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Mercunix — Mars Behold
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Published: 2008-01-27 01:59:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 169; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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I am Mars! God of War!Behold my favors upon thee!
I shall render thee stricken with splendor,
and grief will be no more to thee.
Crush thine enemies and make strong
mine fort, for the battle rages about thee.
Emperor among emperors,
King Above Kings,
Sacrifice unto ME!
For I am in thine, and thine owes to me.
I am thine power and choice, thine fear and thine voice.
Ode to me, sing with me, I am forever and never with we.
Pour the Iron, cast thy blade,
Lift it up to me!
An oracle will follow and be neither hollow for folly,
nor bloody, nor braced.
Unto he will thee follow and win with true solice
the secrets and meaning of me.
SPEAK!
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Comments: 1
Hmmm. I like this a lot. I like this style. It's old-fashioned, which is nice for the subject, and you've done well with the rhyme scheme. The only part that tripped me up was "and never with we," because that didn't make sense whereas the rest did. Nicely done, though.
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