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nerdinator286 — The Inadequacy of Me
Published: 2003-10-04 04:48:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 24
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Running into lost hopes that somehow things will get better. These thoughts that continuously shift through my head are driving me insane. The neverending feeling of worthlessness evades my every thought. It is the essence of my conciousness. Listening to this music, drowning it all away...Running into lost hopes that will soon fade away.Related content
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's like you wrote about me. Exactly how I feel these days. Dunno if it will ever fade away though. But I guess that's the pessimism in me talking. Heh.
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synactically i think it's awesome taht you didn't pause it out. the way your phrasing all runs together just like your emotions is an excellent device.
repetition is nice as well
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Hmm, a poet now eh? I like the parallelism and the descriptions. Good one
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