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okchickadee — Mini-Comic: Deflowering
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Published: 2008-03-25 06:04:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 7580; Favourites: 133; Downloads: 90
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I did it! I finished it! This is the mini-comic for my Aubergine zine.Originally this was going to be a tiny yuri comic for some contest or community or another, which is part of the reason it's not realistic at all. The other reason is I was totally self-indulgent. Ehehehe. :3 ...Hee. :<
I forced myself not to redraw any of the panels after inking, so there are a lot of weird mistakes in there.
I'm sorry if it makes no sense. I'm still learning how to form a clear and coherent narrative using single-panel pages!
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Comments: 33
Lesbian cloth-thief! Finally, a viable career option for me! 
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Very beautiful, your inkwork is gorgeous, and I really like your character interactions on every panel.
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i got the story XD
she steals other girls clothes
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Oh, I love this. 
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Althought I don,t get it, but still....... it's impressive how U draw it..
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i think the message came out just fine, the title and last panel are perfectly cohesive, i love it vurrry vurry much
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Lovely! I really, really love the face when she is leaving with the coat.
Roy.
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nice inking! and the story is understandable don't worry 
and i love yuri but shh. secret. o 3O
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awww, cute little lesbian lovers and cheating oh myyyy~
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I am absolutely enamored of this comic. You have a brilliant style. Keep it up!
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beautiful! ...did i mentioned, that i really like your style?
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i love this! it's a really great little mini comic.
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i lovvved it aesthetically but i must confess i was a little lost in the part where she takes the girls' clothes
but that was the only thing
everything else
was superrr radd
how the party flows and her face in the end when she's punched !! ha
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yes, awesome,very dynamic, and gorgeus drawings.
the things-not-words idea is really nice , even if maybe that (10) is the panel i like less. I don't know it seems a little different from the others.
anyway, great work, I oh so like you : D
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I really like how you draw.
This is awesome.
The 3rd panel is my favorate, I like that hair.
nice nice nice.
draw more comix.
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I love images 3-6 in this sequence the most, the story makes perfect sense and I like the use of objects instead of words in those special moments. There's so much movement!
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ahhh you're so amazing, I love how you do ink. All your stuff is so original and beautiful and "arty"
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