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My mother told me once of whenA young hare ventured from her den
And as she danced in field and glen
The world sang joy about her.
But wicked hateful things abound
And that young hare these evils found
Then whisked her up from off the ground
And glen was left without her.
The wicked power tore asunder
And with this cruel and fateful blunder
Cast her to a world of wonder
Would she e'er see home again?
And so hare flew that mournful day
Over the sky and far away
And down and down, beneath the sea
To a place unlike the glen.
A world of men and man's design
A place where God's light would not shine
A Hell of steel beneath the brine
Where misery's echoes boomed.
And all around her there were others
Beasts like her, all sisters, brothers,
Locked up, all, with one another,
In deep sea-dark, entombed.
And in this crypt far from the shore
The hare lay down upon the floor
Imprisoned there forever more
And left to all her sorrow.
Her tender world was lost and gone
So joy and happiness foregone
She slept and cried and prayed for dawn
To wait the coming morrow.
The hound was still, the birds said naught,
The fox denied he had been caught,
The bear cried "This is just our lot",
And surrendered to his pain.
But the cat stood up and shook his head
And rising from his metal bed
He said "For now, I am not dead,
And I will not die in vain!"
He cried aloud with much disdain
And tore about his stark domain
And said "These walls cannot contain
A force as strong as I!"
And the fox just laughed, and the birds all cried
And the bear knotted up himself and died
But the hare looked on as the poor cat tried
To break him free and fly.
He shook his chain with all his rage
And flew in anger 'round his cage
Decrying this dark mournful stage
And the hare stood up as well.
With passion did she then respond,
She chewed her ropes and broke her bonds,
And freed the cat, they ran beyond,
They ran to flee that hell.
And what became of cat and hare?
Did they break free to purer air?
To guess their fate we shouldn't dare
Perhaps their tale closed well.
But for all the beasts trapped in the Nether
All life from out the loch and heather
The flock that could not work together
Are sure still trapped in Hell.
Incense sweet, and cradled warm
Like lovers coddled, arm in arm
Two souls, nomadic, fleeing harm:
That wicked, metal glen.
Now coming morn drives off the curse
Too startled still to dare converse
Both praying they have seen the worst
So ends their tale --
Amen.
"The Metal Glen" by Weaver
Ruby Quest. I heard of it and looked it up. This is what I've been doing all this week so far instead of actually coming on dA. Granted the game was already over but I was reading it over and man do I wish I could've been part of it. I don't even go on 4chan either ._.
Whatever. This is one of my new obsessions for now. It'll probably die down though I can imagine.
This is also one of the more disturbing things I've liked...and this picture is one of the most disturbing that I've drawn too >.>
Also I tried a new technique with the pencil. I shaded with a regular pencil and then smudged the pencil with my finger.
Awesome.
Enjoy it anyway |D
And that poem at the top is the poem that this story follows. It was written by the guy who started the game.
Also I'm wondering if I should keep them in the original style next time, use my own or use them both...
By the way, this whole thing is here if you want to know what it is. It was sort of a...forum thing =>[link]
Ruby Quest and all it's characters and "The Metal Glen" are (c) Weaver
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Comments: 117
CourierBell In reply to ??? [2009-10-03 02:25:59 +0000 UTC]
Do what you want. I just think it's epic. Like There She Is but darker.
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BlackxTigris In reply to ??? [2009-10-02 00:51:39 +0000 UTC]
This is quite disturbing, I'm not gonna lie... I don't know why, but I really like it. Its very dark. And I love the pencil shading thing ya did. Adds to the mood and makes it look great
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Mister-Saturn In reply to BlackxTigris [2009-10-02 11:45:22 +0000 UTC]
Well I could imagine ^^ ;
It was a very dark story and such.
But yeah, thanks :3
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Mister-Saturn In reply to Shaon [2009-10-02 11:45:51 +0000 UTC]
You know...funny thing is that wasn't intentional at all |D ;;
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Reth27 [2009-10-01 07:38:51 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah, Ruby Quest! I never thought that anything on 4chan could have such suspenseful plot as this story did! I knew I was hooked the moment that bear creature showed up! Nice work on this too, you did a good job on the details.(I especially like Red's smile, and his taunt in the background.)
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Mister-Saturn In reply to Reth27 [2009-10-01 11:43:28 +0000 UTC]
Thanks |D
Yeah, man I wish I was there when it was going on but I'm not gonna lie, until I read this I've never been on 4chan before |D ;;
But yeah, very suspensful. Everything involving Subject 5 creeped me the hell out |D ;;;
(And thanks |3)
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giygaswar [2009-10-01 07:12:27 +0000 UTC]
Ruby Quest sounds nice
you said iit was over but
i wanna read it to can y ive me the link plz?
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Mister-Saturn In reply to giygaswar [2009-10-01 11:44:25 +0000 UTC]
Well nice may not be the best word. More like awesomely creepy |D
Yeah it's over unfortunately but that's why the archives are there. I put a link at the end of the artist's comments I think and if not then I put one in my journal too.
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giygaswar In reply to Mister-Saturn [2009-10-01 19:53:39 +0000 UTC]
ok thanks im readig the story some parts seam rnadom tho its still pretty good :3
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Mister-Saturn In reply to giygaswar [2009-10-01 21:16:49 +0000 UTC]
Yeah some of it's kind of weird. Remember it was a game though so there's a lot of wandering around to places to solve puzzles |D ;
And yeah the people on 4chan are weird so you're going to hear a lot of weird suggestions.
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giygaswar In reply to Mister-Saturn [2009-10-02 12:38:53 +0000 UTC]
it was weird but still fn i can't say it was creepy but itg was interesting didn't really get the ending tho
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Mister-Saturn In reply to giygaswar [2009-10-03 22:59:04 +0000 UTC]
I found some parts of it creepy. Some of it wasn't but some of it was. I dunno.
When the other person wakes up in the same position as Ruby? That was strange.
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Great-Prince-Laharl In reply to ??? [2009-10-01 02:50:07 +0000 UTC]
I never would have thought you capable of something so gory and grotesque
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Mister-Saturn In reply to Great-Prince-Laharl [2009-10-01 11:46:40 +0000 UTC]
Well, got to explore right? XD ;
Yeah I used to think I wasn't either but damn. And I'm not gonna lie, this was kind of fun to draw |D ;;;
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Great-Prince-Laharl In reply to Mister-Saturn [2009-10-01 18:49:02 +0000 UTC]
Its because its a new style. Its fun to do something new every now and then ;D
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Mister-Saturn In reply to Great-Prince-Laharl [2009-10-01 19:22:05 +0000 UTC]
That it is. And I've been trying to explore a few new things. I still have my generic doodling but I'll occasionally take some serious time and effort into things like this.
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Great-Prince-Laharl In reply to Mister-Saturn [2009-10-01 20:18:35 +0000 UTC]
Your effort shows well. How would you feel about drawing a serious and depressing Mother 3 picture?
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Mister-Saturn In reply to Great-Prince-Laharl [2009-10-01 21:15:57 +0000 UTC]
Eh, maybe. I'm not gonna lie, I haven't been in a hardcore M3 mood in a long while |D ;
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There-She-Is-Fan In reply to ??? [2009-10-01 01:18:55 +0000 UTC]
OMG lols XD I never expected to see a fanart about Ruby Quest for a long time! I think you did a great job X3
The dummy scares me though
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Mister-Saturn In reply to There-She-Is-Fan [2009-10-01 11:48:59 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I wasn't sure if I'd be hooked on it or anything but oh yeah. And thanks |3
Yeah the dummy's creepy...but honestly I think everything involving Subject 5 was the creepiest thing in Ruby Quest.
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There-She-Is-Fan In reply to Mister-Saturn [2009-10-02 01:49:21 +0000 UTC]
Lols XD I just freaked out at this big-ass piece of furnature in our garage thinking it was the dummy for some reason... The dummy is scary ;A;
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There-She-Is-Fan In reply to Mister-Saturn [2009-10-03 00:33:38 +0000 UTC]
yeah XD it still haunts me today
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Grahamtheman In reply to ??? [2009-09-30 23:28:02 +0000 UTC]
Well for starters the blood effects are considerably better than many I've seen. The double outlines definitely help to deliver the horrific-insane-evil-hell message/theme of the...whatever the heck those those things are, as well as the whole drawing itself. One visual effect I found to be very intriguing was that the (I-still-don't-know)'s were shaded with various sorts of light-gray. While the protagonists were left completely white. This greatly conveys their innocence as well as the urgency of the situation. To be honest, I can't find anything wrong with this picture. Maybe I'm just a bad critic -3-. Jk Oh well there is a small white area around the blood effects in the lower half of the picture. Whether this was intended or not, it feels very out-of-place.
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Mister-Saturn In reply to Grahamtheman [2009-10-01 11:52:18 +0000 UTC]
Oh well that's good to know. Afterall I do want to get that right, being a horror themed picture ^^ ;
And yeah I've tried it before. It just seems fitting, them scratchy lines and such.
Yeah all the characters/mutants in the back got a lot more of the shading. I actually shaded the main two some too but it's probably harder to see on the scan. But yeah they're still mostly white. But yeah that's a good way to look a it. I'm not good at symbolism but I seem to do it unintentionally |D ;;
Oh and yeah that was likely a little mistake.
Thanks, I always love getting critiques like this and you're pretty good at them too |D
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Grahamtheman In reply to Mister-Saturn [2009-10-01 19:32:44 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. Wait, "good at them"? Gee, thanks!
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Mister-Saturn In reply to Grahamtheman [2009-10-01 21:17:09 +0000 UTC]
I'm serious, you're good at critiques ^^ ;
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Mister-Saturn In reply to whatever4537 [2009-10-01 11:52:38 +0000 UTC]
Yeah it's pretty frigged up for me.
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pi-pikachuchu [2009-09-30 22:29:11 +0000 UTC]
awesomeness has claimed me again. really fantastical job
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Aerospine [2009-09-30 21:30:54 +0000 UTC]
(Too lazy to read, so will just admire the pic)
I got the perfect weapon for this situation. *Prepare's rei pistol* >:3.
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Mister-Saturn In reply to Aerospine [2009-10-01 11:56:49 +0000 UTC]
xDD ;;
Hoo boy. If only they had some kind of gun in their situation the whole thing would've been so much easier |D ;;
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Aerospine In reply to Mister-Saturn [2009-10-01 13:25:23 +0000 UTC]
Spirit gun would destroy them all :3.
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SunnyChan89 In reply to ??? [2009-09-30 21:06:43 +0000 UTC]
Creepiest thing ever, but it looks so awesome. <3
I had to look through your gallery for 15 minutes because I was gonna say they looked like Nabi and Doki from There She Is, but I forgot their names so I ended up looking through your entire gallery, rofl.
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Mister-Saturn In reply to SunnyChan89 [2009-10-01 11:57:43 +0000 UTC]
Thanks |D
Really? XDD ;;
I guess I could see what you mean seeing that they're a cat and a rabbit ^^ ;. But yeah, nice XD ;
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DamonKatu [2009-09-30 20:30:05 +0000 UTC]
OMG! Is that his eye on her head...I heard I gotmy eye on you... XD
Creepy cover!
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Mister-Saturn In reply to DamonKatu [2009-10-01 12:04:46 +0000 UTC]
No XD ;
That would be creepy though. It's actually her third eye. Yep. Tom loses his eye and she get's a third one. Kinda weird.
Inorite? I wanted to make it as creepy as possible.
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Mister-Saturn In reply to cooro1313 [2009-10-01 12:06:40 +0000 UTC]
I've never played Silent Hill but I've heard of it and I can see what you'd mean |D
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