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Published: 2007-03-24 03:12:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 3178; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 20
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Description Above are my character Vex and his D.H. squad on a routine raid.

A little info on them:
The Control Brains of Judgementia employ a unique unit of Irkens known as the Defect Hunters. The Hunters' sole purpose is to root out and capture any and all dangerous Defects and insane Irkens. The imprisoned are either sent to an asylum or are put on Trial, depending on the severity of their case.
Vex and his squad have been behind the capture of some of the Empire's most dangerous Defects, including Zim after O.I.D. 1.

If you have an insane character, they'd better watch their backs. XD
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Sirithiliel In reply to ??? [2007-09-04 23:37:53 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: Right, right. *lifts her head proudly, reminding herself that she was a top fighter pilot of the Empire and she had best look it.*

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-04 23:45:23 +0000 UTC]

Vex: *leads her out and brings her through the holding cells*

Random prisoners: Dead Irken walking!

Vex: Pay no attention to them...I'll be back for you in a few minutes..Just have to find out what your judge will be.

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-04 23:47:02 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *shifts a bit nervously, but keeps her calm.* Right...

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-04 23:57:10 +0000 UTC]

Vex: *leaves Jynn in a holding cell*

inmate: *leanng against the wall of the cell* So, what're you here for?

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-04 23:58:48 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *shrugs* Supposedly I'm defective.

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 00:07:16 +0000 UTC]

inmate: Ah...I see...Me. I beat some coworkers to death with office supplies.....Work related stress and all....

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 00:10:15 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *smirks* I'm a solo class fighter pilot. No coworkers. I take out my...work related stress...on the rebellion. ^_O

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 00:12:56 +0000 UTC]

inmate : Ah..I see..well at least you have an excuse to blast people...

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 00:15:33 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *gives a wicked grin* I get paid to blast people. And the more people I blast, the better the pay. ^^

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 00:21:46 +0000 UTC]

inmate: MAybe it's that attitude that made you defective?

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 00:25:05 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *tilts her head thoughtfully* No...I don't think so. Usually they encourage that attitude, because it means more dead rebels. Which is always a good thing, no?

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 00:29:33 +0000 UTC]

inmate: WEll from what I've heard..Some soldiers go beyond even that extra junk....They begin to do it more for the knowledge that they've killed instead of the money or the empire...

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 00:31:00 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *shakes her head* I hunt rebels for the Empire, I have never done it for any other reason. I kill only when I am ordered too.

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 00:38:00 +0000 UTC]

Inmate: *about to speak when Vex returns*

Vex: Well..I've got good new and bad news.....Which do you want to hear first?

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 00:39:15 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *eyes narrow* The good...I guess.

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 00:53:52 +0000 UTC]

Vex: ^^ well the good news is...You're not getting the worst judge this place has to offer...Bad news...You're getting the second worst one.

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 02:32:07 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *sighs* Lovely...

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 02:42:09 +0000 UTC]

Vex: You're trial begins right now. COme with me. *opens the cell*

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 02:43:56 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *shrugs and follows, hoping for the best* Let's get this started...

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 02:50:33 +0000 UTC]

Vex: *leads her to a massive courtroom area. A small podium awaits before a massive control brain. Vex points at the podium so Jynn would stand there.*

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 02:54:38 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *walks over and stands, eyeing those about her and keeping her calm.*

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 03:00:01 +0000 UTC]

Brain: *looms over her, calculating and cold. A thin cable descneds from the darkened ceiling and attaches to her PAK*..Irken Jynn...You stand accused of being a defective. How do you plead?

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 03:04:10 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *keeps herself still and calm* Guilty, with hope of redemption.

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 03:10:47 +0000 UTC]

Brain: Question:...What does the defendant believe to be the cause of the defendant's defect?

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 03:17:30 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *stares up at the brain, tilting her head to the side.* I...do not know what the cause may be.

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 03:26:18 +0000 UTC]

Brain: Hmm..Not a good answer....I shall inspect your life records stored in the PAK. *a slight electrical jolt in Jynn's PAK signals the download*

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 03:32:20 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *stands still and waits, puzzling in her mind what could possibly have caused her defect.*

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 03:36:24 +0000 UTC]

Brain: Speculation:....Defect may have been produced over time through multiple shock caused by fierce combat.

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 03:38:47 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: ...is that fixable...?

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 03:44:12 +0000 UTC]

Brain: .......Negative.

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 03:46:38 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *looks distraught* ...what now, then...? I have always been loyal to the Empire...I've had a perfect record until now...

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 03:49:07 +0000 UTC]

Brain: I have reviewed the information presented...I shall begin my deliberation...*the brain appears to shut down as it goes into a thinking mode*

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 03:53:39 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *keeps silent, staring at the floor as she ran over all possible situations and conclusions, most of them not very hopeful.*

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 03:55:59 +0000 UTC]

Brain: *reactivates after a few grueling moments* Descision made....Normal sentencing would be...Termination!

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 03:57:22 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *lowers her gaze to the floor, closing her eyes* Normal sentencing...?

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 03:58:46 +0000 UTC]

Brain: Correct..but in light of your military record...a more suitable punishment is Banishment from the Empire.

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 04:03:19 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *bows her head* I accept your judgement.

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 04:21:10 +0000 UTC]

Brain: So be it. You are not permitted to enter Imperial territory under penalty of death. You are diismissed

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 04:28:09 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *steps off the podium, glancing around for some sign of what she was supposed to do now.*

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 04:36:38 +0000 UTC]

Vex: Come with me...There may be a chance for repeal...The damage can't be that bad.

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 04:37:42 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *nods and follows Vex silently*

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 04:41:38 +0000 UTC]

Vex: I usually don't feel sympathy for Defects..but..YOu acted differently...Most embraced their defective attitude..you...were different. You wished to keep your loyalty

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 04:44:19 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *lifts her gaze to look at him.* I am loyal to the Empire. I love my job. I love to fly...to hunt rebels for the Empire is all that I wish...

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 04:48:38 +0000 UTC]

Vex: *smiles* I think we just became friends......I'll see that you get an appeal, even if I have to petition the Tallest themselves.

Gotta go for the night

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 04:49:47 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *gives him a small smile in return* I...thank you, for you help. I do appreciate it.

later ^^

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 17:21:35 +0000 UTC]

Vex: It's no trouble....Hmm..There could be another way to fix you up...but it's highly illegal.

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 18:30:43 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *tilts her head to the side* What way would that be?

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 18:50:47 +0000 UTC]

Vex: Well..It involves..stealing a blank PAK from somewhere. We could download everything from your old PAK onto it, but no defect..Maybe even install those nifty claws of yours...

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Sirithiliel In reply to Mech-Maker [2007-09-05 18:54:40 +0000 UTC]

Jynn: *eyes narrow* Usually I would not want to do anything illegal...but I do not wish to be banished...I want to continue my work...

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Mech-Maker In reply to Sirithiliel [2007-09-05 19:01:35 +0000 UTC]

Vex: Then..loks like I have some undercover work to do... Keep this to yourself only...

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