizon. ]-
Overall: 6/10 -[ Overall a well done scene, just a few things need to be re-worked. ]-
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nice rays you have there the sun does seem a tad bright on the water i would say the shoreline to but you already covered that in the desc nice work hope to see the final ver
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Terrific sky and contrasts within it, little brother. I love the colors and light, the magical feel to this is overpowering.
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I like the blend of colours that make up the sky and the way they contrast. Keep it that way. HOw ever the clouds look too dark to me and the way the light shines through does not really match the cloud cover pattern.
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Land's not being lit up bcuz the light isnt hitting it, bcuz the light is in front and over it. Yes the reflection is strong but the sky is beautiful, nice render.
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the scenes looking good but the lightting is a bit weird here
the su makes a huge reflection on the water, but not alot of the landscape is being lit up ... i dunno just a point
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yepp the reflection in the water is a bit to strong... but these rays are great. i know this ray 'plays' - it's not easy to light up the terrain with those... well - not impossible, but really hard. keep on
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I like it alot, but I think that the reflection in the water is way too big for the sun.
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Like a big spotlight dropping in on the scene. I like the rays also. The rock formations are pretty interesting - like a big sea monster drifing through the scene.
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