porgylove [2001-11-26 01:52:25 +0000 UTC]

again I liked your description, it reminds me of the Dalai Lama's book of wisdom, you should do your own book of wisdom, everyone should really.

~now i see

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umbilikal [2001-11-11 03:56:41 +0000 UTC]

so sad....and it makes you wonder...

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~where does the fist go when the hand opens~

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jibrille [2001-11-10 05:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Excellent poem indeed, I really like it, the idea.. the form it is all different.. The idea/meaning is stunning.

All in all I really love this work.

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Bleed Worthy.

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oiboi [2001-11-09 06:44:55 +0000 UTC]

Excellent poem... in structure, in style, and in message... i know the words you say are true...

-adrian-

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wickedlysweet [2001-11-09 03:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow you sure you dont know my stepdad?? LMAO This fits him to the TEE!! Anyways nice job.....

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dor [2001-11-09 00:36:58 +0000 UTC]

Great work wes

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demonical [2001-11-08 23:28:41 +0000 UTC]

i love this, its so simple yet so full of feeling and meaning. you're feelings are blatantly expressed in this and thats what poetry is all about. simplistic or complex, its all about the feelings. nice job

satisfaction is the death of desire
-*deMonicaL*

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matrix7 [2001-11-08 19:00:47 +0000 UTC]

That was some comment there article. Sounds like I hit a nerve...

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DeviantMAG staff: Textures
Scary huh??

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article [2001-11-08 18:45:17 +0000 UTC]

trust me man,

she doesnt hear the songs you never sang. not even the ones you did. not even the ones she did.

she never saw the looks you never gave. did she even notice the everytime i look at you ones?

she didnt always see the tears you cried, even the ones right to her left.

love can be a feeling; it can be a truth. sometimes it is just a feeling.

she doesnt know of your deepest pain you never showed. much less feel it.

yeah, yeah. she wants it. only time will tell if shell keep it, for you.

and then, maybe, when shes gone youll feel safe enough to expose.

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themadpoet [2001-11-08 16:51:38 +0000 UTC]

we tend to take for granted that which is given too freely and dont ever take the time to express exactly what that special someone means to us...i made a promise to the people that i love that i would never do that...this promise has become a sacred vow that i live by
nice job matrix...but i expected no less than well thought out words from you
keep it up

words mean nothing without emotion ....show some heart write a poem

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----josh---- [2001-11-08 15:54:12 +0000 UTC]

oh yup, I can relate to that soo well. I find myself getting caught up in work and other stuff, and before I know it, months have gone by. I'm working hard at making that up now. I actually wrote a similar poem a few days ago.

You have captured this very well with your words, and re-enforced my vow to be so much more than I am. Thank you Matrix



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