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Published: 2002-02-17 05:20:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 205; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 32
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Two hearts passing in the nighttaking notice of their twin.
Stop and gaze in awestruck wonder
gazes locked and drawing near.
Noses brushing in the darkness
Breathing ceases for an instant
gently lover's lips caress
nervous giggles thrill the heart
feeling hearts beat in their chest
Exhale deeply, smile and listen
to the song of love's first kiss.
Diving headfirst into wonder
Both encompassed in its bliss.
Take me from your gilded box
wrap my frame in blissful song.
Walk with me and hold my hand
Hold me closely as I fall.
See the world through my eyes
Hear the music with my ears
Feel the breezes with my hands
Wet your cheeks with all my tears...
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Comments: 5
cooper [2002-03-23 03:37:41 +0000 UTC]
What can I say that has not been said already..... Wonderful poem, and I as well remember the day you joined DA...... tis sad when such poetic beauty is hidden from the world... keep writing and take care
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jsenn [2002-03-22 01:22:51 +0000 UTC]
This is nice, sweet, tender. First kiss, yes, it was very sweet. Looks like yours was too.
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dor [2002-02-19 03:38:15 +0000 UTC]
Hi Wes, nice to see you at it again
me gots no big bags of money but I will leave a comment...
Very sweet poem!
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higgs [2002-02-18 04:49:02 +0000 UTC]
very emotional, nice work matrix
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umbilikal [2002-02-18 04:48:59 +0000 UTC]
glad to see you back...i even remember when you joined *sniff*
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