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Published: 2014-12-01 22:30:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 12711; Favourites: 143; Downloads: 71
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So, one of the new projects I am working on dubbed 'Princess Rescue' set in a fantasy world akin to RPG fantasies (which will be tied in with humour XD) now has the first set of Character designs.The theme is action/adventure/Harem/comedy/hentai.
These are the Characters that Will feature in the first Chapter.
THe top row are the Main designs of repeating Main character (Naruto, Sakura, Hinata and the mysterious Black Knight, Lord Delitor)
The bottom Row are characters that will feature in Chapter one, but may not return, as well as use of the general costume design for the warrior sects that may appear, or be seen as background characters.
I still need to design the look of the Hyuuga guards, Th Black knights guards (that will occur as the common 'goons' throughout) and another character based on Raikage A. Who will be mainly mentioned/seen in flashbacks and expository scenes. Again, mainly in Chapter one, with a few references in various following chapters.
A few notes.
TEMPLARS - I use the name, but I dunno if they will be called that. The idea in my head currently is that they are White mage warriors, excelling in both defensive and healing magics, but also proficient in fighting, but like the namesake order, they are also religion based. They are not defenders of a single land, but serve against evil, and practioners of their faith. Basically, every member trains to be a priest, warrior and healer. Some get more proficient at one than the others, so they have 'school masters' Those proficent in all three hold the highest ranks.
Lord Delitor is about 9/10ft, hence there being a silhouette of Hinata next to the design to show height.
ALL THE DESIGNS are counted as rough as I still need to fine tune any details they have, like patterns, iconography, symbols (like the 'Templar crest').
PLEASE FEEL FREE to comment on what you like and don't like, or if any need improving, or you feel could use an addition (I am expecting someone to say 'put spikes on Delitor to make him look evil'. But I tried that and I felt it was a bit too much.)
Inspirations taken from games such as FinalFantasy, Inifinite undiscovery, Legend of Zelda, and others.
Personal NOTE.
These designs and some of the concepts I have come up with (histories etc) that surround them are pretty detailed and vast, and Tsunades design, I feel is a shame to have in just one, chapter, with the possibility of one or two flash back appearances. Thus, I keep feeling about dropping the hentai scenes and making this just a full and pure adventure comedy. But, I have talked it over with my co-writer in this though, and the feeling is (and yes I do agree) we have put a lot of effort in to the story to simply remove all the adult scenes.Β
Oh and by the way, it is currently 20 chapters long.
That being said, I am still tempted to make a clean version that eradicates the Hentai, though possibly keeping some Ecchi elements as a side comic either in the style of Onaji (long strip) or NHC (serialized full comic) But, I think it would be hard doing the same story twice, so I would probably change the characters appearance to NOT make them Naruto versions, and more Originals. This would in fact make the story longer too as I could do more, and add more elements/plots than I would in the Hentai version.
I am not giving away spoilers for this comic concerning relevant plots, so please don't ask which characters might appear, and such. All I can tell you is, that some of the characters will not all be Β 'human' in the normal sense (i.e some will be elves/succubus/etc)
Well, i hope you like the designs so far, Will make some cleaned versions when I get the time, and ready to make changes.
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Comments: 140
mattwilson83 In reply to ??? [2014-12-02 11:50:07 +0000 UTC]
No, he doesn't get with them. ANd I am playing on the RPG elements, priestesses in fantasy tend to be in revealing clothing. Plus its a hentai, and thusly designs tend to be more revealing as well.
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DECLAINER [2014-12-02 05:07:51 +0000 UTC]
It looks great, when I read about the Black Knight it comes back to me... the Fire Emblem Path Of Radiance and Radiant Dawn. In my personal opinion... IS GREAT!
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DECLAINER In reply to mattwilson83 [2014-12-03 17:46:12 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, just remember how badass was to kill Greil. And how Ike has to fight aganist him in Radiant Dawn was cool!!
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Werewolf-Immortal [2014-12-02 04:32:20 +0000 UTC]
Hey, you know what would be awesome... Having Naruto and Kurama as two separate beings, but still connected somehow; like as a familiar, or as twin brothers, or something. I'd like to see you try that some time.
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mattwilson83 In reply to Werewolf-Immortal [2014-12-02 11:48:18 +0000 UTC]
Oh they are connected in a way, and as separate beings. We only see Kurama in a flashback, but his role is simple, and moody as always XDD
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Borelloman [2014-12-02 04:03:05 +0000 UTC]
i can't waiting for this story. your stories are great.
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naruhinafan01 In reply to ??? [2014-12-02 03:35:31 +0000 UTC]
i really looking forward to this you always make such great stories i cant waitΒ
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naruhinafan01 In reply to ??? [2014-12-02 03:35:01 +0000 UTC]
maybe sakura could have a diamond staff like the one of the far leftΒ
fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/i/201β¦
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naruhinafan01 In reply to ??? [2014-12-02 03:32:54 +0000 UTC]
images6.fanpop.com/image/photoβ¦
orΒ
th01.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/iβ¦
could be hinatas casual dressΒ
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naruhinafan01 In reply to ??? [2014-12-02 03:26:59 +0000 UTC]
Im going to be honest with you i am in love with hinata's formal dress but the casual dress i like it but not in love with it. I think the bottom could be changed like if she gonna wear the boots and the coat with i love on her. maybe instead have her wear shorts or maybe pants. I was also thinking that naruto could have a double sword on each shoulder and black knight have one on his waist. Another idea for hinata is maybe a caual dress similar to sakura but with hinata features and have no coat the short dress and long boots. As for the hentai maybe you could do a censored scene of it and then put it in your blog or other websites that you have and put the hentai parts in there that way you dont need the double story and in the description have a link so people can see it
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mattwilson83 In reply to naruhinafan01 [2014-12-02 11:46:01 +0000 UTC]
perhaps. but a lot of the hentai sorta mingles with plot, so its hard to sperate them and not make them well... seperate, without messing with how the story plays out.
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hinatalovetonaruto In reply to ??? [2014-12-02 03:16:58 +0000 UTC]
hinata's casual sorta reminds me ofΒ the anime murder princess
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Doc0316 [2014-12-02 02:51:01 +0000 UTC]
Naruto's look reminds me of Kirito from Sword Art Online.Β
Anyway, I can't wait to read this!Β
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mattwilson83 In reply to Doc0316 [2014-12-02 11:43:38 +0000 UTC]
I still need to check that out XP
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animeluver1694 [2014-12-02 02:33:53 +0000 UTC]
Hey matt. Thought you'd like my thoughts on the text:
The Hyuuga knights should be like the black knight, just cut down on the layered plating. Google Warcraft paladin armor, I'm sure that'll help. Personally, I like this design:Β images.mmosite.com/photo/2009/β¦
As for BK guards, two words: death knights
Raikage = BATTLEMONK. Like a body-building xaolin
Judging by your description, I'd call them 'clerics' and not 'templars'. Maybe 'The Clerical Order' or something.
If the adult scenes bother you, there are ways to make them less porno and more artistic. Spartacus and Game of thrones did it well by not actually showing the intercourse and making it more like 'naked hugging'. You did it well, too in NHC. I cant remember the page, but it was taken down deviantart; the scene when naruto is having nightmares about what he did to get the antidote. If you're still concerned, these adult scenes were perfect:Β starcrosseddb.deviantart.com/aβ¦
On a final note matt, this premise is good. Like really good. I just dont see why it's naruto characters. OC's would be fine, if not better. But this is a minor issue.
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mattwilson83 In reply to animeluver1694 [2014-12-02 11:37:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
I like the example, definitely the helm for the Hyuuga guard on that one, I'll look up th epaladin armour later.
Interestingg thought on the BK guards.
Oh god, yeah, that might work on a design level, I will note that Raikages role in this is small, but also important, and is inspired by events in canon between his village and the Hyuuga.
Hmm... yeah. I like that, I have an idea for the gods the order worships, so I could call them something, like Clerics of the Divine, or 'godsname' Cleric Order. or something XD
Yeah, that would be how I would do it, but the fact is, every chapter has some modicum of Hentai in it, for hentai sake. You're guaranteed to see someone having sex, and not just for romantic reasons. Its a hentai story afterall.
and thats why in the 'side version' I might make them Originals. But originally my partner had requested this as a Naruhina crossover, before I decided I wanted to take it on and expand it.
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animeluver1694 In reply to mattwilson83 [2014-12-02 15:13:04 +0000 UTC]
glad I could help. Maybe you could help me if I get back into writing
Good luck with your new piece.
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mattwilson83 In reply to animeluver1694 [2014-12-02 19:49:51 +0000 UTC]
^^ of course ^^
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PrayerReverie In reply to ??? [2014-12-02 01:52:39 +0000 UTC]
I would play this game with those designs.Β Would love to see more!
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Johnny-Spectre [2014-12-02 01:52:34 +0000 UTC]
Old Man Hermit (Former Guard Captain) Jiraiya as well?
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mattwilson83 In reply to Johnny-Spectre [2014-12-02 11:28:45 +0000 UTC]
he might appear later on in the series in a flashback.
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Johnny-Spectre In reply to mattwilson83 [2014-12-02 11:30:04 +0000 UTC]
a Naruto flashback or a Tsunade flashback, that's the question.
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mattwilson83 In reply to Johnny-Spectre [2014-12-02 15:25:28 +0000 UTC]
lol. Naruto for sure, in this Jiraiya helped raise him.
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kurtklaineblaine [2014-12-02 01:48:55 +0000 UTC]
Hinata's outfits remind me so much of Zelda. I really love all of the designs!!
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mattwilson83 In reply to kurtklaineblaine [2014-12-02 11:28:10 +0000 UTC]
yeah, had some inspiration from. I think Zelda is the best looking princess in games.
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kurtklaineblaine In reply to mattwilson83 [2014-12-02 17:42:14 +0000 UTC]
I totally agree with you! She is extremely pretty and all of her various designs are all so unique and beautiful!
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animeluver1694 [2014-12-02 01:36:12 +0000 UTC]
Naruto is perfect for both designs
Sakura's journeyman skirt design is a bit revealing, especially as a templar. Maybe a bit longer or full-leg socks.
Hinata's "casual" outfit is waaay too flashy, but extremely well done. Make the skirt dress length and I'd make it the new formal, but I definitely suggest remaking the casual wear. The top middle character of this -- th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f⦠seems like something she'd wear
Hiashi is perfect
Tsunade and Shizune is good
Black knight -- no serious opinion.
All in all, great work as usual matt. I'll be sure to write a note or comment here when I read the explanation
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animeluver1694 In reply to mattwilson83 [2014-12-02 01:39:42 +0000 UTC]
holy crap. you reply fast lol
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nicegirl6 [2014-12-02 00:51:05 +0000 UTC]
So cool!Β
I love it!
great designs, I can't wait to see your story, I really like your stories.
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Nazbaque In reply to ??? [2014-12-02 00:42:20 +0000 UTC]
But but but! If Hinata wears that crown we can't read her hair!
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fight2protect [2014-12-02 00:41:40 +0000 UTC]
I think a good sword for Naruto would be this ones:
-Clamore
-Bastard
-Broadsword
-Long Sword
And have his battle stands be similar or exactly like Cloud from FF7.
For Sakura, I think a Rapier sword would best fit her size and evasion skills.
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GhostWindX In reply to fight2protect [2014-12-02 00:46:37 +0000 UTC]
you forgot excalibur and masamune
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fight2protect In reply to GhostWindX [2014-12-02 06:47:18 +0000 UTC]
Um... I just recommended normal blades types...
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GhostWindX In reply to fight2protect [2014-12-02 07:42:06 +0000 UTC]
upps sorry, i just recommended those swords, if could be a extra bonus, like kirito and his excalibur i know, how about using excalibur or masamune in a final battle in there series? if could be a badass battle
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fight2protect In reply to GhostWindX [2014-12-02 09:19:18 +0000 UTC]
That would make the whole atmosphere of "chosen hero" vibe if he does have a legendary sword use in the final battle. But since its base on familiar and well known RPG's wouldn't swords like The Master sword, Ultima and other such as those? But don't get me wrong, I also love those two legendary swords too
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GhostWindX In reply to fight2protect [2014-12-02 15:48:00 +0000 UTC]
i just hpoe of matt doing one legendary badass sword
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McPhee1701 In reply to ??? [2014-12-02 00:22:54 +0000 UTC]
These look nice! I can't wait for the story!
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TwilightSage14 [2014-12-02 00:12:01 +0000 UTC]
looks cool. are you going to do a colored version of this pic though?
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